Reviews with content warning for Sexual content - These Hollow Vows

This was a really fun book! I can see how it’s being compared to A Court of Thorns and Roses, but it wasn’t so similar that it felt boring. There were some parts that were predictable, but it was fun having theories and seeing how things played out.
Buddy read with Melissa

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dark mysterious fast-paced

Loveable characters? It's complicated

4.0

I can’t bring myself to give this a 5/5 mainly because the questions it’s left me are too big… I really do not like that both the boys in the end carried faulty feelings and that it ends in a rash decision. I found myself really liking the characters halfway through but the ending fell short as it was super fast-paced and contained much change in a short amount of time. Another thing is the spice was a little much since it wasn’t really needed tbh. I feel like it would’ve been better with just the Finn scene and kissing. It is YA after all. Not to mention, the development of all that stuff was crazy fast! Please pace better girlie!!

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rinku's review against another edition

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adventurous mysterious tense fast-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? It's complicated
Loveable characters? It's complicated
Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.0

I’m not trying to be mean, but These Hollow Vows is your classical YA/NA fantasy written by an author who normally just writes romance. The world and magic system are not thought through enough, and the biggest focus of the story is the romance.

After Brie’s sister gets taken into the faerie world, she decides to smuggle herself into a competition to marry Prince Ronan and hopes to solve the mystery around the place her sister is and her two love interest which are coincidentally both princes from opposing kingdoms. Yeah, sorry for the bad summary but there’s not much else going on in this story. I wasn’t the biggest fan around the whole marriage competition that isn’t mentioned in the German synopsis – if it was, I probably wouldn’t have read the book because I don’t like this trope. Here, we never even see the other contestants which was so silly. Even more silly was Brie’s behaviour when she learned that

Sebastian was Prince Ronan. I didn’t really understand why it’s now a problem for Brie that she loves him. Her behaviour towards him just didn’t make sense

Other plot points were really predictable, like

Ronan having a relationship(?) already with someone else, Brie being the true queen, or Brie turning into an Unseelie in the end. I also really hate the concept of bonds because I don’t like this deterministic idea that people are “fated” to love each other, and the idea is often quite heteronormative

. Furthermore, conflicts could’ve been resolved way more easily if the characters decided to talk to each other for once. It also isn’t explained why, towards the end,

Brie doesn’t just ask Bakken to bring her to her sister

. At least the finale is nicely dramatic.

Probably the worst moment though was when Brie gets really drunk – and of course then also horny – in like the middle of the novel. This whole section just made uncomfortable and was so cringe, just like Finn’s reaction. We also have Kane who says that he would’ve taken advantage of the situation, yikes. The sex scenes were kidna cringe as well, especially how Brie asks if it’s a bad thing that she’s a virgin, I thought we were done with this stuff.

Looking at the magic system, there are some interesting ideas introduced but not really developed. The star worms and what they were called at the beginning seemed interesting, but they’re not mentioned anywhere later. Most of the magical things have some loopholes that the author didn’t think about, and for a fantasy book, there was not really a lot of magic generally.

The characters of the stories are so cliché as well. Brie is a quite unremarkable character, and I don’t know what to think about her. She annoyed me with her “not like other girls” stuff, like don’t liking dresses. Of course, she also lives with her mean aunt and mean female cousins. Like I’ve mentioned, the story lays a big focus on the romance. We have two love interests, both are of course tall and muscular, centuries-old, and both of course fall in love with our main character – and I liked neither of them. It’s so obvious that she will end up with Finn. I haven’t read ACOTAR and don’t plan to do so, but even I know that Bash will be the Tamlin of the series.

My review reads quite negative, but I still gave These Hollow Vows three stars. I had fun with it, even though not everything made sense or was developed in satisfying way.

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samantha_06x's review against another edition

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adventurous dark emotional tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? No
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0

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charhollyx's review against another edition

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adventurous inspiring mysterious tense fast-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Plot
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes

5.0

Sickeningly addictive.
The world building, the narrative, the love interests and the love triangle, UGH!!
Anyone saying this is a rip off of ACOTAR needs to sit down and take a moment to appreciate such an amazing, original story
Also: minor sexual content, not graphic unfortunately

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kiwij96's review against another edition

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adventurous mysterious fast-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Character
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.5

ACOTAR meets The Cruel Prince, only better. The storytelling was honestly genius and the cliffhanger is stunning, I need the second book immediately.

There were a couple of times where I was confused by things that seemingly made no sense, or felt too rushed, but other than that this story is so well done. I was hooked immediately with the Cinderella style beginning. But then it just became something else entirely. I was honestly stunned at some of the twists that happened.

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adventurous dark slow-paced

Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? It's complicated
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0

There's so much to unpack in this!

First of all, I the fantasy and plot are easy to understand and get into, though I found some information was a little too glossed over or given at convenient times.

The characters were interesting, and flawed, but a little one-dimensional. Sometimes I wondered why the FMC was allowed to get away with things, and why everyone was willing to uproot their principles for her.

However, it was easy to read, and the plot kept me enthralled.

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toastedoats42's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional mysterious medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? It's complicated
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? No
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.0

An interesting story and I'm excited to read the sequel. The author uses male and female instead of man and woman in most instances which, despite understanding the reasoning behind it given the story, still gives me an ick.

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