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Blank Spaces by Susana Mohel

ldooten's review

2.0

I couldn't connect with these characters or make myself be invested in whether or not they end up together. I found Ariel to be immature and rude most of the time. She meets Lance one time, he's a complete d$ck to her, and she fantasizes about him daily after that. I've seen some hot men in my life, but that doesn't constitute daily fantasies. Lance was a d$ck the first and second time they meet. He tried to be better the 3rd time, but then Ariel was rude. I just couldn't enjoy that. The emails in between the chapters seemed weird, and since I only saw his side, I wondered if the things he was saying was even appropriate. This was a first for me, but I would be willing to give this author another read.
I voluntarily reviewed an advanced readers copy of this book.