3.8 AVERAGE

adventurous medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

Teetering between 3 and 4 stars. I like Kate and her sass as well as the chemistry between her and Curran. But the chapters are super long, which is one of my biggest peeves (it might not bother others). Honestly this was a nice set up for the beginning of a series.

Rating: 🌕🌕🌕🌑🌑
Spice (scale at bottom ↓): 🔥
Tags: adult, single pov, badass fmc, crime solving, urban fantasy



To my complete surprise, I actually enjoyed the writing. I say “surprise”, because this book was published in 2007, and to say that I haven’t had much luck with books from that era is an understatement. There WERE a few instances in the prose where that typical early 2000s mindset reared its ugly head, mostly pertaining to gender roles and descriptions of physical appearances. But they were not nearly as bad as I feared. I’ve definitely DNFd books before for that reason.

Despite this being urban fantasy, there’s actually a decent bit of lore and world building, yet I never felt like I was force-fed paragraphs of exposition, as is often the case nowadays. Surprisingly, the world building felt pretty seamless.

I was also unnecessarily worried about the FMC. She’s described as a snarky badass, which usually means that I’m about to be presented with an immature class clown spouting badly written one-liners at the worst possible moments, not knowing when to shut up and be serious. “Sarcastic”, “badass” characters are difficult to write because often writers don’t know when to dial it down or they forget to counteract the snark with vulnerability. There’s a fine line before your “badass” character becomes a gimmicky caricature. But Kate Daniels is just the right amount of badass without coming across as cringe. And her snark is appropriately balanced with vulnerability. Her character overall felt pretty grounded and like someone I would actually want to be friends with.

I also really enjoyed the dialogue. It felt pretty effortless and organic. I often have issues with dialogue in modern books because it feels too much like the author having a conversation with themselves, like I can hear the author’s voice through the characters, and it takes me out of the story. That wasn’t the case here at all. The characters all feel decisively unique and distinct from each other. I often forgot I was reading all together, content to watch the movie in my head unfold.

My issues begin and end with the pacing. I was unbelievably bored throughout most of this book, because 70% of it is just Kate poring over documents, analyzing data, and occasionally meeting with some specialist who can help her answer some of the questions that come up as she analyzes said data. We just follow her along while she walks from point A to B, conducting forensic analysis. I wanted to put my head through a wall. It’s just extremely uninteresting to me.

It wasn’t helped by the fact that Kate goes into far too much detail describing certain structures and buildings. On top of all the slow paced forensic science, where we spend 70-or-so pages at a time just in Kate’s head as she contemplates her data, we get entire pages filled with unnecessarily detailed descriptions of the places Kate goes to to talk to those specialists I mentioned. At one point she goes to a grand casino to talk to this one guy and spends an entire page describing the building in excruciating detail. That happened A LOT. I don’t think I would’ve minded or even noticed as much had everything else been better paced.

The epilogue suggests that the sequel will be about another case that Kate needs to solve, and I’m undecided if I want to read it. I just really did not enjoy the criminology aspect of the story, and if there’s more of it, I’ll be just as bored.

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Spice Rating:
🔥 just kissing, no touching, no intimacy (Tithe, Ironside)
🌶️ kissing, minor touching, no or off-page intimacy (Legendborn)
🌶️🔥 intense kissing, fade-to-black (The Queen of Nothing)
🌶️🌶️ kissing, touching, 1 tame explicit scene (ACOTAR)
🌶️🌶️🔥 2-3 tame explicit scenes (Fourth Wing, ACOMAF)
🌶️🌶️🌶️ multiple explicit scenes, dirty talk (Bride)
🌶️🌶️🌶️🔥 multiple very explicit scenes, some kinks (ACOSF)
🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️ frequent intense explicit scenes, kinks (Soul of a Witch)
🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🔥 intense, kinks, more spice than plot (Haunting Adeline)
🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️ almost/ every chapter, intense, extremely kinky

[DISCLAIMER: I rate “spice” primarily for reader transparency.]

You know one of those books that EVERYONE I mean Everyone recommends to you, internet friends, reviews, book friends in person but I wasent convinced. I've had mixed reactions to Andrews before. I tried the sample of this novel on audible and it was the same narrator as the (burns) series that at times frustrated me so I couldn't do it.

So returning from holiday and wanting a very different type of reading (I've read lots of historical recently) I stepped into this with crossed fingers.

I'm now in the cult of Kate Daniels so much so that all I thought about is stepping back into this world.

Cracking stuff and what a heroine.

4 stars
slow-paced
adventurous dark mysterious tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

Okay, to be fair, the biggest problem I have with this book is that it's just not my style. Basically a plot-driven thriller with lots of fight scenes, quips from people who think they're being bad ass and edgy, and gory descriptions. The writing itself is fine. I think I could still have gotten behind it if there were more world building, and most importantly character development!! An element of mystery can be interesting for sure, but by the end of the book I don't care enough about it to keep going in the series to find out what's happening to tech/magic in the world, nor what Kate's super-strong secret magical power is. Even the monsters in this book are flat - just the basic descriptions they come with in classic legend with no dimension. This could still be really fun for a quick, easy read if the genre is your style though!!

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adventurous
adventurous dark mysterious fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

I liked this, but it was the least well put together of the books I've read from these authors yet. I would have continued on anyway, but I'm glad for the heads up everyone has given me that this series improves. Mostly, I'm fed up with the alpha dick measuring that Curran and his pack have going on. I find it very irritating and I hope he knocks it off.

So this is the first book in the much beloved Kate Daniels urban fantasy series, which certain friends of mine have been on at me for years to read. And it's finally time! It takes place in a future world (not sure how far) where technology is being edged out (literally eaten? I think?) by magic. Our main character is a young woman of uncertain origin (hiding great power, of course) whose job it is to clean up magical situations for hire. Basically she's a mercenary, and a bit of a loner. When her former guardian is murdered, she takes it upon herself to solve the crime and punish those responsible. This brings her into contact with the Pack, a group of shapeshifting humans ruled over by the Pack Lord Curran. (I know they are going to end up together. I defy anyone on this website who has fantasy reading friends not to know that.)

This book hints at a lot of promise in future books. I liked the hints of character development for Kate, and even if the way they went about explaining their worldbuilding was a bit rushed and confusing, I think I liked what I saw of it. At times, I also liked the antagonistic relationship developing between Kate and Curran. As mentioned above, I'm not a huge fan of alpha characters, and definitely not ones who feel the need to assert their power with mindgames like he does here. Hopefully that stops as the series goes on.

I've got the sequel penciled in for December, and hopefully I can finish out the series (and it's sprawling side-books and novellas) in 2022.

[3.5 stars, rounding down to leave room for improvement]
adventurous dark