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Overall, my response to this book was... meh. I try very hard not to anticipate plot twists, preferring to be surprised, but this one I saw coming a mile away, as would any reader, I think. There's a dead teenage girl in the story, but we find out pretty quickly that it was probably an accidental death than an intentional murder, which kind of dampens that avenue to horror. Most of the horror, in fact, is derived from the very real restrictions imposed on women in the 1950s; at one point, Mrs. Davenport goes to start a bank account and is told by an icy teller that she can't do so without her husband to sign off on it.
The writing itself, I think, somewhat dampened the story. The characters are almost entirely one-dimensional. Mrs. Davenport should be interesting, but she proceeds through the story meekly and accommodating to the narrative arc, not because it feels like her character is growing, but instead because the story demands it. The husband is controlling and abusive and nasty and similarly felt paint-by-numbers evil. Then there's the love interest, who is nauseatingly perfect and there is never a shred of an interesting thing about him. The recurring line, in fact, is that he "always says the right thing".
The one character who actually stood out was the female neighbor who joins with the husband to spy on his wife and report back to him. There's a fleeting line about it - does she hope he'll fall in love with her instead? - but then quickly that line of thought is abandoned and the character never actually receives her comeuppance, leading to a rather unsatisfying ending.
The dialogue also felt ... wooden. I can't quite put my finger on something specific, but it felt like the characters were often reciting their dialogue as a wooden actor would recite his lines. At one point, the main character pronounces their intentions - a major turning point for her character - but it feels oddly flat and we move quickly on from it. It felt rushed, somehow, as if, again, the characters were dutifully fulfilling their places in the narrative, rather than actual people responding to the situations they were placed in.
Also, <i>why was Joan there at the end when they finally caught Pete?</i> I read it twice thinking I missed something, but there is absolutely <i>no</i> reason why she needed to be there.
Overall, it was an interesting premise that never quite lived up to its promise.
Graphic: Domestic abuse, Rape
Minor: Child abuse, Racism
Graphic: Alcoholism, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Infidelity, Mental illness, Misogyny, Physical abuse, Rape, Sexism, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, Violence, Forced institutionalization, Murder, Schizophrenia/Psychosis , Gaslighting
Graphic: Alcoholism, Death, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Infidelity, Physical abuse, Rape, Self harm, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, Toxic relationship, Forced institutionalization, Kidnapping, Religious bigotry, Car accident, Murder
Moderate: Medical content, Gaslighting, Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Pregnancy
Graphic: Rape
Graphic: Adult/minor relationship, Domestic abuse, Rape, Sexual assault, Murder
Moderate: Alcoholism, Abortion, Alcohol
I have to give Paulette Kennedy props for her almost addictive writing style. With every chapter, I had to know what was going to happen until I reached the end. I was so enraptured with Loretta and her journey of motherhood and womanhood in the 1950s that I found myself forgetting about the mystery that was happening until I got hit in the face with new information. The combination of historical fiction and horror, along with the addition of a mystery element, has worked very well for the book.
The main reason I had to dock points from this book is that some things, especially in the last hundred pages or so, felt too easy.
Despite this one gripe, I did find myself entertained by Paulette Kennedy's novel, and I loved the reason she wrote it. Beyond the reasons why I love a book, I love it when authors love their books, and you can tell Kennedy loved this book.
"It was time to find out who she really was. To take the cold, bracing plunge into reality, and come out the other side a changed woman. The woman she was meant to be."
Graphic: Death, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Infidelity, Mental illness, Misogyny, Physical abuse, Violence, Medical content, Medical trauma, Murder, Gaslighting
Moderate: Addiction, Alcoholism, Rape, Self harm, Sexual assault, Alcohol
Minor: Abortion
Moderate: Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse
Minor: Rape
Graphic: Domestic abuse, Rape, Sexual assault
Graphic: Alcoholism, Domestic abuse, Forced institutionalization
Moderate: Rape
Minor: Fatphobia, Self harm, Abortion
"If you could go back to a previous era, what era would that be?"
No thank you, I am good.
Graphic: Adult/minor relationship, Death, Emotional abuse, Misogyny, Physical abuse, Rape, Sexism, Sexual assault
Moderate: Sexual violence, Forced institutionalization, Vomit, Grief, Medical trauma, Pregnancy, Gaslighting