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imzadirose's review
2.0
Received from NetGalley for my honest review.
Didn't realize this was the 2nd one, probably wouldn't have requested it if I had. The concept is interesting as I love follow your own adventure stories. I was excited for an erotica one. Unfortunately, it's rather boring. Perhaps it could be better with longer stories, better writing and/or more detailed sex scenes? I dunno. It seems like the stories that I liked ended quickly and the stories I didn't like went a little longer. Initially I took my own path which ended up being the first story of going to Giselle's and having her play with me. It was OK. Concept wise, I liked it. Execution wise, it was short and on the boring side. The sexual stuff just wasn't very, it was rather tame. And Giselle is very very unlikable over all.
The only other story I even half way liked was the ice with the magician. It was better than the others, but still rather short and tame.
I followed the plot map for all the other stories and except for the 2 mentioned, were bored by all of them and/or disliked some. Just was dull, and not exciting, and really only qualified for an erotica because it was detailed. Detailed but very very boring. Won't try the first one, or any others, sadly.
Didn't realize this was the 2nd one, probably wouldn't have requested it if I had. The concept is interesting as I love follow your own adventure stories. I was excited for an erotica one. Unfortunately, it's rather boring. Perhaps it could be better with longer stories, better writing and/or more detailed sex scenes? I dunno. It seems like the stories that I liked ended quickly and the stories I didn't like went a little longer. Initially I took my own path which ended up being the first story of going to Giselle's and having her play with me. It was OK. Concept wise, I liked it. Execution wise, it was short and on the boring side. The sexual stuff just wasn't very, it was rather tame. And Giselle is very very unlikable over all.
The only other story I even half way liked was the ice with the magician. It was better than the others, but still rather short and tame.
I followed the plot map for all the other stories and except for the 2 mentioned, were bored by all of them and/or disliked some. Just was dull, and not exciting, and really only qualified for an erotica because it was detailed. Detailed but very very boring. Won't try the first one, or any others, sadly.
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