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The Oathbound by Mercedes Lackey

kathydavie's review against another edition

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4.0

First in the Vows & Honor fantasy trilogy for Young Adults and revolving around a woman warrior and a sorceress. The couple focus is on the adventures of Tarma and Kethry and her geased spellsword, Need. It is part of Lackey's Valdemar universe and is set in Valdemar - 1270 AF (After Founding).

If you're interested, there is a chronological listing of the Valdemar books on my website.

My Take
It's a feel-good story with great characters . . . okay, versus some bad guys. Ya gotta have some conflict! Fortunately, the ladies need to make a name for themselves, if Tarma wants to keep her Clan alive, or rather, make it come back to life. Then of course, there's the need Kethry has to keep moving and help people.

Those necessary adventures range the gamut from easy to those requiring guile to sword skill to magic to all of the above. It's one long story of short stories, and we hear about them through third person dual protagonist point-of-view from Tamra's and Kethry's perspectives. This POV also makes this a primarily character-driven story that requires action — adventure.

It is funny that their style of traveling is more Kethry's speed than Tarma's, seeing as how Tarma is more of a wanderer than Kethry.

Some of the things I adore about Lackey's Valdemar series is the equality between men and women and her promotion of children's confidence, that the adults have faith in children's abilities.

It takes a bit for the story's main plot to come out, and Need is quite helpful, as she "needs" to champion women in trouble.

Tarma and Kethry were so lucky to meet Justin Twoblade and Ikan Dryvale, and I suspect we'll be seeing more of these two in future stories.

I do like the point the Star-Eyed makes to Kethry, that she's but one face of Kethry's own Lady Windborn. And ain't that the truth for us as well.

The Story
They've achieved their common goal, and Tarma and Kethry are at a loss for what to do next with their lives.

It's with the advice from several people that lead the two women on their course of adventure after adventure.

The Characters
Her entire clan slain by brigands, Tarma shena Tale’sedrin of the Clan Tale'sedrin (Children of the Hawk) of the Shin'a'in, became sword-sworn when she vowed blood revenge on the murderers. Kessira is her Shin'a'in-bred mare. Dharin had been her love. Hellsbane will become Tarma's battlesteed. Warrl is the kyree who bonds to Tarma.

Born to House Pheregrul, Kethry shena Tale-sedrin, a.k.a. Kethryveris, was sold into a hateful "marriage" by her eight-years-older brother, Kavin, a.k.a. Kavinestral. Tildy had been her old nurse. Rodi is her safe, smart mule. Ironheart will become Kethry's battlesteed.

Mornedealth is . . .
. . . the town where Kethry was born. The Fifty Families are the noble born of Mornedealth, and there are five factions among the wilder offspring: Blue (led by Kavin), Green (led by Helansevrith), Red, Yellow, and Black. The status-hungry Wethes Goldmarchant was a wealthy banker with a penchant for young girls. Regal is Wethes' house mage. Jervac is a guard at the gate.

The Broken Sword is an inn owned by Hadell who had once served with Jervac. Lakea is Hadell's daughter and the stable hand.

Justin Twoblade and Ikan Dryvale are well-qualified mercenaries who make friends with Tarma and Kethry. Gesta is a friend of Dryvale's, and she has a grudge against Wethes; so does Cat. Jonis Revelath, Ikan's father, is the legal counsel for half the Fifty.

In Lythecare, Sir Skolte hires Tarma and Kethry to escort Darthela, his flirtatious bride-to-be to his home in Fromish. Viscount Hathkel. In Felwether, Lady Myria is accused of murdering her husband, the cheapskate Lord Corbie. Syrtin is Myria's newborn son. His seneschal is his bastard brother and right hand man. Katran is one of Myria's servants. Istan is a torch-bearer. In Delton, Leland is a young sorcerer who accidentally summons Thalhkarsh, one nasty demon. In yet another town, Grumio is one of a group of merchants with a transportation issue. Lena is his missing niece and heir. Tedric is a hired sword Tarma vaguely remembers. Prince Lothar, a.k.a. the Looney, does awful things to bad guys.

