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A Phoenix First Must Burn: Sixteen Stories of Black Girl Magic, Resistance, and Hope
Patrice Caldwell
618 reviews for:
A Phoenix First Must Burn: Sixteen Stories of Black Girl Magic, Resistance, and Hope
Patrice Caldwell
The editor's introduction mentions that all of these stories have a glimmer of hope, and that's true, although in some stories it's introduced organically as a natural ending and in others it feels rushed and shoehorned in as the author struggled to shrink a long and complex resolution down to a few lines only hinting at an eventual happy ending.
The main problem I had with some of the stories here (for example, "A Hagiography of Starlight", "Melie" and "All the Time in the World") was that, while their premise was very enjoyable, they felt like a chapter 1 of a novel or at least part of what should have been a longer work, that was truncated in order to fit a short story format and sacrificed a feeling of closure to achieve it. They left me thinking, "wait, that's it?" at the end. In the case of other stories, the more YA ones such as "The Curse of Love", I just couldn't get into the premise since it's based on a notion I can't wrap my head around, mainly that someone at age 16 who meets a cute guy should be introduced to the narrative that such "love" is worth every sacrifice in the world (but only on the side of the woman, dude can shrug off any consequences). For this particular story, I also didn't get the perspective shift, as it didn't seem to be accomplishing anything as a literary recourse, and was just there to, I don't know, be cool and alternative? Unsure.
My favorite stories were "When Life Hands You a Lemon Fruitbomb", which was a perfect short story (simple enough to feel perfectly contained in the length of the format, while having enough depth to keep the reader engaged) and, showing my bias, "Letting the Right One In", because you'd have to really mess up "lesbian vampires" as a concept to turn me away.
All in all, it was an entertaining read and I'd recommend this book.
This was a good anthology. Very nearly great, and when I reread it in ebook form, I might change my mind, but there were a couple of stories that did not translate well for me in the audiobook.
Story by Story:
"When Life Hands You a Lemon Fruitbomb" by Amerie: I loved this one, though it was a little heavy on the info dump at first. I really liked the look into what we consider alien, and how to listen, and how to forgive. Plus I loved the twisty ending.
"Gilded" by Elizabeth Acevedo: This one I liked more, and I don't usually like magical realism. I think mostly because of the absolute indoctrination of the main character, and how she slowly overcame it. The ending was perfect.
"Wherein Abigail Fields Recalls Her First Death And, Subsequently, Her Best Life" by Rebecca Roanhorse: The title of this one is almost longer than the story itself! But that's not a bad thing. This was a short gut punch of a story that left me wanting to find all the stuff this author has ever written.
"The Rules of the Land" by Alaya Dawn Johnson: I love selkie style stories, and they are rarely told from the perspective of the children. This one was wonderful!
"A Hagiography of Starlight" by Somaiya Daud: I honestly didn't finish. Everything was just too much for listening to while I drove. I'll come back to it in ebook form.
"Melie" by Justina Ireland: Rocking the larger female protag! Also a larger female protag where the point wasn't about her weight. In fact, it didn't seem to bother her at all. I loved this one.
"The Goddess Provides" by L.L. McKinney: A murder mystery, palace intrigue, a succession crisis, and a crisis of faith all in one short story. Somehow beautifully played off and excellent. I want more.
"Hearts Turned to Ash" by Dhonielle Clayton: While I loved the ultimate message of this story, about not giving all of yourself to love, so that you lose everything that makes you "you", I had a little bit of whiplash from expecting a character to be evil when she wasn't. A story that is better on the second reading than the first.
"Letting the Right One In" by Patrice Caldwell: Meh, I could take it or leave it. I don't tend to like stories with depressed characters, because I like active characters. But this one managed to engage me for the whole story, at least.
"Tender-Headed" by Danny Lore: Another for the ebook, though I did love listening to it. A retelling of Athena and Arachne with a greater moral, it got a little confusing towards the end as I was listening to memories and reality merge.
"Kiss the Sun" by Ibi Zoboi: Skipped it. Too much information to try and absorb in audio format, and I got confused and bored quickly. I liked the lyrical style of writing, though. I'll update once I've read the ebook.
"The Actress" by Danielle Page: Absolutely loved this. 5 stars, will read again. And again. She caught the tone of a girl unsure about her crush and confusing it with acting perfectly. And the twist is fantastic.
"The Curse of Love" by Ashley Woodfolk: Loved the message of this story. Also love any stories with bargains and the consequences of them. I will be checking out her other stuff.
"All the Time in the World" by Charlotte Nicole Davis: I was prepared not to like this one from nearly the first word, because it's written in second person. But then the magic happened. And themes of police harassment on a backdrop of the Flint Water Crisis. I was hooked. Then the MC went on a joyous magical tour. I loved it.
"The Witch's Skin" by Karen Strong: This one seemed to be trying too many things at once. I wanted to know about the Boo Hag, but she kept going on about one of the other story lines. Yes. Multiple story lines in a short story. I got bored. But I did finish it.
"Sequence" by J. Marcelle Corrie: I liked the "what if" nature of this story, which managed to tell me two different perspectives, one after another, without boring me. Definitely a good end to the anthology.
Moderate: Ableism, Adult/minor relationship, Alcoholism, Bullying, Child death, Confinement, Death, Domestic abuse, Gore, Gun violence, Infidelity, Racism, Self harm, Sexism, Sexual content, Slavery, Torture, Toxic relationship, Violence, Blood, Excrement, Vomit, Grief, Religious bigotry, Death of parent, Murder, Pregnancy, Fire/Fire injury, Toxic friendship, Abandonment, Alcohol, Colonisation, War, Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Animal death, Body shaming, Homophobia, Mental illness, Xenophobia
One thing that is especially unique in this collection is the variety when it comes to inspirations and origins for each tale. Some are pure sci-fi or fantasy, crafted solely from the author's own imagination. Others pull heavily from various mythologies or folklore. Others still are inspired by historical events and figures. In an anthology heavily rooted in the concepts of magic, this variety added individuality and heft that made each story shine that much brighter. No boring, cookie cutter fantasy here.
Personally, my favorites were Melie by Justina Ireland, Letting the Right One In by Patrice Caldwell, and Gilded by Elizabeth Acevedo. Each of these stories made me yearn for more and left me hopeful the authors will expand on them in the future.
Highly recommend.