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brogan7's review
adventurous
hopeful
medium-paced
4.5
A rollicking tale! Dragons, colonialism, a boarding school, a rebellious, smart, questioning student, young love, a world of inequalities and contradictions, all make for a grand adventure.
There are some distractions, such as lengthy bifurcations of the plot to attend to finer points of chemistry in an invented language, well beyond this reader's interest, and a focus and fascination on the finer points of sewing that made me think if she talks about another dress I am just going to stop reading.
Also, parts of the book (the chapter titles, the style) read more like a 19th century English novel than like 21st century steam punk fantasy, but again, I felt great tolerance for this because the characters, the world building, the dragons!!, the relationships between the characters, and the storytelling were so rich and engaging and compelled you to read more.
I'm not sure what were the antecedents to this story...the boarding school / magic boarding school trope but it's much more than that...a story of resistance and diversity and alliances in the face of the ugliness of the world in ways both big and small...
Not to be missed. We all want to be Nampeshiweisit now!
There are some distractions, such as lengthy bifurcations of the plot to attend to finer points of chemistry in an invented language, well beyond this reader's interest, and a focus and fascination on the finer points of sewing that made me think if she talks about another dress I am just going to stop reading.
Also, parts of the book (the chapter titles, the style) read more like a 19th century English novel than like 21st century steam punk fantasy, but again, I felt great tolerance for this because the characters, the world building, the dragons!!, the relationships between the characters, and the storytelling were so rich and engaging and compelled you to read more.
I'm not sure what were the antecedents to this story...the boarding school / magic boarding school trope but it's much more than that...a story of resistance and diversity and alliances in the face of the ugliness of the world in ways both big and small...
Not to be missed. We all want to be Nampeshiweisit now!
Content Warnings
Graphic: Colonisation
Moderate: Genocide, Racism, Sexism, and Death of parent
Minor: Bullying, Animal death, and Classism
svangleboyer's review against another edition
adventurous
emotional
reflective
tense
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
To Shape a Dragon's Breath is an interesting fantasy that takes place in an alternative timeline where North American is colonized by Anglish conquerors. Anequs, an Indigenous woman living on the island Masquapaug, finds a dragon egg that hatches and becomes bonded to Anequs. Anequs ends up going to a dragon academy on the mainland to learn to shape her dragon, Kasaqua, breath so that the dragon doesn't accidentally hurt anyone. Anequs has to fight against the prejudices from the Anglish who see she has nothing but a savage while trying to learn how to be what Kasaqua needs to survive and thrive in the world.
I enjoyed gaining more perspective into the Indigenous culture that Anequs belongs too. Some of my favorite chapters were hearing old stories from their culture. I find their storytelling to be so magically and feel like I am experiencing it along with the characters. I actually wish we could have had more focus on her culture as opposed to the Anglish trying to convert Anequs. I also love all the various dragon breeds because each one is so unique and have their own personalities that I find so endearing. I admire Anequs for sticking to her culture and not letting the Anglish try to convert her to their way of thinking and trying to make her a proper lady. It was nice to see a strong female who is not afraid to stand up for herself against authority and not letting others insult her and her people for being different from what society says is normal.
While I wanted to love this novel, I was a little disappointed, so I had to give it fewer stars. One major issue I had is that this novel is just too long. The author did a wonderful job world building but there was quite a bit of info dumping that just didn't need to be in the novel. I believe it could easily have been 200 pages short and still made a strong impact. There were several times I put down the book because it was a little overwhelming. I mean if you are going to give us multiple chapters about the actual class lessons, maybe provide some images to accompany the actual lessons specially the various skiltas that is essential to shaping a dragon's breath.
The other major issue I had was that this book had me sold from the beginning because I am a sucker for dragons. While there are dragons throughout the novel, there are more just there, and you don't really get to see what they can do. I would have liked to see the dragons have a more active role in the story besides just being with their owners.
I will be reading the sequel because I am interested to see what comes next for Anequs.
I enjoyed gaining more perspective into the Indigenous culture that Anequs belongs too. Some of my favorite chapters were hearing old stories from their culture. I find their storytelling to be so magically and feel like I am experiencing it along with the characters. I actually wish we could have had more focus on her culture as opposed to the Anglish trying to convert Anequs. I also love all the various dragon breeds because each one is so unique and have their own personalities that I find so endearing. I admire Anequs for sticking to her culture and not letting the Anglish try to convert her to their way of thinking and trying to make her a proper lady. It was nice to see a strong female who is not afraid to stand up for herself against authority and not letting others insult her and her people for being different from what society says is normal.
