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Rouge by Leigh Talbert Moore

ivana_kutakzaknjigu's review against another edition

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4.0

*I will try to keep this review spoiler-free, since the element of surprise is one of my favorite things about Rouge.*

If there's one thing I had to tell you about Rouge, it would be read it! I signed up for this tour immediately after reading the summary, since I haven't yet read a romance set in a cabaret. It didn't disappoint. On the contrary.

I got lost in the story immediately, and it flowed so smoothly that I didn't notice the hours fly by. I absolutely loved how the author throws in small surprises in every chapter that will either make you gasp or giggle. Rouge is filled with extremely likable characters, well-developed and multidimensional. I admired Hale's strength and determination to keep Teeny safe no matter what the cost. I also very much liked Roland, a protective, friendly and fatherly figure, but with a few dark secrets of his own. The romance between Hale and Beau makes for quite a few toe-curling passionate, but also heartbreaking moments. The author doesn't make things easy for her characters and doesn't choose the most likely solutions-the pain and difficulties feel real, and the struggles that Hale has to overcome make for an exciting and emotional read.


Set in a New Orleans underground theater where Hale is the main star, Rouge provides a rich atmosphere- music, costumes, light, laughter, but there's a darker side to the glitter.After the heart-breaking ending, I was ecstatic to find out that this is the first book in the series, and I cannot wait to read more. No doubt, the sequel will be teeming with intrigues! (Poor Hale!)

Leigh Talbert Moore is a very talented writer. I loved everything about this story and I highly recommend it, mostly because it's not a typical HEA romance, but also for the great writing, lovable characters and suspense.

(Review copy provided by the author/blog tour host in exchange for an honest review)

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2.0

Hale Ferrer has always wanted to be freed from the confines of her run-down theatre home, but not for her own good. Not her future, but the future of her “adopted” charge, Teeny, is what she fears. Untalented girls, girls unlike Hale, girls much like Teeny, are sent to a much darker place than center stage. But when the new stage hand gets Hale’s attention, her focus is shifted and her heart is split between doing what she wants and doing what she knows she must do. Distraction from her mission is the last thing she needs.

Little does she know the battle for safety may cost her her heart.

I am so, so, so divided on this book. The historical element was fantastic; I loved getting to experience New Orleans during this particular time period. I’ve visited the city once and absolutely fell in love with it. The culture seeps out of every seam, and it’s the same way with this book. The theatre/cabaret setting, while somewhat provocative, is an interesting one- one I’ve never read about in a book before. And thank God- Hale, the protagonist, was relatable, which is something I don’t see much of in self-published books. She had depth, as did many of the other characters. I adored her romance with Beau, though it seemed to spawn out of absolutely nothing. Sadly, I’d have to diagnose it as a mild case of insta-love, but as shallow as their relationship was, I still loved it.

So, you might be asking, “If you enjoyed Rogue so much, why are you so riven over it? What’s not to love?” Well, read on, my friend.

Unfortunately, there was a colossal amount of sexual content that marred the story for me. While this is New Adult, and therefore has more of that type of content, there’s still quite a hefty amount. I might not have been so bothered by it had it not been for the raping going on. That’s really what crossed the line for me. I don’t recommend this book if you think you’d be bothered by that. If you’re wary, check the Quick Content Review below. Like I’ve stated there, nothing much is left out of those scenes, and I feel that was entirely unnecessary.

In the end, I guess I have a love/hate relationship with Rogue. I love the history, the characters, the romance. I abhor the lack of discretion when it comes to the sexual content. I simply wasn’t expecting *that* much of it. Fortunately, now you know, and can make a personal decision as to whether to read Rogue or not. To read or not to read…that is the question. But if you ask me, I’d probably say no.

Quick Content Review: *may contain spoilers*
Language: Mild (a couple d-words)
Violence: Heavy (rape)
Sexual: Heavy (Rape, described. A love affair between two characters; sex described.)

kasiej's review

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3.0

I was drawn to the book by the promise of a gritty story and theatrical Moulin Rouge style setting. The author delivered on both, but unfortunately I didn’t enjoy the book as much as I had anticipated.

Warning: Spoilers!

