Reviews tagging 'Homophobia'

Finn's Fantasy by K.C. Wells

1 review

menomica's review

lighthearted fast-paced

• Plot- or character-driven? Character
• Strong character development? N/A
• Loveable characters? No
• Diverse cast of characters? No
• Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

“For weeks, you were nothing but a fantasy. A guy I dreamed about, but never thought I’d find the courage to speak to.” “And now?”
Finn squeezed his hand. “I couldn’t dream of being with anyone else.”

K.C. Wells… you’re not a great writer but I think there’s hope for you yet. Maybe pick up some writing classes at a local community college. There’s potential. 🤷🏾‍♀️
So, the thing is, I did not care about Finn or his friends at awl. They were so… generic and boring. I was actually invested in Joel’s storyline.

Although Nate did piss me off with how bad he was olympic-jumping to conclusions, my god.

Also, if Laura is 15, why is she written like an 8-12 year old? 🤨 Let’s be a bit more serious here, folks.

I liked the whole theme of family with Joel, and how him and Carrie were still good friends even after their divorce. If the series followed people like Joel, I’d be a bit more inclined. Not too much, though, cause the writing was like… unseasoned chicken. Not bad, just very bland. 
Personally I thought Joel and Finn were very boring and bland as a couple, I felt like no chemistry with them. But they were boring and bland together, so that’s all that matters.

---

Content Warnings

Minor: Homophobia

There is a moment were they talk about someone’s absent mom being a drug addict, and the way they discuss her and her addiction is lowkey giving «dr*ggies just make bad habits nerrrh pull yourself up by your bootstraps nerrrh,» and it was like… *side eye* Like not explicitly but it did make me tilt my head a bit.