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solar_power's review against another edition
adventurous
challenging
dark
mysterious
tense
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Content Warnings
Graphic: Murder, Blood, and Violence
Moderate: Homophobia, Abandonment, Child death, Bullying, Death of parent, War, Cursing, Religious bigotry, Sexism, Lesbophobia, Kidnapping, Body horror, Death, and Classism
Minor: War, Slavery, Genocide, Incest, and Miscarriage
tbd24's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.0
really interesting story but there is soooo much exposition and world building up front. it’s good world building! very thorough ! but I didn’t start getting -into- the plot till like halfway through. I’m excited for the next book, hopefully now that the audience knows about this world we can get straight into business
Content Warnings
Graphic: Blood, Body shaming, Violence, Death, and Murder
Moderate: Lesbophobia, Emotional abuse, Homophobia, Colonisation, Gore, Racism, Classism, Death of parent, and Incest
corallydeer's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
emotional
hopeful
mysterious
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
Although the beginning was kind of slow for me I enjoyed this book by the end. The fantasy elements were unique and explored in a racial way that I don't see too often. The extent of the portrayals for racism and religious bigotry was often quite sobering and a bit tough to get through, but it felt worthwhile by the end. It was also a bit tough, at first, to sympathize or relate to the characters since many of their situations felt so dire and the choices they had to make so manipulated, but by the end of the book I really rooted for the main group. They all grew in really great ways and I wanted so many of them to achieve real happiness and freedom from their abusive origins.
I will say, as someone who doesn't speak/know a lick of Spanish, that I made sure to pair the book with the audiobook so that I could hear how words and names were pronounced and I definitely think that was a 10/10 decision.
I will say, as someone who doesn't speak/know a lick of Spanish, that I made sure to pair the book with the audiobook so that I could hear how words and names were pronounced and I definitely think that was a 10/10 decision.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Child abuse, Pregnancy, Racism, Violence, Child death, Death, Death of parent, Domestic abuse, Religious bigotry, and Gore
Moderate: Racial slurs, Kidnapping, Cursing, Murder, Grief, and Blood
Minor: Misogyny, Slavery, Gun violence, Homophobia, Incest, and Colonisation
Child Abuseevelynnnn33333's review against another edition
adventurous
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.25
Content Warnings
Moderate: Infertility, Pregnancy, Death, Grief, Death of parent, Kidnapping, Medical content, Violence, and Sexual content
mitzee's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
emotional
sad
tense
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.75
A very hard read because the first 3/4 of the book really drags, there’s a lot of distrust, loneliness, racism (in an way) and abuse with very little humor or joy to accompany. There also is a lot of set up that I don’t think is needed for the story later on. I listened to the audiobook and definitely zoned out a lot until the last 25% in which interesting things started to happen.
It’s a shame because the magic and lore provides great opportunities for something really engaging.
It’s a shame because the magic and lore provides great opportunities for something really engaging.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Blood
Moderate: Violence
shottel's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
emotional
tense
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.25
Oh, how much I wanted to like this book more. And yet, unless you’re a fan of the fantasy genre specifically, or perhaps of South American-inspired settings, I couldn’t recommend it to you.
Let’s start with what went well: The setting. One of my favorite fictional settings I’ve encountered in a long time. I’m a huge sucker for religious themes and topics, which weigh heavy on the plot. I personally haven’t read much inspired by South America, so it was refreshing and new to me to see a fiction book draw heavily on its history and culture. I might read the sequel just for further worldbuilding.
Additionally, I felt the one-on-one fights were excellent. Clear and visceral. I’ve read more than a few good novels with confusing, poorly wrote fights that drag down the whole thing.
Now, what didn’t go well: The characters. There are two main protagonists in this novel. I deeply disliked them both. One of them is self-righteous, to the point of overlooking her own deeply heinous actions; the other is cowardly and perpetually impulsive, an awful mix that made for a character that repeatedly made her own situation worse and regretted it moments later. That’s not enjoyable to read. It’s frustrating. At times, I was rooting against both of them.
To make matters worse, there was only one character in the book I felt was compelling, and the author hid away his motives until about 80% of the way through the book. When his backstory got more detail I was actually frustrated because it made him deeply interesting. I would’ve greatly preferred reading the entire novel from his perspective. That’s notable, because I read this novel in part because I love sapphic women leads, but I now wish the book was about the straight guy.
The other thing I felt went poorly was the fights that weren’t one-on-one. Most notably, there is a particular large battle in the second half which comes off as incredibly lackluster. Startlingly so, in fact, given how much I felt the one-on-one fights were great. Generously, it felt like reading a college freshman’s attempt in a creative writing class that got a B-.
All in all, I only recommend this book if you’re a fantasy genre fan or want some more South American in your fiction. Otherwise, spend your time elsewhere, because if the setting won’t carry it for you, then characters definitely won’t.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Miscarriage, Racism, Death, Injury/Injury detail, Blood, Chronic illness, Body horror, Classism, Emotional abuse, Gore, Religious bigotry, and Violence
Moderate: Colonisation, Alcohol, Kidnapping, Sexual violence, Homophobia, Racial slurs, Rape, Confinement, Infertility, Child death, Fire/Fire injury, Incest, Pregnancy, and Sexual assault
Minor: Slavery, War, Vomit, and Medical content
belsbookramblings's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
5.0
A really great read, the sequel of which I have high hopes for. It made me feel deeply, in good or bad ways, regarding the characters and their actions.
