Wow. Short but great. Left me wanting to know more of the story.
I like to think of this story as an amuse-bouche. There's just enough there that, if your tastes so run, your mouth is watering for more. It's a little short in world context, for my taste, and the climax scene feels like it stretches a touch long, but it's definitely enough to make me interested in the 'verse.
dark reflective tense fast-paced
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
The story itself is ok but it definitely needed more editing to make it flow better.
Minor: Blood, Death, Physical abuse, Torture, and Violence