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The Devil Crept In by Ania Ahlborn

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dark sad tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

3.25

I thought this book started off pretty strong. Our child narrator is pretty unreliable, but he's also trying his best to find his friend. The author does a good job painting a pretty unsettling picture of Deer Valley and its inhabitants. Stevie is neglected as his mother doesn't ever get him psychiatric help, his stepfather Terry is abusive, and the older brother Duncan ignores him. His only friend is his cousin Jude, so of course Stevie is going to try to go find him when he goes missing, even if everyone else thinks he ran away.
Eventually, Jude comes home, but he comes back different. After he returns, the story cuts to Rosamund, Ansel, and Otto. This story had promise at first, but soon it's pretty much just Rosemary's Baby. It felt like it could've been interesting and had a lot of potential. There were unique elements. I liked the bit with the animals and the first attack and then the resulting changed behavior where the animals become enthralled with Otto. Or, enslaved rather. Poor Sasha. It got hard reading about all these dead animals and pets with Rosie keeping the collars in a desk drawer. It's upsetting and doesn't do much to further the story. We know Otto is a bad guy, we're about to find out he murdered a kid. And not just murdered, but apparently ate Maxwell Larsen. Meanwhile, the Deadhead guy is our 1:1 with the Satanist neighbors from Rosemary's Baby, only now it's Rosamund's Baby. From the second he asked Rosie what she wanted and what she'd do, I knew it was game over. But the author doesn't let us stew in that dread for very long until Ansel dies and we know, alright that's cuz of Ra-Ra-Rasputin (AKA Deadhead). I didn't care a whole lot about Otto's story and even how Rosemary changed could've been interesting if the whole "she wants to leave but he's basically enchanted her" angle was leaned into more, but I also would've wanted the story to stay with Stevie instead. After this, the story kind of falls apart. So, Jude comes back and he's weird and wrong, but nobody will listen to Stevie about it. The story at end tries to lean into "Was it all imagined? Is Stevie just crazy?" but having Rosie's chapters means we already know it all happened. There's some gore and scares, but honestly? I don't think it really worked. Stevie killing Jude didn't seem earned. The big fight at the end with all of them is fine, but it wasn't a great conclusion. It felt like a bit of a let down to just go okay, here's years later. We also never get a real conclusion to Jude. He's gone and stays gone, appearing to be kind of allergic to sunlight like Otto except then he's dead so we'll never know. I felt like unanswered questions are fine, but not if what we're focusing on isn't as interesting. Honestly, I'm not sure how I would have ended it. An unhappy ending is fine, but this one felt like a cop-out.

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adventurous challenging dark mysterious tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.75


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