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raven_morgan's review
3.0
One of the better stories on the Puppies' Hugo slates, but still not award-winning quality, in my opinion.
publius's review
4.0
The Hugo nominees were announced last Saturday, and [b:Totaled|24864779|Totaled|Kary English|https://d.gr-assets.com/books/1423349996s/24864779.jpg|44512767]by [a:Kary English|6427054|Kary English|https://s.gr-assets.com/assets/nophoto/user/u_50x66-632230dc9882b4352d753eedf9396530.png] was among the nominees for Best Short Story. I try to read and review as many of the nominees as possible, and since a quick Google search led me to English's short story on Wattpad, Totaled became my first post-nominee announcement read (I've already read Ann Leckie's [b:Ancillary Sword|20706284|Ancillary Sword (Imperial Radch, #2)|Ann Leckie|https://d.gr-assets.com/books/1413464739s/20706284.jpg|40026175], but I'll review that at a later date).
In recent years, I've gained a taste for a well written short story. Done right, a good story gets in fast, cuts to the meat of a problem, and gets out even faster. What a short story might lack in character development and world building, it can more than make up in poignancy, punch, and speed.
Also, it's much easier to turn off the light and go to bed after a short story than it is after a chapter in a good novel.
That's a long way of saying that I liked what I found in Totaled, and I can't wait to look up what else Kary English has written.
A bit about the story, though not so much as to spoil it: Totaled opens with the main character dead. Told from a first person perspective, English makes good use of next generation technology, looping in just enough science fiction (but emphasizing the "fiction") to give the story a "day after tomorrow" feel, but never losing touch of the human side that makes for the emotional ride in a story. Cutting edge tech may be interesting, but it might as well be a clever piece of speculation in scientific digest without addressing its human impact. Totaled makes use of some interesting ideas about technology, but leans heavily on the emotional waves the technology causes on its characters.
While I haven't yet read the other nominees in the Short Story category, I enjoyed Totaled, and I hope the best for her and her story in the Hugo voting.
In recent years, I've gained a taste for a well written short story. Done right, a good story gets in fast, cuts to the meat of a problem, and gets out even faster. What a short story might lack in character development and world building, it can more than make up in poignancy, punch, and speed.
Also, it's much easier to turn off the light and go to bed after a short story than it is after a chapter in a good novel.
That's a long way of saying that I liked what I found in Totaled, and I can't wait to look up what else Kary English has written.
A bit about the story, though not so much as to spoil it: Totaled opens with the main character dead. Told from a first person perspective, English makes good use of next generation technology, looping in just enough science fiction (but emphasizing the "fiction") to give the story a "day after tomorrow" feel, but never losing touch of the human side that makes for the emotional ride in a story. Cutting edge tech may be interesting, but it might as well be a clever piece of speculation in scientific digest without addressing its human impact. Totaled makes use of some interesting ideas about technology, but leans heavily on the emotional waves the technology causes on its characters.
While I haven't yet read the other nominees in the Short Story category, I enjoyed Totaled, and I hope the best for her and her story in the Hugo voting.
sonofthe's review
3.0
A near future brain science story.
Some interesting ideas, but ultimately without the short story punch I'm looking for. On the higher end of average.
Note: I read this as part of the Hugo Voter Pack.
Some interesting ideas, but ultimately without the short story punch I'm looking for. On the higher end of average.
Note: I read this as part of the Hugo Voter Pack.
krismoon's review
5.0
I read this story when it was free on Galaxy's Edge Magazine's website.
This is the first story I've read by Kary English, and wow! Color me impressed! I love the narrator in the story, especially because she is a smart, real, problem-solving woman. It might just be me, but there are a lot of courageous male protagonists in contemporary sci-fi, and it was a breath of fresh air to read about a woman doing amazing things. Er... her brain doing amazing things. You'll know what I mean when you read it. :)
Can't wait to read more from Kary English.
This is the first story I've read by Kary English, and wow! Color me impressed! I love the narrator in the story, especially because she is a smart, real, problem-solving woman. It might just be me, but there are a lot of courageous male protagonists in contemporary sci-fi, and it was a breath of fresh air to read about a woman doing amazing things. Er... her brain doing amazing things. You'll know what I mean when you read it. :)
Can't wait to read more from Kary English.
tatere's review
3.0
There were some nice touches in the writing and the general idea was pretty good. But I did not understand the ending AT ALL.
How can it start over if her brain tissue has degenerated? She's not software, she's spoiled meat. It makes no sense to me at all - there must be something obvious that I'm overlooking, as it doesn't seem to have bothered anyone else. At first I thought it was a printing error in the file in the Hugo packet, but no.
How can it start over if her brain tissue has degenerated? She's not software, she's spoiled meat. It makes no sense to me at all - there must be something obvious that I'm overlooking, as it doesn't seem to have bothered anyone else. At first I thought it was a printing error in the file in the Hugo packet, but no.
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