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moyes's review
2.0
2.5 stars!
Where's the plot? I mean I feel like I read the first draft of an incomplete story. At least the heroine wasn't a doormat and the hero redeemed himself (somewhat?) Still calling a woman a bitch is really a big turnoff for me. Even to Express admiration. It's not cool.
Where's the plot? I mean I feel like I read the first draft of an incomplete story. At least the heroine wasn't a doormat and the hero redeemed himself (somewhat?) Still calling a woman a bitch is really a big turnoff for me. Even to Express admiration. It's not cool.
thesassybookworm's review
4.0
Everly is an MC woman born and breed. When the unspeakable happens on her wedding day, she runs leaving all those good memories behind. That's until her friend Susan talks her into going to a club party at the Perdition MC compound. There she finds herself eye f@cking the enforcer for the club. A sexy as sin beast of a manwhore. Before the night is over she'll find herself in his bed. Come morning reality rears it's ugly head and she is left with more than just memories...
Lucas Morningstar (ROAR) isn't looking for love. He doesn't do commitment, and he doesn't ever want to settle down. After a night of blistering hot sex, he sends the fiery ginger on her way. He's sure she'll be like all the rest and come looking for more. After four months of nothing, fate throws these two together once again. Roar is in for the shock of his life, and maybe commitment and family isn't such a bad idea after all...
"She was something else, looking out her back window at the land she’d bought and made a business out of. Flowers and fairies and fantasy. Something soft and gentle, his little earth mama, makin him a baby in her beautiful body."
What a surprising little gem of a book this was. It's got a very "KA" feel to it, which I loved. I mean who doesn't love an OTT alpha male. The plot was interesting and kept me turning the pages. The side characters were enjoyable and I look forward to reading more about them. I REALLY hope TOP gets his own book and TARA also. I do wish there would have been a better epilogue. I seem to be saying that a lot in my reviews lately, but it really is like the icing on a cupcake for me. At least in this one we get a little bit into the future look, so it wasn't a total disappointment.
I loved both the hero and the heroine. Everly was really a feisty heroine without being over the top bitchy. She stood her ground, but was also sweet and vulnerable at times. Roar was awesome. He was SUCH an egotistical dick at the beginning, but he quickly grew on me. Dirty talking and smokin hot. He was so devoted to the heroine. The only problem I had was both the hero and heroine sounded EXACTLY the same. They both spoke in those incomplete sentences, that are so popular with alpha heroes. I like that in my heroes, but it's a little weird for a heroine to speak like that. Just a small nuisance though.
Also, and this is just me being nitpicky. The author really should look into a better cover designer. The cover on this one and the next are really doing her no favors. Had a few of my friends not read this and gave it rave reviews, I wouldn't have gave it a second look. Covers really need to catch my attention before I'll give a book a chance. Anyways, just my 2 cents..
Overall I was really impressed with this and I am looking forward to reading the next up in this series.
vikit's review
4.0
This is a really amazing story just a bit rough around the edges. My problem was mainly with the writing style, the structure of the book. It’s really missing the finesse it needed and it just gives the whole book a raw feel. Some sentences ended up making no sense thanks to the commas and their complexity. Also there are changing point of view but there is no indication where, when or who is talking and it took me a while to figure it out.
Roar takes being an alpha male to extremes but after he realizes what he really has he became quite a caring and compassionate person. Bit doesn’t mean that he has an easy job because he has no idea what it means to be in a relationship and how to proceed. His fumbling during the learning process is quite ’cute’. He became putty in Ever hands.
Everly has a crazy and traumatic past but it didn’t’ brake her. She is a real ball buster, tough character. I adored her so much. She can take care of herself and I really like that she doesn’t lose her edge during the story.
The chemistry between her and Roar are off the charts and they build a beautiful little family, just what both of them needs.
I really liked the atmosphere this book created and enjoyed the story immensely. The romance part of the story is perfectly detailed, steamy and emotional but the action part could have got a bit more attention. The book itself is not so long and I felt that the end of the plot is a bit rushed.
Roar takes being an alpha male to extremes but after he realizes what he really has he became quite a caring and compassionate person. Bit doesn’t mean that he has an easy job because he has no idea what it means to be in a relationship and how to proceed. His fumbling during the learning process is quite ’cute’. He became putty in Ever hands.
