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janif49's review
1.0
This was so, so bad. The writing was choppy, editing non-existent and characters unlikable, unpolished and 2dimensional.
The story was so rushed. No world building, no character development and just a pure waste of my time.
On top of hating the story it is part of the new trend to make more money for less story. Instead of a conclusion with a slight cliff hanger it just stops. The trend drives me mad! If I wanted to read a few chapters and stop reading I would. Frankly by the time part two of whatever book comes out I'm no longer interested! I can't wait for chapter books to stop!
The story was so rushed. No world building, no character development and just a pure waste of my time.
On top of hating the story it is part of the new trend to make more money for less story. Instead of a conclusion with a slight cliff hanger it just stops. The trend drives me mad! If I wanted to read a few chapters and stop reading I would. Frankly by the time part two of whatever book comes out I'm no longer interested! I can't wait for chapter books to stop!
talldrinkofdietcoke's review
4.0
I liked this. They are both a little nuts abs the end was off but since there's another book and it just picks up where this one ended, no biggie.
lynn_the_greyhound_mum's review
3.0
Luke was a little too nice too quickly. Liked the story and look forward to more in this series to see where things go.
salallen's review
1.0
Found it boring from the word Go, the main character seemed a bit up herself and annoyed me. DNF!
tarazagata's review
4.0
Wow I can't wait for the next book... I can't wait to hear what Luke tells Dallas about everything and why he was protecting her!!! Hot scenes alpha male tattoos what more can a girl ask for... One thing less typos but that I was able to over look
titmony's review
1.0
A HUGE disappointment ! The story has been dragged out and pfff the author does not even explain the big why of the story. You will have to wait the next book?!
I wish we had Luke pov as well. And did not connect with the heroine, she was changing her mine every 5 min
I wish we had Luke pov as well. And did not connect with the heroine, she was changing her mine every 5 min
sjharper's review
3.0
I was little thrown off with Dallas attitude. She reminded me to much of the girls in high school everyone hated. yet she got better as book went on. Lots of unanswered questions which leads me to next book. Hopefully her attitude continues to improve through out it.
ivettexandrea's review
3.0
Debo decir que el prologo me explico más de lo que me explico todo el libro, pero de una buena forma diré que el contenido me gusto y la forma de la escritora es buena -no magnifica, pero buena-.
Con esta sería la tercera vez que no me enamoro y sueño con el macho alfa, no por falta de información pero encontré que la escritora pudo habernos dado algún detalle de este chico, me dejo intrigada más que enamorada como suele suceder con los machos de los libros.
Según lo que decía de la chica es que era una perra, una desgraciada y la peor persona... ¿uum? juro que yo na la vi, osea... ya enserio si era una ¡PERRA! con todas sus letras osea una P-E-R-R-A se tendría que haber mostrado un poco más, por favor bastante más.
Me gusto, lo recomiendo pero veamos que no les prometo el mejor libro del mes o del año.
Con esta sería la tercera vez que no me enamoro y sueño con el macho alfa, no por falta de información pero encontré que la escritora pudo habernos dado algún detalle de este chico, me dejo intrigada más que enamorada como suele suceder con los machos de los libros.
Según lo que decía de la chica es que era una perra, una desgraciada y la peor persona... ¿uum? juro que yo na la vi, osea... ya enserio si era una ¡PERRA! con todas sus letras osea una P-E-R-R-A se tendría que haber mostrado un poco más, por favor bastante más.
Me gusto, lo recomiendo pero veamos que no les prometo el mejor libro del mes o del año.
candymosley1's review
I didn't finish this book due to some issues I had with how quickly the story was playing out and the fact I just wasn't getting into the main girl character. The main guy had lots of potential. I might go back again later.