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Veronica Roth

3.3 AVERAGE


Sigh, I really wanted to like this book. I read the other two because I couldn't put them down. I continued reading this book because I wanted to read the conclusion of the other two books- but honestly a lot of the time if felt almost like /work/ to read the book because it was so boring!

Roth's said that she didn't know where the books were headed when she started writing them- and it seems like she really didn't have any idea at all! When you write a book like this with a big reveal, you have to at least have some idea of what's going on the entire series so that the big reveal actually makes sense. The entire book just felt really lazy. Also, I agree with everyone that Four and Tris's voice sounded EXACTLY THE SAME. When I first started reading the book, I was hoping she'd do something interesting with the two voices...but nope. There was only one reason she needed his narration...

As for the ending- I'm going to go against popular opinion here. I thought the ending was actually the most interesting and well written parts of the book. Was it necessary, did it make sense for the situation to even happen, etc etc? Nope! But it's the only part of the book where I actually wanted to keep reading (the last 40 pages or so). The only part of the book where I felt some emotion. Only part where the character acted like the character would in that situation (though the character probably should never have been in that situation to begin with, because it made no sense, but I digress).

Basically, I think the only plan Roth had for the end of the series was that one big part. She didn't really think out any other part of the book. So save yourself some time, read the last 50 pages of the book (don't worry, it won't make any more sense what's going on if you actually read the whole thing), feel really sad, and move on.

I thought it was good and still pretty exciting even though I heard from a lot of people that it sucked or rambled on, but thanks for the depression Veronica Roth. Tobias, I fucking love you so fucking much.
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avaeu's review against another edition

DID NOT FINISH: 44%

thinking about
tris dying

Plot: ⭐️
Characters: ⭐️
World Building: ⭐️⭐️
Twists: ⭐️
Enjoyment: ⭐️

Edit: There were some bits towards the end that helped bump this to a 2 ⭐️ book.

This was a very boring book that I had to force myself to finish.
The plot was terrible, the science was awful and the ending was lame.

Unfortunately, this book didn't live up to it's predecessors. Roth seemed to lose focus as she went along. Too many plots that were not needed,too many conspiracies. She also chose to write from two different perspectives, Tobias and Tris; but there were no narrative differences between the two. I had to keep going back to check whose perspective I was reading from. I do give Roth credit for making a big choice regarding her lead (no spoilers) that many other ya authors would never make. I wish she had streamlined the story more, and continued to make it about Tris. It felt under-developed in many places and over-developed in others. Sadly, a disappointing end to what could have been a great trilogy.

I was contemplating giving the book 3 stars. After reading through the first two books, I found the third one truly frustrating. It was extremely rushed, there was never a moment in which a huge conspiracy was not being uncovered, a cataclysmic event looming, or one of my favourite characters being killed.

In the first two books I felt like I could not stop reading. Here I had to take pauses at times – the tension was just too exhausting, the reading too tiring... I find that making all parts of a book filled with action and never-ending thrill really defeats the purpose in the end – there is too little to ground those moments in, to set them against, to make them feel special.

Also, I really do not buy into the idea of constantly rushing from one rebellion into another. The plot felt very thin, sketchy, even downright illogical and disappointing in places. It should have been fleshed out much more; the book could easily have been split into two or even three parts. As it stands, there is a certain lack of substance to it, which makes it feel too much like a lazy attempt of the author to finally get the story over with. Almost as if at some point she took all the main plot ideas she had and hastily hashed them into a barely coherent story.

Furthermore, I think there are patterns that it is unwise to repeat too often in a book. If all that we believe about its world is turned upside-down once, that is indeed a neat trick on the part of the author. However, if it keeps turning upside down every ten minutes or so, the joke is prone to becoming rather stale.

In any case, I was ready to give the book 3 stars. What made me change my mind and add the fourth star was, strangely enough, its ending. It was devastating and I hate the author for it with a passion. But it was also great in so many ways. In the first two books we were confronted with several very different kinds of nobility and bravery. The ending of the third one portrays yet another kind, which may be the greatest of all. The bravery to go on when everything around you falls apart and it seems like there is nothing you can hope, or live for any more.

I say that for this unlikely and most unwelcome feat, the book deserves an extra star, if any book does.

gwennie_'s review against another edition

DID NOT FINISH: 19%

utter ass

This has taken me MONTHS to read! Really disappointed in the book and it went THAT way. Surely there was no need?!! I suppose not all books can have the ending we all think they should.... It's getting a meh! From me.

After being absolutely in love with the first two books, this one was just kind of disappointing to me.. I really wish I could say that it was amazing :( I was confused a lot with the two perspectives. Going from reading the first two only from Tris' to suddenly hearing Tobias', ah it just threw me off. I still think it's a great series though, especially if you consider how young Veronica is and how this is her first series.

The emotional turmoil I experienced at the hands of this book was completely and utterly devastating. I cried for an estimate of an hour an a half, and then dry heaved for about ten to fifteen minutes. I cant say why, because while I doubt anyone would have a desire to read my reviews, I don't want anyone who does have the desire to experience any serious spoilers.
Shifting to the actual story, I love the setting, character development and the relationships, especially Tris and Tobias. I love them to pieces. The storyline was so different from what i expected. It took my heart and everything I believed in and thee it in the dirt, an then did a little river dance on my soul. I don't know if I love or hate Veronica Roth anymore.
Despite all the crying an all the tension and anxiety, I loved it to death.