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Love in Focus by S.A. Garcia

sandygx260's review

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5.0

I am quite fond of this old school romance. Then again writing is about writing for me, not for those who snack on stories.

wickedwitchofthewords's review

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1.0

Um... No?!

Well, it took sooooooooo goddamn looooooooong for Aidan to fucking do something!!!
I mean, all this delay wasn't really necessary. I got bored after a while.
So, no. Not my thing.

iphigenie72's review

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2.0

There was a lot of potential here, but I felt like it wasn't quite realized. The time-traveling twist was semi-original (it did remind me the movie version of [b:Somewhere In Time|581126|Somewhere In Time|Richard Matheson|https://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net/books/1312018657s/581126.jpg|1464457] in the beginning), but I thought that was nicely handled. The rest though felt a little stiffling... the dialogue between the lovers was just unbelievable, like they were talking for posterity and not for each other. I think a shorter story might have been more suited, but I can understand why the author went for a slow realization by Aidan of what he had to do, still it felt too long.
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