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crafts_writing's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
Overall, I found this to be an enjoyable read. It's light-hearted but eventful with emotional scenes and multiple "side plots." Besides the basic synopsis, there wasn't much for a plotline, but there was a lot going on in this book: Penny's storyline, Sam's storyline, the mother's storyline, Judy's (and Mallory's) storyline, etc. In particular, I found myself loving the basic characterizations of each character but struggled to really get to know the side characters. I struggle to put it into words, but there was something missing from Judy and Mallory and later Andy's characterizations. It was hard to understand their motivations. Still, it was a minor flaw.
Other things I loved about this book: how easy of a read this book is. There were sections that were a little harder to read, but for the most part, this book flowed really nicely. I struggled a bit at the beginning because of how YA this story feels. The texting and references were silly and out of character, but once you get further in the book, you realize why. It becomes a bit more in character for them and the way they talk. But, I think this writing style would have been more appropriate with Penny being 15/16 and Sam being 17/18. If the writing style was different, this book could have easily been a new adult instead of a YA.
(Also, can we talk about the cover?! The hardcopy has a theme of light pink and gold, and the character art is beautiful!)
Another thing I loved is that some things didn't have perfect endings.
Some things I disliked: Sam's initial character. As a teenager, the "bad boy" type can really seem appealing, but as you get older, it looks like a giant red flag. Some of his actions and the way he reacted considering the seriousness of the situation were a bit off-putting.
Another thing I disliked was generally the first section of the novel. This is the author's first-ever fiction book, and it feels a little bumpy at the beginning. Penny acted overly aggressive, and some of the lines are weird or out of place. I think Choi needed to tweak the beginning after finishing her novel and adjust the characters accordingly. Sure, it's character development, but the shifts from "I hate you" to "you're my friend now" characterizations were like a blink. (I'm looking at you, Mallory).
Why I disagree with some bad reviews: I see a lot of people not liking the writing style, and I think people forget this is a young adult novel. Although both main characters are over 18, the book's demographic is teenagers. Of course, the characters in a realistic fiction story are going to act like whiny teenagers! Because, well, they kind of are. Although, I can agree with people saying Penny's character at the beginning is a bit rude and standoff-ish (actually, there were several moments I got whiplash by how rude characters were!) To me at least, this fizzled out more towards the end.
Pros: it's a light-hearted read, genuinely really funny at times, has good connections between the love interests, as well as creative and unique lines. Really easy to read right through.
Cons: bumpy start, writing/characters are too immature for some people, questionable morals.
Overall, I think it's a great read! If you're extra picky about your YA books seeming too immature, maybe skip this one. The language can come off as trying too hard for some people I've heard, and I can kind of see why. Otherwise, it's a semi-fast read and everything is nicely resolved.
Graphic: Rape and Sexual assault
Moderate: Alcoholism, Miscarriage, and Pregnancy
Minor: Racism
claireinhart's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.75
Graphic: Addiction, Alcoholism, Rape, Sexual assault, and Pregnancy
Moderate: Abandonment
Minor: Racism and Vomit
besohappily's review against another edition
3.25
Graphic: Adult/minor relationship, Mental illness, Panic attacks/disorders, Racism, Rape, Sexual assault, and Alcohol
mya_love's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
4.25
Minor: Rape and Sexual assault
jijireads's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
Graphic: Rape and Sexual assault
Moderate: Drug abuse
Minor: Drug use and Sexual content
theklutzybibliophile's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Panic attacks/disorders
Moderate: Rape and Sexual assault
Minor: Racism
duhitaap's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
Graphic: Addiction and Panic attacks/disorders
Moderate: Sexual assault
brikalb's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.5
Graphic: Sexual assault
autumnemmy's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.5
Minor: Rape and Sexual assault
_obsessing's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
Graphic: Addiction, Alcoholism, and Sexual assault