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This was fine, but it really dragged once the whole drow/dwarf plot came in. Will not be continuing.
To be honest, it’s not bad. A solid 3 stars so far.
The concept is decent, and there is a story being shaped, but I’m just not invested. She’s a character going through the motions to survive, but honestly? I don’t know anything about her other than her character sheet. What is her personality? What does she like?
The only thing I know is that once she was teased for her rabbit like traits/looks- and that she was 20 and wanted to be a biologist (which in spite of that she shows no extra knowledge or insight on the veg or biodome around her. It’s a character sheet- no substance or personality).
So good concept- but 3 stars, and I just don’t want to spend my time reading something I know I won’t grow to like more.
The concept is decent, and there is a story being shaped, but I’m just not invested. She’s a character going through the motions to survive, but honestly? I don’t know anything about her other than her character sheet. What is her personality? What does she like?
The only thing I know is that once she was teased for her rabbit like traits/looks- and that she was 20 and wanted to be a biologist (which in spite of that she shows no extra knowledge or insight on the veg or biodome around her. It’s a character sheet- no substance or personality).
So good concept- but 3 stars, and I just don’t want to spend my time reading something I know I won’t grow to like more.
adventurous
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
Plot
Strong character development:
Yes
Loveable characters:
Yes
Diverse cast of characters:
Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Complicated
Moderate: Death