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Headless: An Erotic Short Story, by Aveda Vice

bookbruin's review against another edition

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3.0

Interesting erotic twist on The Legend of Sleepy Hollow. Super short MMF poly romance. Great premise, but the writing was a bit too convoluted and flowery at times. A quick and sexy Halloween read.

sadiereads_'s review against another edition

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No rating for this bc it’s a short one

The writing of this felt spooky and works really well with this retelling. I can’t wait for the full length

jhen_squared's review against another edition

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1.0

I expected more

I thought this would be a nice short smutty read but it just...all felt so vague and like it was trying to be pretty and metaphorical the entire time. I felt like I read a summary of a sex scene and not an actual sex scene. I personally didn't find it erotic (which I know this author was going for based on the writing but we were held at such a distance) and it barely felt smutty to me. Not for me but I can see why the reasons I didn't like it would work for others.

izzy_happyfornow's review against another edition

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4.0

3.5

I need the full length

mandyk's review

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This was my first work from this other so I don’t know if it’s just the brevity or the authors writing style, but I wasn’t really sure what was happening half the time. Weird in a fun way. MMF.

sar_go's review

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fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character

4.0

thebooknerd_smt's review against another edition

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4.0

Considering this was only about 17 pages, rating it was a bit difficult. That being said, I enjoyed it but of course was left wanting more

thereadinghammock_mserinv's review

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adventurous dark lighthearted fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? N/A
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? N/A

3.75


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emilygraziose's review

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fast-paced

3.0

juliafrat's review against another edition

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medium-paced

3.0