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Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

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Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

I really liked it and I think there was only one person in my book club that didn't like it at all. It was very innovative and different. Everything that happens during the middle of the book all comes full circle which can be a very hard thing to do considering that there are three different main characters. 

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Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

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Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: N/A

This book was a lot of fun! The style is innovative and engaging, it eas easy to invest in the characters and their stories, and the end was very satisfying. The afterword, however, felt rather on the nose and undeserved.

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Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

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adventurous funny lighthearted mysterious fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

TLDR: Very good Golden Age Style Mystery with a few twists. 
 
I was pleasantly surprised by this mystery novel. The blurb promises entertainment which is delivered mostly in puns in the first half of the book. Then Mr Holmes gets to work with an intricately plotted how-they done-it novel. 
 
The forward is a bit tiresome, but necessary to understanding the setting. The rest of the narrative is an omnipresent narrator and a mix of journal entries from the main character to his patron, reports, and letters. The later being indicated by chapter headings. The style is down to earth with enough description to fill in the blanks but not be flowery. The action is pretty easy to follow and main characters are easy to differentiate. 
 
The characterisation was okay, the minor characters suffered in particular. Main characters were somewhat stereotyped though they acted consistent with their characters throughout the novel. The first part of the novel was rather under peopled though filling a school like it should be is always tricky for both the writer and the reader. 
 
In true Golden Age fashion all the would be deletees were nasty humans. I thought two of them deserved an Orient Express experience to tell the truth. I anticipate there were after the funeral parties. The setting is 1950’s America so at least the author didn’t have to worry about the modern banes of deleters existence DNA and mobile phones. Though one deletion method was old fashioned, the other two were quite novel. 
 
The postscript does make me wonder if the punishment will fit the crime.

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This book felt like it was more about the author proving his own cleverness, explaining the perfect crimes in perfect detail, than it was about telling a good story. It would have made a funny short story. At novel length, it gave me a lot of time as a reader to pull on threads. Under a close reading, things quickly began to unravel.

Holmes never fully leaned into the macabre and the satire. The bad guys had to be completely irredeemable. The deletists had to be good people. We had to be told with the same overly academic heavy-handedness that these deaths are ethical! This didn't give the reader any room to be uncomfortable and seriously ponder the ethics of extrajudicial murder. It also made the book less fun and silly than it could have been.

The entire book is expositive. It made it difficult as a reader to emotionally relate to any of the characters.

McMasters is an absolutely bananas, nonsense place with bananas, nonsense rules. This could have been cool - but once again, Holmes kept telling us 'no no it makes perfect sense.' It does not, and that sort of disconnect was really frustrating as a reader. I'm down to read about and accept nonsense. Asking me to accept why nonsense rules are actually rational just made me bristle.

We follow three deletists and I kept wondering - why these three? I kept waiting for some artful connection at the end. Cliff and Gemma reconnect in a campy, unearned, and frankly jarring happy ever after. Doria's story never reconnects to Cliff and Gemma's after leaving McMasters. Her story was the most interesting AND the most problematic.

I generally don't give books below 2 stars unless they really piss me off - but Doria Maye's method of deletion was awful. Apparently it was evil for Fiedler to plant Communist Party pamphlets with Cliff's work documents but copacetic for Doria to lean into 1950s trans panic.
Doria makes it appear as though a man dressed as a woman murdered Leo Kosta. To really sell this lie she uses another person's actual DNA - effectively framing someone innocent. Despite McMasters being about deletions not harming anyone innocent, Doria's modus operandi harms the specific human whose DNA she plants at the crime scene and an entire marginalized community.

I just don't know how you can spend the entire book bleating on about how moral all these murders are . . . and then pin the blame on a queer boogeyman? I get that within the 1950s setting this would have worked and I guess? been shocking? clever? But framing a marginalized community (AND AN ACTUAL INNOCENT INDIVIDUAL BECAUSE DNA YO) does not abide by Rule #3. What innocent person might suffer by your actions? Guy McMasters asks. The answer: A lot of innocent persons. We just don't care about them.

I know some folks out there may play devil's advocate and say, 'well maybe Holmes wanted the reader to be critical of Doria's method of deletion . . .' Then why spend so much time going over the McMaster's rule of mitigating harm to others and setting up our three deletists as good people acting ethically? Why didn't the McMaster's board permanently expel Doria the same way they did to Jud Helkampf? Isn't letting Doria live and hint at murdering again kind of implicit approval of the way she chose to go about deleting Leonid Kosta?? What does it say that they gave Gemma a second chance for saving an awful person merely because the awful person was pregnant? We care more about a fetus than we do about queer people??? You can't have it both ways.
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Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

It’s okay, but the schtick got old very quickly.  

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Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

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adventurous dark funny lighthearted medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Murder Your Employer is like if Harry Potter was written for the macabre, in a good way. It's a fun story with some interesting (if at times, simple) characters as well as a fantastical setting in the form of McMasters and the U.S. in the 1950s. 

It's worth mentioning that I think part of the reason that this book takes place in this time period is because quite a few of the methods mentioned in this book around "getting away with murder" would not be possible due to today's surveillance state and much more accurate and sensitive forensic technologies. Still, a good romp through hypothetical murders and the fantasy by proxy of an evil employer being shown the door!

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