Oskar is the host of this tavern. Nemor is the priest of Anatheir of the Purifying Flame who doesn't believe evil really exists. Brother Thoser is the one who questioned the cursed lady. One-Eye Tham is a beggar.

Clan Liha-irden is . . .
. . . another Shin'a'in clan that helped Tarma after the massacre. Shelana instructs their children in swordwork.

Living and protecting the Dhorisha Plains, Shin'a'in breed their horses for intelligence, agility, strength, and endurance.

The White Winds is . . .
. . . a powerful school of sorcery. Baryl Longarm is one of the guards. Gervase, a hertasi, a.k.a. the Lizard Wizard, became a High Adept. Cinsley became Gervase's teacher. There is an excellent short story in here that takes me back to events in The Black Gryphon, Mage Wars 1 (1000-1 BF). Melania is one of the teachers.

The Tale'edras are . . .
. . . the Hawkbrothers. Moonsong k'Vala is a Hawkbrother Adept.

Gregoth and his men had slaughtered Clan Tale'sedrin. Osberg had stolen the amber necklace Dharin had given Tarma. Lastel Longknife was the leader of another band of bandits.

Kal'enedral are the Sword Sworn, the Warriors of the Shin'a'in. The Star-Eyed is what the Shin'a'in call their Goddess of the South Wind or the Warrior. She'enedra is an endearment.

There are three types of magic: power from within one's self, including the mind-magic of Valdemar; power created by living things; and, creatures who are not of this world, such as those from the Abyssal Plane. The Pelagir Hills are notorious for changelings and weird monsters (see the Mage Wars sub series.) Kyree, a Pelagir-style wolf who is human smart with some magic, has three sexes: male, female, and neuter. This last tend to wander off and explore the world.

The Cover and Title
The cover has a weird Art Deco vibe of golden hawks against black and forming the background with Tamra in her black, long locks flying in the wind, and a huge sword raised over her head. In the forefront is a severe-looking Kethry wearing a forehead necklace with five pendants. Her gown appears to be a tapestry style with a fitted upper and flaring skirt. She carries Need in a scabbard on her back. At the top is an info blurb. Starting at Kethry's waist is a pale purplish pink box framed in purple with text all in black. The title is at the top with the series info below that and the author's name at the bottom.

The title is the vow that Tarma and Kethry have made and has united them as The Oathbound.

ptaradactyl's review against another edition

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adventurous hopeful medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

2.25

It was interesting, but uneven. Big chunks of time would pass without you quite knowing how or why. 

meganagain's review against another edition

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adventurous dark tense slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

2.5

milesofmyles's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional funny fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.75

skycrane's review against another edition

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3.0

This feels much more like a collection of stories than a novel. It follows Tarma and Kethry as they establish themselves as a mercenary duo through a series of difficult or interesting jobs. Some of them were quite fun to read, but in my opinion the last couple bring the book down; they aren't that long, but still felt like a real slog to get through. The nature of magic gets explored in more detail, and it really demystifies the world. The sword Need in particular goes from feeling like a powerful eldritch artefact with a mind of its own to an appliance with a few basic functions.

I've read other novels from this era of fantasy (though to be fair, not many), but even among them this feels like a real throwback to the early days of the genre. I think that's probably deliberate, this is after all a take on the classic sword and sorcery adventure but from a female perspective. Some elements feel dated in a way that's almost kind of gross, like the "justice" the heroes enact on the bandit leader in Chapter 8. Also, basically every female character named or mentioned has been raped. The book is basically about women protecting women, or at least taking revenge on their killers. Still not really sure what to think about that.

badmiracle's review

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adventurous medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

4.0

peashooterpatty's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional funny lighthearted medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.75

halemke's review against another edition

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adventurous dark

3.5

getevied's review against another edition

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adventurous medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.5

I enjoyed the episodic nature of the story, and the classic fantasy elements. Can't go past a cozy inn! Yes there are multiple instances of SA that seem to be brushed past, but considering the age of the book I'd say it was well ahead of its time. 

slpchristy's review against another edition

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adventurous dark emotional fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

3.25