It is important to highlight that the characters we follow are not heroes. They're not even really morally-grey characters. They can be cruel, wicked, violent, selfish, and twisted, and it is important to know that, as it is not everyone's cup of tea. The tension (and apprehension) is also quite a lot at times.
With all that, i really enjoyed the story and characters. It makes me wonder about the possibilities for this characters, in the future, but also what could have been. I was also never able to predict which direction the story was going so I was always curious and surprised.
It is important to highlight that the characters we follow are not heroes. They're not even really morally-grey characters. They can be cruel, wicked, violent, selfish, and twisted, and it is important to know that, as it is not everyone's cup of tea. The tension (and apprehension) is also quite a lot at times.
With all that, i really enjoyed the story and characters. It makes me wonder about the possibilities for this characters, in the future, but also what could have been. I was also never able to predict which direction the story was going so I was always curious and surprised.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Violence and Racism
creolelitbelle's review against another edition
After the first 5 chapters, I feel like the world's and character developments are not progressing into anything substantial. I should be invested into the book somehow by now, but instead I feel disconnected. The characters of Reina and Eva just feel "there". The story's premise is very intriguing to me, because I love mythology retellings from other cultures and magical worlds with complex political systems. However, the execution is not done in a captivating way. The writing has me curious but only enough to keep turning pages for the sake of adding to my read count, not because I care about what's happening to who. By chapter 6, I should have a more concrete idea of who these characters are. The author had amazing ideas but maybe could have used more guidance in bringing them to fruition.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Violence and Racism
Moderate: Colonisation and Classism
tigger89's review against another edition
dark
emotional
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
The world building in this novel is fantastic. It's a fantasy world based on Venezuelan history and folklore, with a magic system centered around using real-world metals as reagents. There were indigenous people who lived in the land before human colonizers arrived, as well as a revolution that brings to mind the rebuffing of certain real-world colonial empires. This is the first book of a series, and honestly it's mostly set-up. But the set-up is so interesting that I didn't even care. I can't say enough how much I love the magic system. It's exactly the right balance of simple and complex.
The dual-PoV was done very well. I found the two voices to be distinct, and the characters were believable. Sometimes they did foolish things — very foolish things — but those mistakes seemed natural. The supporting characters were also excellent(Maior was my favorite, by the end). I'm not sure what I think about Javier. I feel like I know where the author is taking his arc, and I think it's going to annoy me. I'd say he's honestly the biggest weakness of the entire book for me, because he leans on tropes — the sick boy, the jerk, the master manipulator — that I'm not a huge fan of, and yet he's so central. Fortunately he's not the only relationship present, so that softens the annoyance a bit, and the fact that Maior exists almost cancels his unpleasantness out.
The author is also an illustrator and has drawn her five primary characters. They appear in the book, some at the start of part 1 and some at part 2, and can also be viewed on her website. If you're a visual reader like me, I recommend checking all five portraits before you start reading so your brain performance of the book doesn't do any odd recasting. There is sapphic rep here, though in this first book at least it's predominantly incessant longing with some small payoff near the very end. The author claims that the next book will be spicier, so I imagine it will get more development later.
The book has frequent action sequences, mixing physical combat with spellcasting. This is going to be a weird comparison, because the settings and plots are nothing alike — not to mention I trust this author more than I trust Cassandra Clare — but whenever the characters were fighting I kept getting Shadowhunters vibes. In a good way. Don't @ me, I said it was weird.
The dual-PoV was done very well. I found the two voices to be distinct, and the characters were believable. Sometimes they did foolish things — very foolish things — but those mistakes seemed natural. The supporting characters were also excellent(Maior was my favorite, by the end). I'm not sure what I think about Javier. I feel like I know where the author is taking his arc, and I think it's going to annoy me. I'd say he's honestly the biggest weakness of the entire book for me, because he leans on tropes — the sick boy, the jerk, the master manipulator — that I'm not a huge fan of, and yet he's so central. Fortunately he's not the only relationship present, so that softens the annoyance a bit, and the fact that Maior exists almost cancels his unpleasantness out.
The author is also an illustrator and has drawn her five primary characters. They appear in the book, some at the start of part 1 and some at part 2, and can also be viewed on her website. If you're a visual reader like me, I recommend checking all five portraits before you start reading so your brain performance of the book doesn't do any odd recasting. There is sapphic rep here, though in this first book at least it's predominantly incessant longing with some small payoff near the very end. The author claims that the next book will be spicier, so I imagine it will get more development later.
The book has frequent action sequences, mixing physical combat with spellcasting. This is going to be a weird comparison, because the settings and plots are nothing alike — not to mention I trust this author more than I trust Cassandra Clare — but whenever the characters were fighting I kept getting Shadowhunters vibes. In a good way. Don't @ me, I said it was weird.
Content Warnings
Moderate: Death, Toxic relationship, Kidnapping, Racism, Child death, Colonisation, Alcohol, Emotional abuse, Blood, Violence, Body horror, and Cursing
Minor: Death of parent, Genocide, Incest, Homophobia, Injury/Injury detail, War, Infertility, and Slavery
_annika__'s review against another edition
adventurous
dark
emotional
tense
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.25
Content Warnings
Moderate: Xenophobia, Blood, Kidnapping, Abandonment, Colonisation, Death, Slavery, Classism, Death of parent, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Murder, Genocide, Gore, Grief, Infertility, Physical abuse, Racism, Toxic relationship, Violence, and War