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Final Stretch by Alison Hendricks

liza5326's review

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3.0

Not my favorite book by Alison Hendricks, but still enjoyable. I just think there was a lot more potential and I didn't like how fast Travis got over the scandal, especially when he had been planning on proposing to the jackass that night. But I did like Shane and Travis together and definitely want to read Jake's book!

tltravis's review

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5.0

Really enjoyable

It's funny how quickly things change in our lives. Just when you think there's only be thing that can make you happy, someone comes along who completes you.

ladydewinter's review

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2.0

That was pretty disappointing. Alison Hendricks tends to have good ideas - intriguing settings and character constellations - but sadly her stories suffer from feeling too rushed, from too much telling and from staying too superficial.

Here, we meet Travis, a successful NFL player whose career is suddenly brought to a stop by a sex tape his fame-hungry boyfriend published. He moves to his estranged brother, who is a teacher in Glen Sprinhs, a small town in Kentucky. That's where he meets Shane, his brother's best friend. Shane used to be a professional jockey until a tragic incident five years ago, and now he runs a farm caring for horses. He and Travis find themselves attracted to each other immediately, but how can they have a future when Travis is only waiting until the waves of his scandal have calmed down?

I really liked the setting, and I didn't even mind them being instantly attracted to each other - except that they move on the attraction too soon and then everything just feels too rushed. There are plenty of things that could've been explored in this story, but all problems are resolved way too easily and thus unconvincingly. I do think her stories have a lot of potential, but so far Alison Hendricks hasn't used that well. She also has a tendency to use synonyms in inappropriate places - like "garment" instead of "jeans" to avoid repetitions, I guess, but it just sounded off.

I previously enjoyed some of her books, but they're never quite as good as they could be, and this one frustrated me more than anything. I will probably still check out her books because damn it, I love the settings. And I think she can do better. Let's hope she will.

cadiva's review

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4.0

Loved this intro to a new series from Alison Hendricks

Low angst, moderate steam, ranch setting, hot NFL player, ex jockey, what more could you ask for?!

For me, not much as I just like Alison Hendricks' style of writing. This one centres around Travis, mired in a scandal and with a broken heart after the guy he was going to propose to leaks a sex tape.

I loved Travis, he was strong in character but with a vulnerability which came from never knowing anything but football. His relationship with his older brother was strained but you could sense within him the desire to make changes.

Shane also was flawed and his experiences had changed him in a different way, he was cautious and held back a bit but he held such passion inside.

Together they were just beautifully sweet and I'm looking forward to more in this setting.

Oh and the big gesture Shane makes - awesome.
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