3.75 AVERAGE

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marlobo's review

3.0

2.5 stars

Read as part of Under This Cowboy Hat Anthology

kaje_harper's review

4.0

Another of the stories this author does so well - set in an historically accurate 1860's landscape, but primarily the story of two men finding themselves and each other. Jesse is a widower and ex-Union soldier, Bridger is a ranch foreman. Both are gay, in a time when it was an unacceptable thing to be. Bridger has come to terms with his life and his desires, Jesse is still resisting his own. In the course of trying to unravel strange occurrences on a ranch, they each find a new degree of understanding in each other. In the usual vivid but laconic style, these men play out that first encounter that will change two lives.

There is social commentary related to the Civil War as well. Significant spoiler:
SpoilerI liked it a lot when Jesse commented on the octaroon ranch manager's daring to marry a white woman, and Bridger said, "Why not? You did too." And the moment when Jesse saw the parallels.


This was a longer story, with room for some character development. And there is just a moment at the end that makes the HFN a little more solid than some stories by this author. Recommended for fans of cowboys and historical M/M.
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iguana_mama's review

4.0

I haven’t read a good gay western since [b:Brokeback Mountain|1627|Brokeback Mountain|Annie Proulx|https://images.gr-assets.com/books/1442919969s/1627.jpg|1795113], so I was excited to read this short story that takes place in San Francisco in 1869. The story starts out with Jesse Putnam and an attractive stranger illegally enjoying a mutual hand job at a cheap boardinghouse on the Barbary Coast. Though Jesse would have liked to get to know the man, the time they lived in was not conducive to such a relationship.

Jesse’s wealthy aunt Ada has summoned him to investigate some weird happenings at one of the ranches owned by his aunt and uncle. To accompany Jesse, Ada has invited Wardley Bridger, who not only has experience with horses and knowledge of local customs, but was Jesse’s pickup from the night before.

I loved how Jesse’s and Wardley’s relationship went from one-night stand to working partnership to romantic and sexual relationship without feeling like insta-love. Though the two men are very different in temperament, they complemented each other. I very much enjoyed Wardley’s easy self-acceptance about his sexuality compared to Jesse’s more fearful reserve. Seeing their relationship grow and develop was one of the best parts of this story for me.

While a compelling plot and well-developed characters are important to me in historical fiction, getting the details right is also extremely important. The author has done such a wonderful job depicting the old American West and bringing to life historical places and events, social customs and manners, that I was instantly transported to another place and time. All these details slowed the pace of the story somewhat, but also lent richness and authenticity.

As much as I enjoyed this story, I found it lacked excitement. I would have liked more descriptions of hardship, more bad guys, some chase and pursuit and more gunplay. Or maybe I’ve watched too many westerns on TV.

Nice story and I’m looking forward to discovering more of this author’s work.