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pageboi31's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
3.5
My favorite things about this book were the world building and the side characters. The color hierarchy and pseudo-planetary distinctions are pretty interesting, and it would be cool to see more of the other colors (especially POV's) in the rest of the series. I loved Sevro, honestly wish there was more of him in this book and that Darrow was a better friend to him to justify Sevro's respect/love towards him. Cassius has so much potential as a tragic villain, I could easily see him being an unforgettable antagonist. He has that himbo /popular energy that most of his peers like, but you could easily tell deep-down that he's super insecure, likes himself a bit too much
I don't really like Darrow...I don't know. Something about him just doesn't work for me. At first I didn't really like him in the beginning of the book, but I realized later on he at least had more of a personality then than he did during the game at the Institute. I don't know if the transformation process to gold wiped him in some way, but I swear he actually becomes a different person besides just physically. I think the way he was written kinda gives off mary sue vibes (hate using that term), where his "failures" didn't really feel like failures
The story itself was ok, I guess. Can't really tell how powerful/important the Sons of Ares are, since they're only in a small section at the start. The Institute seemed incredibly brutal and flawed...hope they have more "educational" elements in the rest of the books 😅. This weirdly feels like a YA book to me (reminds me a lot of Sebastien De Castell's Spellslinger where it's YA but can be quite dark/gruesome in parts), maybe because of the character's ages and the similarity to Hunger Games?
Moderate: Rape
okayyyanna's review
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Sexual violence and Body horror
Minor: Rape
jturock's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Graphic: Rape
kale323's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
1.0
The Cons: Almost everything else. This book is completely overly ambitious. While many claim that it is Game of Thrones and Hunger Games put together, it fails at replicating both.
First: the main character, Darrow, is a flat, overly hyped up character that is a blank wall of “I’m super cool and I have no flaws that can’t be solved within one, maybe two pages.” Even at the beginning, he hypes himself up for being the best of the best, and it’s clear that he is. But it’s constantly TOLD to you, not shown. Dont tell me to think a character is cool if you haven’t SHOWN me that he’s cool. Which leads me to my next point.
Second: SHOW ME THINGS. DONT TELL ME. Oh my god, this book has fight scenes, conversations, and entire plot relevant sections get boiled down to a few descriptive, “and then they did this,” type of sentences. I wanted to pull my hair out, screaming, “WHY IS THIS NOT BEING SHOWN IN DETAIL. THIS NOT HOW YOU KEEP READERS ENGAGED AND IMMERSED. THIS IS MOVING TOO FAST FOR ME TO CARE,” which brings me to my last point.
Third: The pacing. Dear god. The pacing was absolutely terrible. It takes until half, yes, HALF, of the book until we reach the main story hook. HALF OF THE BOOK IS EXPOSITION??? HALF??? And on top of that, it has no real rising climax, and no real climax at all. At the very least, it’s hard to distinguish when the climax is, from the rest of the book. Abysmal.
Look, when it’s good, it’s good. The worldbuilding is fun, and some of the ideas are intriguing. And some of the characters (not the main one) were fun to read about. These were all enough positives for me not to DNF the book, which is saying something!
Nonetheless, an unrelatable, god-complex main character, tell-not-show writing, and bad pacing are far too much for me to find much value in this book.
Also, the way rape, attempted rape, and sexual assault are handled is very, very poor. At one point, a side character attempts to rape an unknown character. The way it was handled up until a certain point was fine. Justice was being done, and it was a titular moment for the main character to figure out how to handle justice. Interesting story beat!
Then after justice is dealt, the attempted rapist begins to be delivered to the reader as a funny, if not zany character. Wow. Personally, I would like comic relief to not be delivered by an attempted rapist.
I would recommend this book to someone that needs to just sit back and digest a simple story with a few, tidbit, interesting things. But not for anything else.
Graphic: Rape, Sexual assault, and Sexual violence
jenmarie11's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
4.5
Graphic: Rape, Injury/Injury detail, Sexual violence, Murder, Physical abuse, Slavery, Emotional abuse, Violence, War, Colonisation, Cursing, Child abuse, Blood, Body horror, Child death, Classism, Gore, Torture, and Death
lameroe's review
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Moderate: Sexual assault and Rape
skysalla's review against another edition
3.5
A large chunk of this book reminds me of Lord of the Flies.
I don’t know if I could have finished it had it not been on audio book however - while it was overall interesting, I think it wasn’t quite gripping enough given the length.
Graphic: Violence and War
Moderate: Rape
allynat's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
Moderate: Slavery and Violence
Minor: Rape
amemuuras's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.25
Graphic: War, Death, and Murder
Moderate: Rape
Minor: Cannibalism and Excrement
menacingmarble's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.5
Moderate: Rape