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Son of the Storm by Suyi Davies Okungbowa

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onthesamepage's review against another edition

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I appreciated the scope of the world and the fact that all characters are Black. The prologue does a pretty good job in setting up a bit of intrigue. Unfortunately, I found my interest steadily waning afterwards.

There's a lot of worldbuilding and a lot of information at the beginning, so the start is incredibly slow. I didn't find much to latch onto in the characters, either. At the point where I stopped, which is 14% into a pretty big book, I still had no clear idea of where these characters were going and what they wanted to achieve. 

I do think there's potential for an interesting story, I just don't think I'm the right reader for this book.

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lcgordon's review

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adventurous challenging dark slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0

The worldbuilding is incredible....which means the first third of the book is an absolute slog. It really picks up in interesting ways if you can make it through that. 

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A third of the way in, and it still just wasn't grabbing me. The plot feels very uninspired. 

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tilly_and_the_books's review

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adventurous dark tense medium-paced

4.5


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laurareads87's review against another edition

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adventurous dark mysterious medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0

I have had Son of the Storm on my TBR for quite some time; having recently read Okungbowa's short story in The Year's Best African Speculative Fiction (2021) [sidenote: pick up this anthology - it's fantastic] I was very much looking forward to it.
There is so much that I appreciated about this book, and I'm glad that it is going to be a series because I look forward to reading more set in this universe.  The world-building is incredible -- complex histories, social and political dynamics, and spiritual and cultural worldviews are really well developed.  I found Okungbowa's use of multiple POVs effective -- each one added to the overall story, and this structure allowed for rich character development as the reader learns more about each character in part based on how they view others.  If I had a complaint, I would say that the first 15-20% or so felt a little bit slow in terms of plot -- it picked up from there, though, and held my interest throughout.  I look forward to picking up the next book in the series.
<i>Content warnings:</i> violence, gore, xenophobia, blood, torture, death, murder, animal cruelty, animal death, fire injury/death

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jashanac's review

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adventurous dark emotional hopeful inspiring tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

I thoroughly enjoyed this book! The author touched on themes of imperialism, colorism, hope, faith in humanity, truth, freedom, and friendship/loyalty... SO MUCH! 

The character development was *chef's kiss* for me personally. I cannot wait for future installments to see what happens with these characters... the dynamic between Danso and Lilong is so great! 

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azrah786's review

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3.75

 [This review can also be found on my BLOG]

**I was provided with an ARC by Orbit Books UK in exchange for an honest review**

CW: racism/colourism, ageism, violence, torture, blood, body horror, immolation, death, genocide, murder, pregnancy, miscarriage/abortion

Son of the Storm commences a fresh high fantasy tale set in an exquisitely complex pre-colonial West African inspired world that will hook you in from the first page.

The continent of Oon is under the jurisdiction of the Bassai Empire where ethnicity and caste determine your status and where all must adhere to the Bassai Ideal. We predominantly follow 3 main characters – Danso, a mixed-race scholar with a love for stories; Esheme, a fixer’s daughter with an ambition to be seen as more than her parentage and Lilong, an outsider wielding legendary and forbidden magic – as they navigate their place in the empire.

Okungbowa’s narration vividly brings the people and place of this world to life - from the array of cultures and complex caste systems that shape society, to the layered settlements within capital of the mainland - it all immerses you right in. Though as a fantasy map lover along with the broader map of the continent I do wish that we had a map of Bassa itself and its concentric Wards.

The storyline is rich with politics, touching heavily on the themes of oppression and privilege but there is also some focus on immigration and the environment which I thought was quite notable. Alongside this are the whispers of forbidden knowledge which have you curious to chase all the stories just as much as Danso.

Each of the primary protagonists is of a differing background and their individual perspectives further enhance the story. Though I’ll admit I didn’t find any of the characters that likeable (except maybe Lilong). They were all frustrating in their own way however, I couldn’t help but be fascinated by their journeys and development through the book. I also thought it was an interesting choice to have interspersed chapters from some of the side characters too. I was worried that this would become confusing but it again helped add to the history/background of the story as well as understanding the leading characters and their motivations more.

My favourite element of the story though was the Ibor and its magic which I found equally badass and terrifying. From the lore and history behind it, to the way it is wielded and its consequences, I couldn’t get enough of it!! Definitely one of my favourite fantasy magic systems to date and I can’t wait to learn more about it in the rest of the series!

What I had some issues with was the pacing. It is for the most part quite slow going, which at the very beginning when the key details and world-building were being laid down was perfect. However, as the story progressed particularly the middle chunk of the book I expected a little bit more from the action scenes. I mean at one point some of the characters were being pursued and are travelling through the Breathing Forest, a forest that was literally heaving around them, and while the descriptions of the place opens your imagination to the danger of the terrain the stakes didn’t come across as high enough for the characters to me. I was also quite thrown with the pacing in the last few chapters because in comparison to the rest of the book everything happened so fast?