While I wanted to love this novel, I was a little disappointed, so I had to give it fewer stars. One major issue I had is that this novel is just too long. The author did a wonderful job world building but there was quite a bit of info dumping that just didn't need to be in the novel. I believe it could easily have been 200 pages short and still made a strong impact. There were several times I put down the book because it was a little overwhelming. I mean if you are going to give us multiple chapters about the actual class lessons, maybe provide some images to accompany the actual lessons specially the various skiltas that is essential to shaping a dragon's breath.
The other major issue I had was that this book had me sold from the beginning because I am a sucker for dragons. While there are dragons throughout the novel, there are more just there, and you don't really get to see what they can do. I would have liked to see the dragons have a more active role in the story besides just being with their owners.
I will be reading the sequel because I am interested to see what comes next for Anequs.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Death of parent, Colonisation, Misogyny, Bullying, Mental illness, Classism, Ableism, Emotional abuse, Racial slurs, Hate crime, Sexism, Slavery, and Toxic friendship
Moderate: Racism, War, Homophobia, Animal death, and Death
Minor: Murder, Sexual harassment, and Forced institutionalization
ashylibrarian's review against another edition
adventurous
challenging
emotional
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.75
*Thanks to NetGalley and the Publisher for an eARC of this book in exchange for a review. All opinions are my own.*
I'm going to start this review by saying I am still confused as to which reading group this book falls. It is listed everywhere as an adult novel but I very much feel like it could be listed as an older YA book.
I appreciate the world-building that happened in this book. I enjoyed learning about the indigenous groups and how colonization has affected their ability to live. I also could not pass up a dragon story.
Anequs is a strong, independent, and determined character. She embraces her Nampeshiweist with excitement while also understanding what this dragon and power mean for her community. Even though the Anglish have other plans for what should happen to the Nampeshiweist, Anequs pushes for her acceptance into the Anglish dragon school and works to prove that she has more than what they expect.
This story did feel like it dragged on at certain points without much happening. I feel like it could have been a shorter book with more punchy scenes to help keep the plot moving.
Overall, this is a unique, well-done fantasy that leaves readers with much to think about.
I'm going to start this review by saying I am still confused as to which reading group this book falls. It is listed everywhere as an adult novel but I very much feel like it could be listed as an older YA book.
I appreciate the world-building that happened in this book. I enjoyed learning about the indigenous groups and how colonization has affected their ability to live. I also could not pass up a dragon story.
Anequs is a strong, independent, and determined character. She embraces her Nampeshiweist with excitement while also understanding what this dragon and power mean for her community. Even though the Anglish have other plans for what should happen to the Nampeshiweist, Anequs pushes for her acceptance into the Anglish dragon school and works to prove that she has more than what they expect.
This story did feel like it dragged on at certain points without much happening. I feel like it could have been a shorter book with more punchy scenes to help keep the plot moving.
Overall, this is a unique, well-done fantasy that leaves readers with much to think about.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Colonisation, Ableism, and Racism
Moderate: Violence, Genocide, and Homophobia
Minor: Death, Death of parent, and Animal death
quinnyquinnquinn's review
adventurous
emotional
inspiring
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.25
Content Warnings
Graphic: Colonisation, Racism, and Bullying
Moderate: Child abuse, Genocide, Ableism, Emotional abuse, Homophobia, Classism, Violence, and Sexism
Minor: Death of parent, Suicide, and Animal death
readthesparrow's review against another edition
adventurous
emotional
hopeful
inspiring
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
5.0
I was a Dragon Kid.
I read the first Eragon book to tatters, and obsessively read the third around four times a year. Dragonology was my favorite -ology book. It was Lady Trent’s Memoirs, a series about dragon naturalism, that broke me out of my four year reading slump.
I haven’t read a good dragon book in a while, but I’ve been itching for one. To Shape a Dragon’s Breath is exactly what I needed to scratch that itch.
WORLDBUILDING
The story is set in an alternate history version of America based upon not Christian English beliefs but Anglo-Saxon, Old Norse, and Old English religion and culture. I loved how Blackgoose reinterpreted and structured these inspirations; for example, the political system is a cross between the real world early American democracy and the Anglo-Saxon aristocratic system with a king, thanes, and halls.
The magic system, too, is so well-done. It’s more of a magical alternate science system, which I would describe as a cross between chemistry and alchemy. Though the vocabulary is different (for example, iron is called isen and elements are called skiltas), the foundational concepts are the same, making it easy to follow as we learn about it beside Anequs.
