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Pilvilinna by Kerstin Gier

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adventurous hopeful mysterious tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.75

let me start with my cover review. all the pieces are there: i love the illustrations, the typeface of the title, the background color. the typeface and color for the author's name aren't my favorite but i don't hate it. my main issue is with the arrangement. like placing the hotel above the title looks wrong. with some repositioning, it could be so good.

and that's also generally how i felt about the actual contents. its plot summary makes for a very good story, but the way it was executed into a 300-page novel was rocky due to an uneven pace. the first 75% is largely uneventful, more slice of life, then the last 25% turns into an intense mystery/thriller. if it's not going to commit to being a slice of life, then i wish it would get to the actual conflict much earlier than three-fourths of the way through. also irritating that the peak climax of the book abruptly ends with "and then i went unconscious" while the day is saved by someone else. all the dissatisfaction of a deus ex machina, compounded by the fact that we don't even get to see it play out in real time, only the recap Sophie gets from others after the fact. and what ever happened with the
chandelier falling
? did it lost its relevance to the plot immediately? then what was the point of all that? talk about "some fake moment of suspense that all gets resolved two pages later"…

this is a reread for me. having some recollection (most of it i forgot) plus this time the ebook made it a lot easier to follow, but there were still a few too many characters for me to remember. like Mara Matthäus and Jaromir—they came up again at the end and i had no idea who they were. on my first read, i liked Tristan better than Ben. this time, i started on Ben's side because Tristan's vibes were a little too close to fuckboy for my liking, but at least he's hot and mysterious and anti-imperialist; Ben just becomes possessive and bitter. go home. also it was a little cringe to hear a character say, "I've fallen in love with you"—i know trauma bonding and all but it's been like a week, dial it back. but i have this issue with so much YA romance so maybe it's just me ??

as others have mentioned, the portrayal of women isn't great. Ella, Gretchen, Hortensia, Camilla, Ava, Ariane ("Whatsername"), Mrs. Smirnov/
Yegorov
, and
Mrs. Ludwig
are all portrayed negatively, with Fräulein Müller somewhere in the middle. like damn. i don't think Sophie herself had an "i'm not like other girls" mindset, but the writing definitely showed that she was not like other girls and therefore better and more worthy of romance.

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