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The Spear Cuts Through Water by Simon Jimenez

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challenging dark emotional tense slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Okay, so this is one of the best books I've ever read. Granted, I just finished it, so I'm sure I'll come up with criticisms at some point. However, anything I expected to have a problem with while I was reading ended up getting wrapped up by the end. 

The book even calls the reader out at one point. Early on in the story, the frame character's lola says that the book is a love story. Then, at the end, Keema and Jun supposedly die. I was really disappointed! It just went into geneology of how the spear got into the frame narrator's hands. I spend the whole time skimming and mourning the supposed love story. But then the moonlit body literally says that "you" are unsatisfied. And it shows what happened to Keema and Jun, that they didn't die, and I was like wtf! I *was* unsatisfied and no longer am; it's true!


I can't think of something I didn't love about this book. The way that it's written is so interesting. The worldbuilding felt so complete. I felt less like I was reading a story and more like I was reading a history book from another world. In the best possible way. I love how the author took the time to explain little details, stuff that might not have mattered narratively but really helped the reader understand the nature of the world we stepped into. One of my favorite stylistic decisions was
how we would randomly hear the thoughts of people the characters encountered. When they received the Moon's power and were able to hear everyone's inner monologues, it didn't come out of nowhere because we had been able to do that the whole time!
That was so freaking cool to me.

The way things were described were just beautiful. Even the grisly parts were in their own way. It was such vivid imagery, and I ate it up truly. God, and the relationship between Keema and Jun was written so well. It evolved so naturally considering who they were and how they came together. Absolutely masterful work

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adventurous dark emotional mysterious tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

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adventurous emotional reflective medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

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adventurous challenging

that was legit insane 

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adventurous challenging dark slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

I found this book pretty confusing. I was very interested in the story, so I think I’ll have to read it again someday to fully grasp everything that happened. I have also never read another book like it. If you’re up for a challenge and you like fantasy, I’d say read it!

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adventurous dark hopeful mysterious reflective sad tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

The Spear Cuts Through Water is a lyrical, story-within-a-story, epic fantasy tale. On its surface, it is about the journey of two men fighting the tyrannical rule of a god-like imperial dynasty. In its depths, this is a "a love story. down to the blade-dented bone". 

The narrative mixes first, second, and third person in a way that pulled me into the characters and enveloped me in the story's moods - ranging from somber to horrified to heart-racing action and everything in between. The writing style evokes oral storytelling, and I think that worked well. A major theme that the novel explores is how stories tie people together and define them, and the way the second person narration ties into the third person narrative emphasizes that. There were moments throughout the story where I truly thought "This was a beautiful way to tell this tale." 

The main story is of Jun and Keema, who by chance join together to shepherd a runaway god. Their country has been ruled by a despotic imperial dynasty that has drawn their magical powers from this god, and the three princes - the Three Terrors - will stop at nothing to reclaim her. Jun and Keema's encounters with the Three Terrors create tense and quick action sequences, with a brutality that the story does not shy away from, but also does not dwell in. There is violence, body horror, and cannibalism, but it never felt gratuitous. 

There is also a romanticism underpinning the narrative, a yearning for belonging and love that is central to the narrative because our need for love and belonging is central to our humanity. This is not a romance genre novel though, so I hesitate to add a romance tag, even as some of the romantic sentiments in the story took my breath away. 

Overall, I loved this book. The style, plot, characters, and setting all worked together to create a story that grabbed my heart and pulled it into a fantastical, brutal, romantic place. 

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adventurous challenging dark mysterious slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

This is a very confusing book, so you need to be ready for that. If you're overwhelmed, check out my video on TikTok (https://www.tiktok.com/@sarahmore.books/video/7497192155472022806) or Instagram (https://www.instagram.com/p/DI3amNFoNLY/) for some basic, spoiler-free background to hopefully avoid some of the frustration and confusion before reading this book.

Themes: love, power, duty, guilt, pride, intergenerational, interconnected past and present, time, stories, divinity, meaning/purpose
 
Style (1): I could tell from the very first paragraph that it was beautifully written in a very literary style. Strangely, it was written in second-, third-, and even first-person, changing mid-sentence. It was confusing at first, but you get used to it once you figure out how to expect the changes (usually signaled by italics and new section headings). Overall, I enjoyed the style of writing very much (once I figured it out), although I remain unconvinced of what is gained (other than fun) by switching perspectives mid-sentence (e.g., "a boy... looked at his commander and I realized that I was standing beside the bravest pesron..." vs. "a boy... looked at his commander and he realized that he was standing beside the bravest person..."). 
 
Plot (0.5): It was mostly original though at least one theme was taken from popular mythology (
the minotaur
), which felt cheap as it was not cited as a retelling). It did not always feel coherent as new fantastical elements would continuously shock the reader in ways that felt jarring instead of immersive, at least to me
(e.g., Jun and Keema fall into a dream of the Sleeping Sea; suddenly the Third Terror transformed into a giant??)
. I simply wasn't always convinced by all the fantasy elements. I'm not sure how to describe it other than to say that it wasn't "realistic" or "authentic" enough for me. I'd love to know myself how a writer could "convince" a reader of the veracity of such fantasy elements. 
 
Atmosphere/Setting (0.5): The setting was so descriptive that it was easy to imagine the details of the scenes, but it was a serious struggle at times, especially in the first 130 pages, to understand which of the 3 main settings was being described and what the connection between them was. (I've posted a video on TikTok and Instagram describing the settings to help new readers, linked above). Moreover, it was not always immersive, such as when the setting would change very suddenly and not always to a setting we were already familiar with. While I like the writing style in general, this aspect could have used some work so that the reader would have felt a bit more guided, the change would have felt less drastic, and it wouldn't have kicked the reader out of the fantasy immersion. 
 
Characters (1): I love characters who are a little mad or who grapple with internal dissonances, so Jun was a favourite. The Daware man was also lovingly stubborn. Even the tortoise that they unfortunately called The Defect was adorable. The main characters were believeable and each had their own hidden motivations which were revealed as the story went on. There were also many other snippets of thoughts or happenings from random or tangential characters throughout which was fun (again, once you got used to the style). There were selfish, ambitious, loyal, and love-struck characters, a little bit of everything. Also, the main romance subplot was a frustratingly nice slow burn. 
 
Enjoyment (0.25): I must admit that I was extremely frustrated with this book for a long time, especially the first 130 pages. I seriously considered DNF-ing it, but I persevered because everyone seems to love it. I think I would have liked it more if not for the hype that raised my expectations and I think part of me enjoys the fact that I simply figured out wtf is going on in this book now that I've finally finished it. Putting that aside, I enjoyed the overall story and message, but there were parts that were very frustratingly confusing or uncomfortable to read about (such as cannibalism and some gore). 

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challenging dark mysterious sad tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated

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adventurous dark mysterious reflective medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

Because of its peculiar writing style, it was a bit difficult to get into at first. After the first few dozen pages, I was hooked, though. 
Unfortunately, my interest started decreasing after a while and towards the end, I had a difficult time finishing it. 
This isn‘t really the book‘s fault, but more likely my own, because I was reading it at a very busy time during my uni semester, when it would be way more enjoyable to sit down with an easier-to-read book before going to bed. 
All in all, this is an extremely unique book but I wouldn‘t recommend it to just anybody, because it doesn‘t quite have the mass-appeal that certain other books have.

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adventurous slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

A bit of a slow, confusing start, and written in a unique way that takes some getting used to (split into long sections instead of chapters, jumping between POVs a lot, etc). But this story was so beautiful. Twists and turns throughout, very satisfying and moving ending, tons of history and lore.

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