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Fable by Adrienne Young

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cynicalraven's review against another edition

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adventurous fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix

3.0

Mediocre. 

La trama: la protagonista, cresciuta sulla nave di suo padre, viene abbandonata da questi su un'isola a 14 anni a seguito di una tempesta che affonda suddetta nave. La ragazza tenterà di racimolare denaro sufficiente per pagarsi un viaggio in nave alla ricerca del padre. 

La trama del libro poteva essere anche interessante, se non fosse stata rovinata da insta-love, plot twist troppo convenienti e refusi. 

Ad esempio la protagonista afferma di essersi cucita una tasca interna nei vestiti per tenere dei soldi al sicuro. Nel capitolo seguente dice che non ha mai tenuto in mano un ago. 

Oppure, la protagonista viene imbarcata su una nave, in cui soffre la fame per due/tre giorni perché non ha soldi per potersi comprare da mangiare e la ciurma non le offre nulla. È lasciato intendere che non le danno nemmeno acqua, quindi a meno che non si sia bevuta l'acqua del mare (chiaramente non lo ha fatto, sarebbe morta) non si sa come abbia fatto a sopravvivere. 

In una parte del libro la ciurma si ritrova le vele della nave tagliate, e nessun veliere vuole confezionarne di nuove. Guarda caso, in città c'è un sarto che era un noto veliere in un'altra città. Guarda caso, un membro della ciurma ha salvato la vita a tale uomo e quindi deve loro un favore.

Il libro avrebbe potuto essere più interessante se l'autrice non avesse deciso di inserire una storia d'amore tanto per fra la protagonista e il secondo essere umano di genere maschile che la protagonista incontra.
il secondo, perché il primo lo ha quasi ammazzato
Ragazzo che ovviamente si è innamorato di lei appena l'ha vista.
e il loro primo bacio è stato in apnea sott'acqua, CON TANTO DI LINGUA, come non abbiano fatto ad annegare non lo so


L'autrice sembra aver deciso di voler infilare nel libro quanti più termini marinareschi possibili, tanto per far capire al lettore che lei sa di cosa sta parlando e che la storia è ambientata in mare. Specialmente nelle prime 50 pagine, il che rende un po' faticosa la lettura. Avrei inserito un mini glossario o delle note per spiegare di cosa si sta parlando.

Ultima nota, la mappa del mondo, che trovo imbarazzante. Dico solo che ci sono *5* luoghi nominati sulla mappa. Cinque.  

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natashaleighton_'s review against another edition

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adventurous mysterious medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes

4.0


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viviette's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional mysterious tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

Wow. Just wow. Adrienne Young’s writing has improved by a million times since Sky in the Deep. The characters are much more developed and the story is pretty smooth. I’m obsessed and excited to read the next book!

Reread 1/6/24 - Still a 5/5. I love this story and I love the water. It’s just so charming and magical without the use of literal magic! I cannot and will not tolerate people saying that West and Fable have no chemistry either since they are most definitely made for each other. Not only that, it’s a slow burn and there are plenty of romantic moments leading up to their kiss. I wish people would stop expecting smut in a YA novel. This is what a real relationship is y’all, it’s the subtleties along with the craziness. Get over your own personal fantasies…

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sarahamuller1's review against another edition

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adventurous dark tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.5


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thefemale_nickmiller's review against another edition

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adventurous inspiring mysterious reflective tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0


making that scar a map was heartbreaking but also genius.

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extrafolklore's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional inspiring slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.5


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shannnne_reads_words's review against another edition

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adventurous medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes

3.0


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katievallin's review against another edition

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adventurous dark emotional hopeful mysterious reflective sad tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.75


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kassidyreads's review against another edition

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adventurous slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

3.5


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fromjuliereads's review against another edition

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adventurous dark mysterious medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.5

I enjoyed this well enough! It was a quick read and some parts were fun. The twist was good - I thought it would go a different way! I liked the characters. I think there were just some things that bugged me. The characters aren't very well developed for how many there are - I had to keep reminding myself who the hell Hamish was 😅 I think there was too much "keeping secrets" and it made the characters under developed. And I obviously haven't read the second book but I feel like things could have been cut to be one book... 

My biggest annoyance? Fable continually refers to her mom by her first name which I found so weird for a teen. It made sense for her dad but not for her mom, who she was close to and lost... 
Anyways. If I can find the second book inexpensive then I might read it 😅

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