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The Last Dragon of the East by Katrina Kwan

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littleskylights's review

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adventurous dark hopeful fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? It's complicated

4.0

A very enjoyable read!

I wouldn't say that it necessarily blew my mind in any way, but it was a fun story, and I enjoyed the characters and the plot. It was pretty obvious from the beginning what the twist was, but it was still interesting to watch it unfold.

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bluemoonrabbit's review

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adventurous fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

2.25

If I have to read "my fated one" one more time I may rip out my hair.

The book was mostly fast paced (minus some slog in the middle), especially fast at the end, it could have benefitted from more pages, I really wanted to like this book, in fact, the first 40% was enjoyable, and the book initially sat at 4 stars. The beginning really caught my attention, I loved the idea of Sai being a matchmaker and the opening scene was very well done in my opinion, a great way to open a book, but by the 40% mark the story starts slowly crumbling apart until it becomes a complete mess by the end. Specifically,
it all fell apart when Jyn got injured in the desert (according to the notes past me made at least).
 

I am not sure where to even begin with this book, so I guess I will start with the horrendous prose. I did not notice it in the beginning, the writing seemed fine initially, but the more I read, the more annoying and juvenile it was, the prose is just so crap and I can't put into words why, it is just such poor quality. The dialogue is bad too, it is unnatural for one, but once Sai finds Jyn it gets even worse. I could go on and on about how much I hated Sai's use of petnames, he didn't even pick one pet name, he called Jyn every crappy nickname under the sun and the author always inserted them not only into the most awkward unnatural places, but the sheer quantity of the petnames made me want to put the book down forever. 

The petnames are made even worse by the fact that their love feels so half baked and forced to begin with, the worst thing about reading this book was the fact I would read a passage and see what exactly the author was trying to do, convey, set up, and not in a good way, I would read a crappy paragraph and go "I see she is trying to set up Sai to have xyz personality and bring that back later in the book". I should not be able to pick apart a book like that when I am casually reading in bed. 

This kind of like transparent writing made it really hard to believe they liked eachother, it was so instalove, which I don't even hate, and it technically makes sense here but it was still hard to read, especially because there was a grumpy sunshine trope shoehorned in, made worse by Jyn's very rough and awkward transition from "Go away Sai" to "I love you". All just so...unbelievable?

The characters were half baked too, all of them but especially the supporting cast. Captain Tian and his relationship to Sai made no sense, Feng was annoying and
her death meant nothing
, and that one
weird cannibal guy
was a wild card we did not need. The emperor's characterization sucked too. And Sai, that man was SO stupid and for what? For one, he can see red threads of fate but
won't believe in shamans and dragon scales? He was also so stupid for punching Captain Tian, I had to put the book down.
Jyn was another bad one, her
self harm scene was so random, we have had 0 indication beforehand aside from her brooding a bit and now she is all depressed and cuts herself? So depressed she tried to kill Sai as a kid?
. So random. 

Alot of the story is really unrealistic, the sheer violence and how much the characters got hurt, even with adrenaline there is no way they could have moved let alone kept figting throughout the story, yes fiction will be unrealistic but this story took it way too far to the point of breaking immersion. The violence happening to begin with was odd, this reads like a solid younger end YA then randomly adds crazy gore out of nowhere, imagine watching Ponyo and Miyazaki inserts the level of violence you see in Princess Mononoke into Ponyo, very jarring. Also Sai caring so much
about the blue dragon kid, then never even mentioning all the dead kids he had from his 700 lifetimes is SO weird like, fuck dem kids I guess because he didn't have them with his "fated one"? Him losing control was also just cringey, with the red eyes and bloodthirst and "omg Sai stop this, they're dead" please, is this Twilight?
At this point, I am just complaining about random scenes that made no sense, of which there are ALOT, so it is better to move into worldbuilding. 

It was lackluster. Honestly we know nothing, and when we learn things, it doesn't make sense, such as the
super tall library, when Sai was looking at all those books on that shelf, the books were so diverse in topic, you'd think a library that large would be much more organized.
The environments make no sense, jumping between deserts and mountains and seas, but they travel for 2 days on foot? Everything lacks thought, basically. Even the story of
the dragons interluded within the book, though clearly a stylistic choice, came off as lazy.