Spoiler Forewarning for those who are uncomfortable with the topic of rape. This story contains a rape scene. It’s not not entirely graphic since the victim blacks out from pain, but it’s still there.

The novel kicked off with a lively New Orleans background from the 1890′s. This was pretty different for me but I love Louisiana. We’re introduced to a cabaret show that moonlights as a brothel. This is what Hale, our heroine, calls home. Very vivid surroundings with plenty of detail.

The book doesn’t begin to pick up until the middle though. It took a bit of concentration to keep my attention focused for that.

Hale tied for least favorite character. She tied with Beau, the man she loved. The story had a very colorful cast. Dancers, prostitutes, musicians, patrons, and various other staff. Everyone had a story, a reason they stayed with the show. My favorite being Roland. So why did Hale and Beau end up at the bottom? The romance.

Insta-love. Not just any insta-love either. Love at first fright. The suspension bridge effect. She didn’t show any interest past humoring Teeny, her faux little sister, up until the moment he held her hands above the stage. Perhaps you were meant to read more into the things Hale did or said, but I couldn’t. They’re relationship became overly dramatic to me. It was all too convenient Not to mention basically bipolar. I got dizzy bouncing back and forth between Hale telling Beau yes, no, yes, no, yes, no.

The antagonist isn’t introduced until later into the book. He was unbelievably despicable. The perfect man to hate. Once again the author proves to very talented with her characters. His reign of terror didn’t last very long though. It was mostly Hale’s fears that fought against her.

I wasn’t expecting what Hale did in the end, both to Guy and Beau. It all happened so fast. I couldn’t help wondering what had happened to the pacing in the book. The first half felt so slow. Once the excitement finally began the entire book ended. There’s clearly room for a second story, if not a trilogy.

hdbblog's review

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5.0

I must say that I am wholly impressed by Leigh T. Moore's newest book! Rouge is one heck of a read. I came for the story, and fell deeply in love with everything about it. By the end my mouth was gaping open, my eyes were a little teary, and all I wanted was more book. Indie fans rejoice! This is a gem, and I know you're going to want to snag a copy for yourself.

Our narrator, Hale, is portrayed vividly and is easy to fall in step with. Growing up in the back wings of a cabaret, Hale has quickly learned that the only way to survive is to play the game. Her plan is to shine as the star of the show, snag a rich man, and have him take her away forever from her old life. Everything is going perfectly, until Beau comes into the picture. A sweet stagehand with nothing to offer but his love, he throws a gorgeous wrench into Hale's story and it brings everything to life. Truth be told, all of the characters in Rouge are wonderfully rendered. There isn't a single one that I didn't enjoy and think sped the story along.

Reader be warned, this is marked Upper YA and Adult for a reason. There are some steamy scenes and some colorful language. Then again, keep in mind that this is a story about a 1890's cabaret. In my honest opinion there wasn't anything that didn't belong there. Each aspect that Moore writes into Hale's world brings the cabaret to life. The costumes, the crowd, even the seedy goings on backstage, all conspire to draw you in, and keep you hooked until the inevitable end. And what an end it is!

If I'm being honest, there is really nothing that I didn't love about Moore's story! The characters are well written, the setting portrayed with sumptuous perfection, and the plot is compulsively readable. It's the type of read that flies by, and then leaves you wanting so much more. I can promise that is you enjoy historical fiction that is on the lighter side, this is for you! Rouge comes at you highly recommended from this bookworm.

blessedwannab's review

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4.0

Free on Amazon

This is an indie 'New Adult/Mature YA' book that I'm reading right now. It has sexual situations, and is more romance with romantic intrigue, but I'm really enjoying it so far, I'm at 45%. (I'll review fully later today when I'm finished.)

Just thought I'd mention it in case anyone else wanted to give it a shot.

****Review****

I don't often read books that haven't been recommended to me by one of you GR friends, or that have reviews from people I rely on. Too often randomly selecting a book turns out to be a miss.

Not this book, this book was a hit!

Hale is on a mission to protect her charge, Teeny, from the sordid undergoing of the cabaret theater where she resides and sings. She has a 'plan', one that most women in this time period rely on, finding a rich husband. Her plans are waylaid when she meets Beau, the stagehand, who steals her heart. But before she has the chance to choose love, her choice is taken away from her when dastardly doings happen.