I adore dragon fantasy stories that reinterpret our own history and natural science through its own lens. That’s no easy feat to accomplish, much less do it well. With To Shape a Dragon’s Breath, Blackgoose has created not only a fantastic science fantasy but also one of the best dragon fantasy books I have ever read.
FOLKLORE IN TO SHAPE A DRAGON’S BREATH
I could write an essay on the way Blackgoose implements folklore into her storytelling. However, this is a book review, and as such I shall restrain myself to a few paragraphs.
Folklore—more specifically, the telling of stories—is a major theme in To Shape a Dragon’s Breath. More than one chapter is a story within a story, framed by Anequs asking another character to tell her a story or telling a story herself. It’s obvious to me that Blackgoose is passionate about folklore, reinterpreting lore from real-world cultures with care.
Even the presentation of the novel itself has links to folklore. The chapter titles, when considered together, read as a bare-bones bedtime story version of the narrative. It’s so clever, and I absolutely cannot wait to see how Blackgoose continues the theme of folklore in the rest of the series.
PLOT
I sometimes struggle to enjoy some fantasy titles, as they tend to incorporate tropes and narrative beats I find tiring (for example, the love triangle and poorly handled fantasy racism).
However, Blackgoose not only avoids these tropes but actively challenges them. In example, although Anequs is interested in two characters, she plans to pursue both of them, avoiding a tiresome love triangle that so often drags books down for me. She also handles racism and bigotry on several levels. For example, by reflecting problematic tropes and narratives present in real-world literature through in-world books Anequs encounters, and exploring how those racist narratives effect Anequs’ life and relationships.
And now we come to the only caveat I have to say about To Shape a Dragon’s Breath.
The plot is largely concerned with worldbuilding, society, and culture. If you’re expecting a high-octane adventure fantasy, you will be disappointed. There are no sky battles or magic duels or special ancient weapons.
I’ve seen some other reviewers complain that nothing happens in this book. I disagree.
Things do happen, it’s just that those things concern cultural, scientific, and political worldbuilding, the navigation of social settings, and the development of character relationships.
At its core, To Shape a Dragon’s Breath about exploring a world through the eyes of an Indigenous teenager living in a colonial world and moving through a restrictive social structure she refuses to assimilate into.
The plot, therefore, is about what she learns and who she learns it with. For someone expecting dragon battles or a fantasy boarding school mystery, it may feel as though nothing is happening, but something is happening: an exploration of the crossroads of race, gender, religion, class, and culture in this fictional setting throug nuanced, well-written dialogue between diverse, well-written characters.
It is a slow paced book, but like a good hike, the pleasure is in the journey and who you’re walking with.
To Shape a Dragon’s Breath provides a breathtaking trail and excellent company.
FINAL THOUGHTS
After finishing To Shape a Dragon’s Breath, I already missed the characters and the world. This is the first installment in a series, and I cannot wait to see what else Blackgoose has in store for us.
If you love dragons, science fantasy, or well-written diverse characters, I cannot recommend To Shape a Dragon’s Breath enough.
Thank you to Del Ray for providing a digital ARC via Netgalley. If you are interested in To Shape a Dragon’s Breath, it is available now.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Ableism, Colonisation, Racism, and Xenophobia
Moderate: Bullying, Genocide, Hate crime, Lesbophobia, Classism, Confinement, Homophobia, and Grief
Minor: Alcohol, Animal death, Blood, Death, Transphobia, and Medical content
booksthatburn's review against another edition
Content Warnings
Graphic: Racism, Classism, and Colonisation
Moderate: Xenophobia, Fire/Fire injury, Injury/Injury detail, and Genocide
Minor: Violence, Animal death, Grief, and Death
blacksphinx's review
adventurous
challenging
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
5.0
I can safely say that this book lives up to the promise of its incredibly original and interesting plot synopsis. In fact it's even more out of the box than you'd expect. I was confused when I opened the book and was greeted with a partial periodic table of elements - something left off the cover is that dragons don't breathe fire in this world, their breath instead reduces anything it touches to their base elements like carbon and nitrogen. Chemistry is a major and constant plot point!
This is a book that only could have been written by a Native American, and is a shining example of what we're all missing out on when publishers don't give minority voices a space in SF/F. This book tells a steampunk story in a magic school about a Girl And Her Dragon, while also being an unflinching account of the struggles of indigenous people at the turn of the century. Despite having a plethora of characters along almost every axis of diversity I can think of, no one felt like a hollow check mark on a list to me. I especially liked that the indigenous characters are not uniform in their opinions on how to shape the future (you know, like real people!). As you would also expect, the range of white characters realistically behave in ways of their time, with well-intentioned ones also being various degrees of racist/ethnocentric. It's a story that's both "important" while also being a great read on it's own, you know?
