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bethreadswhat's review
1.0
This was not it for me. The plot made no sense and there was barely any erotic content for it to be an ‘erotic story’…good effort though I guess.
annapsxx's review
3.0
I'm so happy that at the end it said there is going to be a full-length story. Thank god because this was not enough.
(Right now, this is free on Kindle
(Right now, this is free on Kindle
earthtonadia's review
3.0
The writing style was very engaging, but it was too vague to be considered an erotic novella.
crazy4bookscruz's review
3.0
quick and spooky
Definitely feel the spookiness for the season! I love the idea of the story and how the legend works into this romance.
It sure makes me want more from the story and this story but it was enjoyable all the same.
Definitely feel the spookiness for the season! I love the idea of the story and how the legend works into this romance.
It sure makes me want more from the story and this story but it was enjoyable all the same.
bimbette85's review
1.5
Eh…I wish there was more to it. It’s definitely a fun idea and can see where it wanted to go but fell short on the execution. If there is a full story, I’d probably read it but it would really need more substance and story to it. And a lot more spice to be called an “erotic” story.
frantic_vampire's review
mysterious
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? N/A
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? N/A
3.0
This was just okay. It felt like it was just a bunch of glossed over bits and pieces of different sex scenes. 🤷♀️
creativelifeofliz's review
adventurous
mysterious
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.0
Got what was promised, but hard to have stronger feelings for something so short.
chloe_p2002's review
dark
emotional
mysterious
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? N/A
- Strong character development? N/A
- Loveable characters? N/A
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? N/A
1.0
angeliquescollection's review
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? N/A
- Diverse cast of characters? N/A
- Flaws of characters a main focus? N/A
1.5
So I had some expectations about this try short story. I didn't know was somewhat a "fantasy" like horror romance story. For some reason I was expecting some 20 year olds to have a Halloween party and it'll go from there.
The was very poetic. I could see this being a play or something because the word choice was lyrical a way. But because of that, some things were a bit hard to understand. But that could totally be a user error lmao. I was trying to picture who was where doing what be the scenes didn't flow. It felt very choppy to say the least.
Also this was waaaaaaaay too vague to be considered a “erotica”. There was nothing erotic about this to me. I’d say it’s a Halloween short story with some sexually aspects but barely lol.
I'm rating this a 1.5 stars. I think that's pretty generous.
The was very poetic. I could see this being a play or something because the word choice was lyrical a way. But because of that, some things were a bit hard to understand. But that could totally be a user error lmao. I was trying to picture who was where doing what be the scenes didn't flow. It felt very choppy to say the least.
Also this was waaaaaaaay too vague to be considered a “erotica”. There was nothing erotic about this to me. I’d say it’s a Halloween short story with some sexually aspects but barely lol.
I'm rating this a 1.5 stars. I think that's pretty generous.