Hale, despite having a few moments that made me want to kosh her about the head, was a determined heroine. Nobody was going to talk her out of doing what she needed to keep Teeny safe. She would put herself between any villain and the 12 year old child, and that was beautiful. I could forgive her poor choices because it felt right for the time period and because she was a 17 year old girl. She was a believable heroine.

My one complaint would be that Beau and Hale fell in love just a little too fast. In one chapter he was a 'lowly no good stagehand', and in the next she was swooning from his kisses. Still, I loved the throwback feel of old black and white movies. Every time they kissed I pictured this:



So romantic....

BUT, my most favorite character in the entire book was Roland... I see that this is #1, per Goodreads, I hope that means there will be sequels. And if there are, I hope that he'll make it through the events at the end of this book. I'm looking forward to more!

michalice's review

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5.0

When I was contacted about reviewing Rouge I was hesitant to accept as it was a light historical/theatre romance and I tend to avoid any historical books. But after reading the synopsis and finding out out more about the book I quickly accepted. Once I began reading I soon found myself getting lost in the world Leigh has created. Rouge tells us a story about Hale, a performer in a theatre that has a seedy background behind the scenes, taking Teeny under her wings Hale must find a way for this pair to escape before Teeny herself is tangled up in the theatres secret.

I loved Hale, she is fiercely protective of Teeny and does what she thinks is right for her, rather than what she truly wants in her heart, even if it means capturing the attention of Freddie, a well off gentleman who has set his eyes on Hale and wants to win her over. Hale soon has a plan in motion for Teeny and herself, but soon a complication arises in the form of Beau.

Rouge was a great read from start to finish, and once I was used to the words they use and how they talk I soon found myself eager to get through the book to find out what happens to Hale and Teeny. When her decision is finally made I was torn between what she chose and what she wanted. I loved Beau from the moment I met him and I really liked how he looked out for Hale and wanted to be the best for her, and while their feelings for each other causes a rift between Teeny and Hale, I was happy to see them get over it and become firm friends again. However Freddie is able to help Hale's escape from the theatre, and with Teeny they can finally be free of what is keeping them prisoner.

Leigh certainly has a way with words and I love the detail that has gone into describing the costumes, the clothes, the theatre and area surrounding it, but most importantly the way she write her characters. Each character stands out perfectly from the other and by the time I came to the last few sentences I was so emotionally invested in them it was hard to see them go, not knowing who I would see again and when. Rouge was definitely a surprise read, one that I enjoyed far more than I expected to and I cant wait till the next instalment is released, I need to know what happens next.

postitsandpens's review

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3.0

3.5/5 stars.

As someone who enjoyed Leigh Moore's first book, [b:The Truth About Faking|15990074|The Truth About Faking|Leigh Talbert Moore|http://d.gr-assets.com/books/1346804960s/15990074.jpg|21745866] (review HERE), I was really happy to be able to be a part of the Blog Tour for Rouge. True, this book sounded very different from her first, but I have a love of historicals, and the promise of a book set in a cabaret theatre in 1890s New Orleans was too much to pass up. Plus I kept seeing all these comparisons to Moulin Rouge, which I absolutely adored. Anyway, all of this is to simply say that I definitely wanted to read Rouge, and basically dove in head-first.

Mrs. Moore has a true gift for creating atmosphere. Some of my favorite parts of this book were her descriptions of Hale's life at the theatre; the musty, velvet curtains, the small rooms and tiny hallways, and the backstage descriptions of the show. Likewise, when Hale ventured outside of the theatre - particularly her nighttime stroll with Beau - her way of crafting Hale's surroundings made me feel as if I were right there with her. You could feel the humidity, smell the (not-so-great) smells, and experience the music and nighttime life of the city. As someone who likes her historicals to have an authentic flair, this was definitely right up my alley!