Everly has a crazy and traumatic past but it didn’t’ brake her. She is a real ball buster, tough character. I adored her so much. She can take care of herself and I really like that she doesn’t lose her edge during the story.
The chemistry between her and Roar are off the charts and they build a beautiful little family, just what both of them needs.
I really liked the atmosphere this book created and enjoyed the story immensely. The romance part of the story is perfectly detailed, steamy and emotional but the action part could have got a bit more attention. The book itself is not so long and I felt that the end of the plot is a bit rushed.
the_sassy_bookworm's review
4.0
Everly is an MC woman born and breed. When the unspeakable happens on her wedding day, she runs leaving all those good memories behind. That's until her friend Susan talks her into going to a club party at the Perdition MC compound. There she finds herself eye f@cking the enforcer for the club. A sexy as sin beast of a manwhore. Before the night is over she'll find herself in his bed. Come morning reality rears it's ugly head and she is left with more than just memories...
Lucas Morningstar (ROAR) isn't looking for love. He doesn't do commitment, and he doesn't ever want to settle down. After a night of blistering hot sex, he sends the fiery ginger on her way. He's sure she'll be like all the rest and come looking for more. After four months of nothing, fate throws these two together once again. Roar is in for the shock of his life, and maybe commitment and family isn't such a bad idea after all...
"She was something else, looking out her back window at the land she’d bought and made a business out of. Flowers and fairies and fantasy. Something soft and gentle, his little earth mama, makin him a baby in her beautiful body."
What a surprising little gem of a book this was. It's got a very "KA" feel to it, which I loved. I mean who doesn't love an OTT alpha male. The plot was interesting and kept me turning the pages. The side characters were enjoyable and I look forward to reading more about them. I REALLY hope TOP gets his own book and TARA also. I do wish there would have been a better epilogue. I seem to be saying that a lot in my reviews lately, but it really is like the icing on a cupcake for me. At least in this one we get a little bit into the future look, so it wasn't a total disappointment.
I loved both the hero and the heroine. Everly was really a feisty heroine without being over the top bitchy. She stood her ground, but was also sweet and vulnerable at times. Roar was awesome. He was SUCH an egotistical dick at the beginning, but he quickly grew on me. Dirty talking and smokin hot. He was so devoted to the heroine. The only problem I had was both the hero and heroine sounded EXACTLY the same. They both spoke in those incomplete sentences, that are so popular with alpha heroes. I like that in my heroes, but it's a little weird for a heroine to speak like that. Just a small nuisance though.
Also, and this is just me being nitpicky. The author really should look into a better cover designer. The cover on this one and the next are really doing her no favors. Had a few of my friends not read this and gave it rave reviews, I wouldn't have gave it a second look. Covers really need to catch my attention before I'll give a book a chance. Anyways, just my 2 cents..
Overall I was really impressed with this and I am looking forward to reading the next up in this series.
poisonivy70's review
3.0
-Kindle Unlimited read, which is always a welcome way for me to explore new authors. I picked up this book and the next in the series on the recommendation of GR friends, and while flawed, I did enjoy my time with the Perdition MC.
-Pretty quick read and I tore through this book in a day, which was fun.
-A kinder, gentler MC book, although still pretty standard with the stereotypical club sluts, and yet there’s something here that has potential. WTFery is about 1 (they’re reformed bikers, yo) and Ever’s a decent heroine who doesn’t take crap from anyone. It’s fairly low on the angst scale as well and my main complaint is that the one “danger” felt contrived as it is all resolved quickly and the reader is only told about it in snippets. It needed a bit more action.
-I can understand the comparisons to KA’s Chaos series, and even the initial setup reminds me of Chaos (heroine hooks up with biker hero and he treats it like a one night stand has shades of Motorcycle Man, though it’s not a carbon copy). Much like Ms. Ashley, Ms. Wroth has hooked into the bickering dialogue and some good humor, which allows this romance to shine at times, even if it stumbles on more than one occasion because of the grammatical errors galore. As a published author, an occasional typo or incorrect word I can ignore, but there’s a crazy love of commas and incorrect verbiage that’s distracting more than entertaining.
The Bottom Line 3 stars
Editing issues aside, I did enjoy this read and I’m more than willing to continue with the series and see how Ms. Wroth grows as an author.
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