All that aside though I am very much looking forward to seeing how the story continues!
Final Rating – 3.75/5 Stars 

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queenmackenzie's review

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adventurous mysterious slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.0

Thank you to NetGalley and Orbit for the eARC in exchange for an honest review.

Firstly, the cover for this book in phenomenal, and a big part of why I requested a copy in the first place.  Unfortunately, it didn’t live up to my expectations, but I still have a lot of good things to say about it. In this review I’ll attempt to keep it as positive as I can, but I do want to explain my disappointments, so that others can decide for themselves. 

The book is told through multiple points of view, the main ones being Danso, Zaq, Esheme, and Lilong, though there are a few others that appear here and there. Danso is a scholar, and probably the brightest in his age group, but he constantly faces difficulties because he is Shashi, which means that one of his parents was either from the Savanna Belt or one of the islands. People from that side of the continent are paler, and so are regarded as less by the people of Bassa on the mainland, who see the perfect colour as being the closest to humus, the organic component of the soil from which the gods formed them. So essentially Danso is mixed race, and so despite being in an elevated position in society, he does not get the respect reserved for his order. 

One of the really interesting things Okungbowa has done with all of his point of view characters is make them outsiders to the higher castes in some way or another, and through this he explores class, race, and societal structure in very powerful ways. Esheme, for example, is Danso’s intended (as in they will be joined soon), and though she is the right caste because of her colour and education, she is looked down upon because her mother Nem (also a point of view character) came from a lower caste and works as a fixer, which means she helps people sort out their problems for the right price. Fixers are both feared and looked down upon, and Esheme wants to break away from that disrespect in any way she can. 

Zaq, meanwhile, is from the Savanna Belt, and is essentially an indentured servant, and he works as Danso’s Second, a bodyguard/manservant. Zaq wasn’t always enjoyable to read, but he’s a very interesting character because through him we get to see the perspective of someone who is being used by Bassa, yet who holds a great allegiance to the country oppressing him, and he has to deal with his feelings as he gets dragged away from the city as a fugitive because of Danso’s actions. 

Lastly, there is Lilong who was the character I was most looking forward to hearing from, because she is the catalyst for everything. She is a yellowskin from the Nameless Islands, which are believed to no longer exists, and she and her people wield a great and dangerous magic. She appears properly at the end of the first section, which I flew through, and becomes a point of view character from section two onwards. She also offers an interesting dynamic as someone who has grown up hating Bassa for their hatred and slaughter of her people, and now she has to come to terms with travelling with a Bassai who wants to befriend and understand her. While I did enjoy her and Danso’s development, a lot of her chapters felt a little repetitive. 

In fact, overall, this story was extremely slow-paced, especially in the ‘fantasy road trip’ (for want of a better term) part of it. When Danso, Zaq, and Lilong find themselves on the run, I thought things would speed up for them and become exciting, but instead they stay in one place for several chapters. Sure, there is some development between these characters that have been thrown together, but I’m not sure how much it warranted the pause. Where the action stays fast-paced is actually back in Bassa, where Esheme’s mother becomes incapacitated, so that she has to step into the role and finds herself caught in the trap Nem’s actions have caused. She acts decisively, and a lot happens during her chapters. Then, just as her story had gripped me again, the point of view would change to someone else. 

I am a big fan of many points of view, and love getting to know each character, but the way this was structured threw me off continuously, and messed up the pacing. Which is what my disappointment boils down to, in the end: pacing. The story is good, the characters are interesting, the world-building is incredible, but most of the time I couldn’t tell where the plot was going and was getting frustrated at the characters going round in circles in their own minds. It got to the point that, at the end of part three, I was convinced the book had finished, because the last line had the feeling of a conclusion, and then I realised I was only 80% of the way through! I know this isn’t helped by the format, which is eBook, and I do try to account for that, but it was still draining. 

As I’ve mentioned, though, the world-building is really really good. Even in the prologue, which throws you straight into the world full of unfamiliar (to me) words, the way Okungbowa works in the history, geography, and language is done in the perfect balance so that the reader is a little lost by but still intrigued. This continues throughout the book, especially in Danso’s chapters; because he is a scholar, he often refers to texts of history or legend which give the world a much bigger feel, and make me want to explore it further. I mean, there are two moons! How cool is that? And there are some really cool things with the sea, which I’m hoping we get to see more of in the future. The attention to detail is impressive, and it’s always exciting for me to enter a fantasy world that veers away from the typical medieval Europe, which is happening more and more. 

So overall, though I did spend some of my time dragging myself through the slow parts of the narrative and yelling at the characters to get a move on, I am glad I read this book, and will probably keep an eye out for the second one next year; perhaps it will elevate my opinion of Son of the Storm. Two of my favourite characters were actually minor ones (Biemwensé – grumpy badass older woman – and Igan – gender neutral warrior), and if there is more of them I’ll be happy.

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