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graceskate's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
Graphic: Confinement, Emotional abuse, Toxic relationship, and Gaslighting
Moderate: Domestic abuse, Mental illness, Misogyny, Panic attacks/disorders, Physical abuse, Racism, Sexism, Sexual content, Violence, Xenophobia, and Classism
Minor: Body horror, Cursing, Death, Eating disorder, Gore, Sexual violence, Torture, Blood, Vomit, Stalking, Death of parent, Abandonment, Alcohol, War, and Injury/Injury detail
waterwolves's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Moderate: Body horror, Confinement, Death, Domestic abuse, Eating disorder, Gore, Misogyny, Panic attacks/disorders, Sexism, Toxic relationship, Violence, Blood, Vomit, Murder, Gaslighting, War, and Injury/Injury detail
sophiesometimesreads's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.0
1) Writing
The writing was not good. I don't enjoy how it's written conversationally and how there are so many instances in which sentences and thoughts aren't finished. The writing is also very repetitive, and the same phrases are used over and over. This was an issue I also had with the first book and I see that it was not resolved here. SJM loves to explain things as "barking", so much so that it was used twice in two different contexts within five pages... and it's not even a good adjective to use. There's so many other ways to explain sore muscles. This time, she also latched on to the phrases "vulgar gesture" and "loosed a breath", and overused them. Everyone also growled like an animal all the time and there was so much talk of everyone's scent that I felt like I was back in Twilight. Oh, and one more thing, explaining men to look at the women with "predatory intent" was not sexy and very uncomfortable, yet this phrase was used multiple times in the book.
I also really wanted more atmospheric description, but it fell short for me. I think the book could've been way better if it had been written in third person not first as I didn't particularly like Feyre as a character (more on that later) and I felt we lost a lot of the story because we only get her singular perspective. There was a lot of info dumping in big chunks of dialogue as a result of it being in first person, and even when she did swap to dual POV towards the end, Rhysand's voice sounded very similar to Feyre's.
2) Pacing
The pacing was all over the place. The book was definitely better than the first in this respect, though that's not a very high bar to jump over. The plot was moving throughout the whole book and things were happening, but I think the focus was on the wrong events. The last 80 or so pages were the best, just like the last novel, and I think these events should have been much longer and drawn out in this book, but they seemed rushed. The pacing through the middle was slow and I honestly got bored halfway through, such that I had to pick up the audiobook to get me through it. The book could've been a lot shorter with no loss of actual substance, in my opinion.
3) Characters
Firstly, can I just say that literally every single character in this book needs to take anger management classes. And get therapy, I hope they offer that in Prythian too.
Some people say SJM writes amazing characters but I just can't say I resonated with or cared about most of them at all. Rhysand and his gang were more interesting than those in the Spring Court, but I just didn't feel like we got enough depth to them to really feel for them and understand their perspectives. I also felt like we had a really quick turn around in characters where their personalities just changed, particularly Rhysand and Tamlin. It was explained off as "acting a part" but it felt like a cheap explanation as there was little to no foreshadowing to this in the first book. I also didn't like Feyre as a character. She never listens to anyone then wonders why she gets herself into bad positions. I understand characters can be frustrating, morally grey and unlikeable for the sake of the story, but the writing made me feel like some of her thoughts and actions weren't even justified for the sake of the plot. I also just cannot get past the fact MULTIPLE hundred-year-old men are attracted to a literal teenager who definitely acts her age...
4) Plot
There was so much potential with the plot, and I do really like the premise of the books; however, I just don't feel like the execution was there. It's a mix of the writing and pacing that took away from the plot, which was actually the strongest part of this book. I also didn't care for the romance plot, mostly because I didn't care about the characters, and I think the book would've been better without it, or at least with less focus on it. Or maybe I just don't like the fated mates trope, it is basically instalove for fantasy and I am not a fan of instalove... Additionally, for a book people claim to be super spicy, there was fairly little spice in this book, with only three scenes in two chapters. Not complaint, though, as I'm not a spice lover when it comes to books, it was just surprising.
I could go on and on about this book but hopefully that sums it up enough to justify my rating of this beloved series. Take what you want from this review. Once I came down from the high of the last 15% of the book, I realised that I will, in fact, be DNFing this series and not continuing. It's not worth my time for 100 pages of semi interesting content out of 600+ pages.
