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3.0

This episode of a large sci fI/fantasy world has the glimmer and daring to be good and maybe great. The world building is creative and not much is revealed right away leading the readers imagination questioning things such as what's a gol? Or what really is the forever gate?

My only problem is that the episodes were split up and you would think that with each episode you'd have enough suspense to carry over to the next one. But for me the suspense was lacking and the characters were not that interesting, especially the main character.

Will I read the next episode? Possibly. But if it doesn't improve from there that's as far as ill probably go.
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