There is also a fabulous cast of characters in this book. You not only have our main character, Hale, but a whole host of supporting characters who live with her in her cabaret home and surround her day after day. My favorite of this bunch was definitely Roland, who I felt was one of the strongest aspects of the book. I loved his friendship with Hale, and really felt the connection between the two of them. You could tell just how much he cared for her, and she for him, and I loved their interactions and conversations. I also enjoyed watching Hale's love for Teeny, and her willingness to do whatever was required to keep her safe and cared for. This connection to Teeny drives much of this book, and becomes the reasoning behind Hale's decision-making, and I really felt like it was explored wonderfully and done in a way that really pulled the reader in.

My one complaint about this book is that I felt like there was a bit of insta-love going on between Hale and Beau. Hale has her entire life planned out, right down to how she's going to get Freddie to propose and take her and Teeny away with him, and I just felt like her connection to Beau occurred too fast. I understand the concept of love at first sight, but I just felt like Hale went from "he's attractive and I want him" to "I love him" a bit too quickly. It just seemed like she was attracted to his good looks rather than anything of substance, which was just totally at odds with how she'd lived and planned her life up to that point.

That being said, once Hale and Beau started spending more time with each other, I couldn't help but pull for their love to survive and overcome. Of course, nothing is that simple, and happily-ever-afters typically take a bit of work, and this wouldn't have been half the story if everything had come together clean and easy. The second half of the book was probably the strongest, because Hale was having to deal with things she never thought she'd have to do, and what she'd been working toward was completely turned on its head. She definitely became a stronger character, and I couldn't help but love her all the more for it.

Rouge is an extremely atmospheric read, full of love, danger and intrigue that keeps the reader fully invested in its pages. It's amazing cast of characters will make you fall in love with them, and want them all to have their own happy endings, whatever they may be. Hale is a strong, independent woman trying to do her best for those she loves, and not always succeeding. Be forewarned, though, that the ending is rather ouchy, although expected considering this is the first in a series. One thing's for sure, though: I'm definitely looking forward to the next book!

A copy of this book was provided via YA Bound Blog Tours for review purposes.

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raeanne's review

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3.0

Rouge follows mixed-race orphan Hale Ferrer as she performs in a New Orleans cabaret circa 1890. At 17, she’s been taking care of Teeny, another waif young woman who's approaching puberty. Soon Teeny’s talentless state will leave only one-way to make ends meet: backroom prostitution. Hale’s inching towards completing her plan of marrying rich for their survival until a stagehand begins making moves of his own.

From inception, Rouge drew me in with its shadowy, sparkling setting brought to life by Hale’s brave yet vulnerable voice. Its denouement surges forward, leaving my heartbeat racing and ready for more. It’s the middle--where stale, fair-weather love reigns--that drags ass across carpet seeking relief from blockage.

My first impression was similarities with Moulin Rouge. It’s not just its musical backdrop, but certain details like descending via swing and their secret affair songs. However, this isn’t necessarily a blow. Both works superbly showcase women surviving with little opportunity or hope yearning towards freedom. 

It’s resemblance is sensible without pushing into wannabe status. For one, Moore’s protagonist is the opposite of Satine. Satine’s been around the block and dreams of becoming a real actress while just coming of age Hale wants, above all else, to protect her at risk ward.


Content Warning: Rape & Bigotry. 



Graphic attack scene, forced prostitution, underlying and pervasive threats against women,  POC, and LGBT.



The Good
Liked Hale, Teeny, and Roland
Loved finding out about Hale’s parent’s past
Their guardian/ward bond was compelling
Reminiscent of Moulin Rouge
The beginning and ending were captivating

The Bad & The Other
High-school-y insta-love
Her wavering over decisions was irritating
Predictable: didn’t see its outcome happening any other way
Middle section drags
After reading, feel a bit mislead by the blurb




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Plotting Through Longueurs


Plot-wise, discovering her parent’s past was my favorite part; I wish there were more than mere scattered pieces. It's obvious who the antagonist is early so I missed this “mysterious” predator promised.

Further, their struggle over Teeny doesn’t take center stage until midway.
Before that, it’s a young woman playing Eeny, Meeny, Miny, Moe to pick a partner. Even afterwards, Hale waffles depending on how the wind blows. Eventually, circumstances conspire to force her hand. Throughout, I worried about quality of life rather than death-dealing injury, rendering its blurb zero for two.