Graphic: Sexual content and Violence
Moderate: Sexism, Toxic relationship, and Blood
timbsy's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
5.0
Graphic: Eating disorder and Vomit
Moderate: Emotional abuse, Mental illness, Misogyny, Sexism, and Violence
pandalesque's review against another edition
3.5
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- I like S.J.M.'s descriptions of cities, landscapes and clothes
- I think the basis/premise of the world is very interesting
- I enjoy fantasy stories where the MCs train and get to know their powers like in this story and I enjoy the fight scenes
- I do like that the focus is on different relationships (friendships and romantic – found family)
- I am invested enough to be curious how the story continues/I want to finish the series
- I liked that they flirted via letters/texts (kinda made it feel a little 21st century)
- Not a fan of her endings until now
- Though I liked the descriptions it is a long ass book.
- maybe I'm not getting it but sometimes I don't believe the threads of some plots come together so that they "make sense" to me. Sometimes I got confused by the world building or the magic system rules or the change in behavior or descriptions of creatures.
-> Either I don't get it but mostly I feel like I notice how she introduces/ changes certain characters, plot points to get the story where she wants to. But I don't feel like it's quite built in nicely/naturally which takes me out of the story.- Why do girls already mature with 14 like humans even though they're faey?
How they age and their development stages are confusing
- Why do girls already mature with 14 like humans even though they're faey?
- especially the end and the cauldron and book story seems so weird and inconsistent...
... also that the solution seems to be her giving herself up to Tamlin again? I don't get it tbh (for the advancement of the plot and character yes but again, felt the execution lacked) - the trials with the weaver, bone carver, orbe... don't seem very necessary, also the reasons behind why they encountered them are more than a little weak /not natural, except to further the romance/character development get the story where she wants
- Very cringe at times, mostly concerning the romance plot(s)/wording (but I have that with pretty much any romance)
- Sometimes they say: "that's his/her story to tell..." other times people go in depths about trauma's others have endured...
- Less spice than advertised
- very fast character development/pivots:
- Don't think the whole "Tamlin turning bad"-storyline is convincing enough for me and he seems dafter, also ....not necessary. I can imagine maybe the author wanted to create a situation where the readers may reflect in the sense of: "everybody could end up in a abusive relationship", "people can change", "people aren't what they seem"... I can appreciate that.... Or maybe it's just so we automatically "ship" the new couple. but I believe it could be told more convincingly.
- Feyre herself...
Spice/smut 🔥2.3/5
Graphic: Confinement, Physical abuse, Violence, and Vomit
Moderate: Death, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Genocide, Sexism, Sexual assault, Torture, Toxic relationship, Fire/Fire injury, and Dysphoria
miagic_tome's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Panic attacks/disorders, Sexual content, Torture, and Blood
Moderate: Confinement, Sexism, Sexual assault, and Vomit
Minor: Rape and Kidnapping
maregred's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
2.0
Graphic: Sexual content, Toxic relationship, Violence, and Injury/Injury detail
Moderate: Confinement, Death, Death of parent, and Classism
Minor: Sexism, Torture, Toxic relationship, Kidnapping, and Toxic friendship
amutrion's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
Graphic: Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Mental illness, Misogyny, Sexism, Medical trauma, Stalking, Gaslighting, and Sexual harassment
amartin48's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
That, and a TON of plot happened in this book.
I won't say it's the most beautifully written, nor is it a groundbreaking literary achievement, but this story captured my heart, and I look forward to reading it again.
Graphic: Body horror, Confinement, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Panic attacks/disorders, Sexual content, Kidnapping, and Grief
Moderate: Rape, Sexism, Torture, Toxic relationship, Violence, Vomit, Toxic friendship, Sexual harassment, and War
paigeinabook's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.75
Graphic: Ableism, Addiction, Animal cruelty, Bullying, Chronic illness, Confinement, Cursing, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Gore, Infidelity, Mental illness, Misogyny, Panic attacks/disorders, Physical abuse, Racial slurs, Sexism, Sexual content, Toxic relationship, Violence, Xenophobia, Blood, Excrement, Vomit, Kidnapping, Grief, Stalking, Gaslighting, Toxic friendship, Abandonment, War, and Injury/Injury detail