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secondhandbookshelves's review
adventurous
mysterious
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
2.5
I did not enjoy this one.
I read it over two days and could not tell you much about it except that there are five different types of mages, a war between monarchy vs libertarians, and that babies can be dragons.
The characters moods, tones & personalities wildly change throughout the story, but the main character did start and end with the same thought - making it home.
Also cows fight demons.
I read it over two days and could not tell you much about it except that there are five different types of mages, a war between monarchy vs libertarians, and that babies can be dragons.
The characters moods, tones & personalities wildly change throughout the story, but the main character did start and end with the same thought - making it home.
Also cows fight demons.
Content Warnings
Minor: Classism, Physical abuse, Violence, Confinement, Deadnaming, Death, Death of parent, Emotional abuse, Forced institutionalization, Genocide, Injury/Injury detail, Kidnapping, Murder, Racism, Slavery, and War
booksthatburn's review against another edition
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.0
SERVANT MAGE has the density of an epic fantasy in a novella-sized package, told from the perspective of a character who would usually be incidental to this kind of story.
Fellian is an interesting and well-defined character, I like her a lot, and she's what got me through this book. She's a commoner chosen for a specific but not unique skill, being used by people with a particular political angle and strategic goal that has very little to do with her everyday life. Where this fell apart for me is that it tries to fit a novel and a half of worldbuilding into a novella, gradually turning into a confusing blur of names and motivations that left me unsure of the point until the very end. In the final third of the book, Fellian is still asking questions about who people are and why things matter, and at one point is rebuked for doing so. It’s especially frustrating because this means the author knows it’s unclear, teases with the possibility of an answer and then declines to offer it when it would be most useful.
Even though there were a lot of details, most of them weren't useful in terms of understanding the secondary characters and their motivations. They seemed to fit character archetypes pretty generically and I kept mixing up who was who.
I think it's supposed to be a slow burn reveal that actuallyboth sides of this conflict suck and the Monarchists aren't as great as they seemed at first, but since the very first thing they do is kidnap Fellian and enlist her help under false pretenses which rob her of any meaningful agency for long stretches, I didn't spend any time thinking they were good. It ends up being a struggle between the group that will straight up murder a baby and the group that thinks it's fine to just cut one a little bit if it's for the greater good. By the end, it was impossible to think of either side as good, which is definitely the point of the book, but it felt like 20% kidnapping, 40% adventure, 35% confusing piles of unnecessary detail, with the final 5% as a manifesto about ordinary people making a difference for themselves while the bigger powers tear each other apart.
Fellian is an interesting and well-defined character, I like her a lot, and she's what got me through this book. She's a commoner chosen for a specific but not unique skill, being used by people with a particular political angle and strategic goal that has very little to do with her everyday life. Where this fell apart for me is that it tries to fit a novel and a half of worldbuilding into a novella, gradually turning into a confusing blur of names and motivations that left me unsure of the point until the very end. In the final third of the book, Fellian is still asking questions about who people are and why things matter, and at one point is rebuked for doing so. It’s especially frustrating because this means the author knows it’s unclear, teases with the possibility of an answer and then declines to offer it when it would be most useful.
Even though there were a lot of details, most of them weren't useful in terms of understanding the secondary characters and their motivations. They seemed to fit character archetypes pretty generically and I kept mixing up who was who.
I think it's supposed to be a slow burn reveal that actually
Content Warnings
Graphic: Death, Blood, Child death, and Classism
Moderate: Terminal illness, Body horror, Child abuse, Fire/Fire injury, Violence, Excrement, and Grief
Minor: Death of parent, Slavery, Confinement, Forced institutionalization, and Sexual harassment
ceruleanseas's review
adventurous
emotional
reflective
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.5
Fellian is a servant mage, blessed with the power of fire magic, but not with the social standing to be treated well by the new Liberationist government who killed her parents for sedition. When a Monarchist resistance group offers her the opportunity to escape her servitude, she takes it. What follows is a short and exciting story of the attempted rescue of a thousand refugees and a royal baby, and one woman's journey to find her place in the world.
The world building here is spot on, giving just enough detail to keep the story moving but not so much that it bogs down the narrative with exposition. The characters have complex and competing motivations that make the ending interesting, if not entirely surprising.
The world building here is spot on, giving just enough detail to keep the story moving but not so much that it bogs down the narrative with exposition. The characters have complex and competing motivations that make the ending interesting, if not entirely surprising.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Classism
Moderate: Forced institutionalization
Minor: Death of parent, Sexual harassment, and Murder
lacee's review
adventurous
challenging
dark
emotional
hopeful
mysterious
reflective
sad
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.0
Content Warnings
Graphic: Injury/Injury detail, Murder, Death, War, Child death, Slavery, and Violence
Moderate: Medical content, Death of parent, Blood, Forced institutionalization, Grief, and Sexual harassment
Minor: Cursing, Emotional abuse, Physical abuse, and Sexual harassment
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