I found the plot itself to be beautiful while not neatly fitting into a standard action-oriented structure. If you need some sort of central mystery or struggle to unfold and then be solved by the end of the book, this one might not be for you. There's a revelation around the 60% mark that brought tears to my eyes. While it's not a YA novel, it's the kind of fiction that would have blown my mind as a young teen and I hope going straight to paperback allows it to fit into as many hands as possible.
My only complaint is that I wish there was a glossary of terms, even though I feel it was intentional so we feel as overwhelmed and out of place as our protagonist. While she eventually got the hang of things, my dyslexic self constantly struggled.
This is a book that only could have been written by a Native American, and is a shining example of what we're all missing out on when publishers don't give minority voices a space in SF/F. This book tells a steampunk story in a magic school about a Girl And Her Dragon, while also being an unflinching account of the struggles of indigenous people at the turn of the century. Despite having a plethora of characters along almost every axis of diversity I can think of, no one felt like a hollow check mark on a list to me. I especially liked that the indigenous characters are not uniform in their opinions on how to shape the future (you know, like real people!). As you would also expect, the range of white characters realistically behave in ways of their time, with well-intentioned ones also being various degrees of racist/ethnocentric. It's a story that's both "important" while also being a great read on it's own, you know?
I found the plot itself to be beautiful while not neatly fitting into a standard action-oriented structure. If you need some sort of central mystery or struggle to unfold and then be solved by the end of the book, this one might not be for you. There's a revelation around the 60% mark that brought tears to my eyes. While it's not a YA novel, it's the kind of fiction that would have blown my mind as a young teen and I hope going straight to paperback allows it to fit into as many hands as possible.
My only complaint is that I wish there was a glossary of terms, even though I feel it was intentional so we feel as overwhelmed and out of place as our protagonist. While she eventually got the hang of things, my dyslexic self constantly struggled.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Bullying, Ableism, Colonisation, and Racism
Moderate: Transphobia, Religious bigotry, Gun violence, Injury/Injury detail, Child abuse, Homophobia, Slavery, Violence, Classism, and Genocide
Minor: War and Animal death
lettuce_read's review against another edition
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
5.0
Content Warnings
Graphic: Racism, Bullying, and Colonisation
Moderate: Sexism and Genocide
Minor: Death of parent and Animal death
ezwolf's review
adventurous
emotional
hopeful
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
5.0
I always struggle with what to say when I really enjoy books and I really enjoyed this one.
Anequs is a fantastic protagonist and I loved her relationship with her family and her people and also the way she gathered other students. Her refusal to conform to Anglish societal rules and her dedication to wanting to learn only to help manipulate her dragon's breath to help her village. I wasn't sure what to make of Marta at first, but I'm glad that she was held accountable for her actions by the author and by Anequs.
The dragon's mythology was unique and made me consider aspects of bonded to a dragon I hadn't thought of before. Another thing I found really cool was the way the author presented a story told by a character. It would have its own separate chapter titled "This is the story that ____ told".
Thank you to NetGalley for making this available in exchange for an honest review!
Anequs is a fantastic protagonist and I loved her relationship with her family and her people and also the way she gathered other students. Her refusal to conform to Anglish societal rules and her dedication to wanting to learn only to help manipulate her dragon's breath to help her village. I wasn't sure what to make of Marta at first, but I'm glad that she was held accountable for her actions by the author and by Anequs.
The dragon's mythology was unique and made me consider aspects of bonded to a dragon I hadn't thought of before. Another thing I found really cool was the way the author presented a story told by a character. It would have its own separate chapter titled "This is the story that ____ told".
Thank you to NetGalley for making this available in exchange for an honest review!
Content Warnings
Graphic: Colonisation, Emotional abuse, Fire/Fire injury, Hate crime, Homophobia, Misogyny, Religious bigotry, Mental illness, Blood, Ableism, Bullying, Classism, Racism, Slavery, Violence, and Xenophobia
Moderate: Genocide, Grief, and Gun violence
Minor: Death of parent, Alcohol, Animal death, and Transphobia
dananana's review against another edition
informative
reflective
slow-paced
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.0
A debut with a compelling premise, but could have used a bit of editing to really meet its potential.
