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candyy77's review

2.0
fast-paced

hannahnana73's review

3.0

more Catholic than Christian fiction. ALSO IF a guy commanded me like that irl I might definitely would slap him... this tho was annoyingly attractive. also loved seeing Kat and Alex again though it took me a while to remember the connection... didn't like how tina went behind his back... and didn't like Sutherland either... but yeah. also i felt like we needed more on destiny. unless that'll be resolved in the next book. also quite a few spelling/grammar errors. but overall good book. had me gasping and rigid with tension and apprehension w/ those suspense scenes at times.
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idk, i think it just wasn’t my thing. The mc’s sort of annoyed me i can’t even tell you why either. It felt very Wattpad-esque and i love a good wattpad kind of book but i guess i wasn’t feeling it this time 😭😭

maria_fernanda's review

2.0
lighthearted medium-paced

Did I enjoy the book? Yes, I’d say I did, but it wasn’t my favorite. There were quite a bit of gramatical mistakes throughout the writing and a repeated paragraph. Although, no one os perfect, but I’d say the book could’ve gone through one more revision beforehand. 

Now, the character’s within this book, wether it was the protagonist or a side character, they contradicted themselves at time with either things they mentioned throughout some chapters. I definitely feel like this problem could’ve been avoided with an extra revision. 

Now comes the part that made my rating 2 ⭐️. I feel like I missed something when it came to the Steeles story being interwined with this book. Yes, it’s a series, and they and there were two clear points that were made as to how the two book connect with one another. However, there’s one plot hole that I can’t seem to wrap my head around and that’s chapter 40. No spoilers of course, but when did any of the members of the Cavalli family mention that there was plan/bargain going on. It was mentioned in any previous chapters until now. I especially thought that I was going to have an answer to a question in the first book in the series, which is one of the clear points that was made, but it didn’t dive deeper into what was said in the first book. I definitely feel like the question could’ve been answered here, then again, there’s one book left in the series that involves the Steele family, so I’m hoping to get some answers there. 

Not only that, but there’s was quite a few things that were left unsaid/unfinished, but then again, this wasn’t their story so I understand.

Overall, I’d rate this book a solid 2 stars. Is it a nice story? Yes, but it could’ve used some more work.