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jem44's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.0
Minor: Toxic relationship and Death of parent
ems_rxlibrary's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
Graphic: Fatphobia, Body shaming, and Toxic relationship
theespressoedition's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
I loved the concept of two characters that work for a publishing company. YES! Give me all the books about books. Then add in a "forbidden" manuscript and a quirky You've Got Mail-style editing conversation in the margins? EXTRA YES! This was creative and cute and it was off to a good start.
Then it went absolutely nowhere... for the longest 320 pages (or in my case, 4 hours on 2.75x speed audio) of my life. I kept waiting for something interesting to happen: for the chemistry to grow, for the characters to experience a real conflict, for literally ANYTHING - and it just... didn't. I can't even say that it was necessarily a bad book, it was just so mediocre that it was almost painful.
One thing I will say was super offensive, however, was the fact that Savannah's sister is very obviously fatphobic and there's really no discussion about that or growth in the area. Throughout the entire story, she's obsessively working out, talking about needing to be skinny, and telling her sister that she needs to do the same, even commenting on her weight at times. It's really toxic and brushed off as "she's just so busy all the time" or "she's a workaholic that loves fitness." No, the girl is a bully. And towards the end of the story, you're supposed to feel bad for her. Well, honestly, I didn't. Without this plot line, I think I would have actually enjoyed the book a little more - not a lot, but at least a little more.
I can't say I recommend this one. I can't say I hate it either, but I'd never want to pick it up again.
Graphic: Body shaming, Fatphobia, Bullying, and Eating disorder
Moderate: Infidelity and Toxic relationship
kylieqrada's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
Graphic: Infidelity, Fatphobia, and Body shaming
Moderate: Eating disorder, Blood, and Toxic relationship
Minor: Death of parent
lea_fox's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.0
- It is set in a publishing house.
- It mentions librarians.
The CONS:
- The miscommunication trope should be shot and thrown out back — & disallowed from this point forward.
- This ‘meet cute/slow burn’ romance is really a boring fiction novel in disguise.
- A heinous self-destructive family portrait — this sister/sister relationship is so bad, I wanted to poke my eyeballs out (and my ears).
- So, you’re not a size two but being a size four is still not good enough — talk about horrendous body image issues.
- This audiobook is 8hrs long — the main ‘couple’ kisses at 7hrs and 38mins (face palm). I mean wtf? They hold hands like good children too.
- Not only is this book fat-phobic but deals with an obsessive compulsive desire to be pretty (and white) at all times — including a daily step count which is mentioned five thousand times, and drilled into our heads.
- No mention of any explicit content — she was unwilling to even use the phrase ‘bat SHIT crazy’ in a moment that so needed it.
- The romance side of the book had absolutely no banter, no sexual tension, and no physical contact. Even Jane Austen would be insulted.
- OH — features a he-left-me-for-my-younger-sister relationship, which is disgusting and wrong.
- How did I NOT DNF this???
Graphic: Fatphobia, Body shaming, and Toxic relationship
tea_rea's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.0
Minor: Bullying, Body shaming, Toxic relationship, and Gaslighting
bearystarry's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.0
Moderate: Fatphobia, Body shaming, Eating disorder, and Toxic relationship
lindseyhall44's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
3.5
The novel follows Savanah , an assistant editorial employee at a small publishing firm, who dreams of publishing her own romance book. When Savanah hides her manuscript away in the arc room (advanced readers copy), she returns to find it edited in the margins. Together Savanah and her mystery editor work together to improve her manuscript by leaving notes in the margins, and possibly fall in love in throughout the process.
I think the setting is what I loved most about the book, since I yearned to be in the cozy atmosphere myself. That being said, while the setting development was beautifully crafted, I struggled a bit more with the pacing and characters. Savanah was a messy yet lovable character (which I appreciated) but her mystery editor seemed to be pretty obvious in my opinion, and some of the mid communication frustrated me. The pacing is another thing that felt a little stilted, though that is sometimes the case with mixed media literature.
Overall, I definitely enjoyed this novel, and would recommend it to anyone looking for a sweet PG romance.
Graphic: Infidelity
Moderate: Body shaming, Fatphobia, and Toxic relationship
kb33's review
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
2.0
Moderate: Toxic relationship
Minor: Death of parent, Infidelity, Fatphobia, and Pregnancy