To Shape a Dragon’s Breath follows Anequs, an Indigenous young woman living in a fantasy world that closely mirrors the history of our own world. Her story begins in the equivalent of the 1840s, when she discovers that a Nampeshiwe – a dragon native to her land that has all but been wiped out – has laid an egg on her island. When the egg hatches, the dragon, Kasaqua, chooses Anequs to bond with. However, the knowledge of how to care for and work with dragons was lost years ago, so Anequs makes the difficult decision to enroll in an Anglish dragoneering academy. There, she will face hostility and colonialist racism as she begins to learn how to shape her dragon’s breath.
The beginning of this novel was incredibly stellar, and I really do love the premise of the story. The simple and direct narration worked for me and I found myself quite emotional over Anequs and Kasaqua’s bond! In addition, I loved the setting, especially the scenes that took place on Masquipaug (Anequs’s island). Those scenes were infused with a sense of community, history, and cultural details that kept me captivated. I was very intrigued by the themes of anti-colonialism and Indigenous strength. And I really loved everything to do with Kasaqua. I love dragons!!
However, I do have to say I felt a little underwhelmed with the rest of the novel. There wasn’t much a plot, beyond Anequs trying to excel at the Academy while facing racism. There was some action toward the end, but it felt very sudden and was over quickly. There wasn’t much build up of tension. And the writing style made me feel removed from any sense of urgency, as it would often summarize events in paragraphs afterward, without showing the scene and the immediate emotions of the characters.
While I enjoyed Anequs’s perspective, she didn’t have much of a character arc. She was calm and levelheaded, always had an answer for how to handle situations, and always saw the truth of situations. This isn't a criticism in and of itself, but maybe as a result of this characterization, she didn’t have much internal growth or internal difficulties. Even her relationships with her roommate, friends, and romantic interests weren’t especially compelling. The dialog was stilted, there was lots of worldbuilding explanation dumped into conversations, and it felt like she kept having the same conversations over and over. My reading doorways are character and plot, so I found myself wanting more.
Overall, I wanted to like this more than I did – I think it needed editing to meet its full potential, with the addition of more plot or character work to really get it there. Also. I just wanted more dragon scenes, there didn't seem to be enough! However, I think this book could still appeal to readers that like a strong setting and explorations of history through fantasy.
Thank you to Netgalley and the publishers for an advanced copy in exchanged for an honest review.
To Shape a Dragon’s Breath follows Anequs, an Indigenous young woman living in a fantasy world that closely mirrors the history of our own world. Her story begins in the equivalent of the 1840s, when she discovers that a Nampeshiwe – a dragon native to her land that has all but been wiped out – has laid an egg on her island. When the egg hatches, the dragon, Kasaqua, chooses Anequs to bond with. However, the knowledge of how to care for and work with dragons was lost years ago, so Anequs makes the difficult decision to enroll in an Anglish dragoneering academy. There, she will face hostility and colonialist racism as she begins to learn how to shape her dragon’s breath.
The beginning of this novel was incredibly stellar, and I really do love the premise of the story. The simple and direct narration worked for me and I found myself quite emotional over Anequs and Kasaqua’s bond! In addition, I loved the setting, especially the scenes that took place on Masquipaug (Anequs’s island). Those scenes were infused with a sense of community, history, and cultural details that kept me captivated. I was very intrigued by the themes of anti-colonialism and Indigenous strength. And I really loved everything to do with Kasaqua. I love dragons!!
However, I do have to say I felt a little underwhelmed with the rest of the novel. There wasn’t much a plot, beyond Anequs trying to excel at the Academy while facing racism. There was some action toward the end, but it felt very sudden and was over quickly. There wasn’t much build up of tension. And the writing style made me feel removed from any sense of urgency, as it would often summarize events in paragraphs afterward, without showing the scene and the immediate emotions of the characters.
While I enjoyed Anequs’s perspective, she didn’t have much of a character arc. She was calm and levelheaded, always had an answer for how to handle situations, and always saw the truth of situations. This isn't a criticism in and of itself, but maybe as a result of this characterization, she didn’t have much internal growth or internal difficulties. Even her relationships with her roommate, friends, and romantic interests weren’t especially compelling. The dialog was stilted, there was lots of worldbuilding explanation dumped into conversations, and it felt like she kept having the same conversations over and over. My reading doorways are character and plot, so I found myself wanting more.
Overall, I wanted to like this more than I did – I think it needed editing to meet its full potential, with the addition of more plot or character work to really get it there. Also. I just wanted more dragon scenes, there didn't seem to be enough! However, I think this book could still appeal to readers that like a strong setting and explorations of history through fantasy.
Thank you to Netgalley and the publishers for an advanced copy in exchanged for an honest review.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Colonisation, Racism, and Bullying
Moderate: Violence, Genocide, and Homophobia
Minor: Animal death and Suicide