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nicola949's review
4.0
The following are my comments based directly on reading the story. Only brief but they sum up how I felt after reading the story:
The highlights were the mystery and intrigue, the unique way the characters met and the bravery shown by the MCs - Malachi in raising his brother and Travis when he stands up to tackle the bad guys and not slink back to his rich-boy existence. I liked the Italian setting, the gangster element and the happy ending. The downside? I wanted the MCs to have more on-page interaction and Malachi's actions at the beginning weren't ideal.
I was surprised to glance through other reviews of this story and see the more negative ones. I didn't read the prompt and maybe if I had, I might have responded to the story differently but I don't really think so. I liked it regardless of whether it fully addressed the photo prompt or not.
The highlights were the mystery and intrigue, the unique way the characters met and the bravery shown by the MCs - Malachi in raising his brother and Travis when he stands up to tackle the bad guys and not slink back to his rich-boy existence. I liked the Italian setting, the gangster element and the happy ending. The downside? I wanted the MCs to have more on-page interaction and Malachi's actions at the beginning weren't ideal.
I was surprised to glance through other reviews of this story and see the more negative ones. I didn't read the prompt and maybe if I had, I might have responded to the story differently but I don't really think so. I liked it regardless of whether it fully addressed the photo prompt or not.
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