Lastly, two large complaints, all to do with the last chapter or 2. One, DON'T FEED A NEWBORN HONEY ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL HER? Two, Sai was lowkey a pedo I can't lie,
his logic for staying away from Jyn as she grew up wasn't "Gee would it not be weird to see my future lover grow from a baby into a woman, would it not be weird to eventually have sex with someone you knew for their whole life when you were the adult", no, HIS logic was " I want Jyn to have a normal childhood without me because she has been through so much", YOU SHOULD NOT WANNA BE IN YOUR WIFE'S CHILDHOOD EVER IF SHE IS A BABY AND YOU ARE A GROWN 25YO MAN!!!


Anyway, book cover is gorgeous and I've read worse.

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forestmaiden's review

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adventurous dark sad fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

5.0

One of my favorite books this year and got me out of a slump. Beautiful prose and use of mythology and it was truly a heart wrenching story. I really enjoyed that it read like a fairytale. The twists were great as well!

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16daviseli's review

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adventurous challenging dark emotional tense slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

2.75

Very predictable from the get-go and the characters make choices which are illogical as well as skim over big issues- such as self- harm. Would not recommend, but I did enjoy the ending of this book.

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boba_nbooks's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional mysterious reflective medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.5

Spice Rating: 🌶️.5 / 5

This novel is a love letter to the fated mates trope, and I ate it up.

Sai has only ever known a quiet life taking after his deceased father's teahouse. However, he does have a supernatural power: he can see the red threads of fate that connect soulmates. Every day he sees healthy red threads or even black ones for those whose soulmates have passed on. But his own thread is a strange grey color that he has never seen on anyone else before. Sai is determined to use his power to bring his mother money to cure her illness, but when he tries the miracle cure of a dragon scale, the emperor catches wind and blackmails Sai into finding the last dragon of the east for him. From there, Sai is thrust into a years-long war, foreign lands, and possibly the end to the search for his Fated One.

The Last Dragon of the East is a beautiful story that pays homage to Chinese mythology and shows the lengths people will go to in order to find their soulmates.

Sai is unlike any hero you've met before. He doesn't know how to fight, he's sarcastic, and he's great at making tea. I love his refreshing character and the fun way he banters with other characters. Throughout the novel, Sai's reality is challenged time and time again as he realizes there is so much more to this world, and his life, than he thought.

I can't say much more without spoiling the story, but trust me when I say readers who love a good love story and fated mates who find each other through time will absolutely love The Last Dragon of the East.

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zluvsreading's review against another edition

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adventurous challenging emotional funny hopeful mysterious reflective sad tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

How the actual heck do I convey my love for this novel? There’s just no way, but I will try I suppose.

This was such a compelling emotional read. The world building was great and I loved the characters that had so much personality. 

Sai, my silly little man. He was everything and more to me. I admired his strength and how he handled everything that happened in the last few chapters of the book. He was so down bad for his Fated One, it was amazing to read about. Just overall such a funny character who I will cherish forever and want to protect forever. Sai fan page over here!!

Jyn!! Oh my heart bleeds for Jyn. She’s just such a badass and the fact that she had to deal with what she had to deal with for so long is just like wow. She’s stronger than I ever could be in every way imaginable. I love protective badass FMCs and she was the embodiment of that. It was so funny seeing her interact with Sai when they first met. 

Okay, so I just started crying again thinking about the ending like!!!!!! I just think that this is such a great read and everyone should read it. A beautiful fantasy first and foremost but with a love story at the heart of it. The romance was so good, I was giggling and blushing and crying and just like so interested in everything that I was reading.

There’s lots of violence, gore, blood, and just overall death in this but it was written in a way that you can feel it so heavily. I could smell and taste and see and hear everything. All my senses were attuned to this book!!!! Truly no words for how much I love it. Possibly my new favorite romantasy of all time. I love Sai and Jyn and A-Ma. I wish nothing but the best for them.

I love that some characters got what they deserved but oh my god, the swift deaths in this made my heart drop because I was not expecting them at all. My heart hurts. 11/10. I love pain, do it again! 

Thank you to NetGalley and Saga Press for allowing me to read an eARC and Saga Press for providing me with a physical ARC as well. 

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devynreadsnovels's review against another edition

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adventurous challenging dark emotional hopeful mysterious reflective sad medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

4.0


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