Dragging out romantic indecision left me waiting for something to happen while reading most of Rouge. Realistically, there’s little choice for Hale and series direction, so plot felt stalled. When events finally unfold, it’s enjoyable yet predictable. I missed that shocking tension built resulting from unexpected revelations. Perhaps I’m too cynical though.


The Charismatic Characters


Surprisingly, my favorite character was someone who worked within the system rather than subverting it and encouraged Hale to stop safeguarding Teeny at her own detriment, in spite of disagreeing. Enter Roland: gay black man that writes the cabaret’s songs. His loyalty and practicality won me over. Hale’s noble instincts needed a sensible soundboard. His straightforwardness gave Hale an opening to do right even when her friends didn’t agree. He maybe a voice of reason but not one of conscience.

As realistic as it was, Hale’s “omg you’ll burn in hell for being that way” worrying made me sigh. Thankfully, she doesn’t come up often or hound him. But it's clear she's not the best friend, and it's not just her homophobic beliefs either.

 She’s a compelling character, besides that and the Weeble wobble dance between beaus. Otherwise, she’d probably be my favorite. I liked Teeny in all her troublesome little sister-ness.

Hale and Teeny’s relationship is fundamental; this story wouldn’t exist without it. Hale maybe an orphan but she’s fairly fortunate, considering everything. Teeny represents what could’ve been though. While unable to enact change, at least one small girl can be saved from the horror stories Hale’s heard.

It’s admirable, intense, and charming. Of course, that doesn’t mean every motherly decision was agreeable. At first, it’s annoying how sheltered she kept Teeny because staying naïve is risky. Later, this revelation dawns and so begins worrying whether to educate or not. Thinking, “what if I’m causing my child harm or doing it wrong?” cemented her parenthood status for me.


Romantic Disinterest


Under such heavy responsibilities, it was hard cutting Hale slack although she’s young and clueless. I’ve been a single working teenage mom, seeing her gravitation towards an unfixed fling while spurring a secure relationship was irritating. Her snipe hunt made me feel vicariously embarrassed. At no time did I believe Beau’s prince charming act would come to fruition.



"Next time, don't let your guard down
because of a pair of big goo-goo eyes!"


Oh, look at his pretty eyes and cute smile! Add in sneaking around for make-out sessions and a jealous little sister, it’s no wonder the whole debacle felt high school-y. Beau gave the Charlie Brown football gag try, Hale got tingly as if he cuts off her circulation, and then they tangoed. The occasional tender moment with roses or the morning after wasn’t getting my motor running.




Bottomline:




3 stars for being an intriguing read with a likable heroine but instant noodle sweethearts and predictability left me wanting more.


Recommended for:

New Adult or Historical Romance readers, especially fans of Moulin Rouge’s sort. It’s a perfect chance to cheer on underdogs creeping towards their happily ever after by crossing a minefield. Be wary if high school-y love tropes aren’t your bag. Comes with a trigger warning for rape and bigotry.

thecozyreaderwbo's review

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2.0

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My Grade
Plot: 3
Setting: 3
Writing: 4
Originality: 1
Characters: 5
Romance: 4
Overall: 20/30 = 66%
Title/Cover Bonus: 0

Overall

Lacking original plot line but has an amazing cast of supporting characters full of life, dreams, passion and honor. I am very critical in my review on the originality. If I hadn't seen Moulin Rouge! prior to reading this I can bet you any amount of money that I would have been head over heels for this book.

Trailer
None at time of review.

First Line

A trumpet blast, followed by silence.

Most Memorable Scene
Hale's first kiss. It just happens to be with Roland and it's awesome. Read an excerpt on A Dream Within A Dream.

Plot
Hale is a singer in a New Orleans cabaret show where her mother lived. The plot centers around Hale attempting to secure a decent future for her and her orphaned friend, Christina aka Teeny. The plot is very closely mirrored to that of Baz Luhrmann's Moulin Rouge!. If you've seen that movie, you've read the gist of this book, with some character switches and additions mostly. That being said there are some differences that added a little bit to the story, of which I did like.

Setting
The majority of the scenes are set in the theater on stage, in Hale's room and in the catwalks/rafters of the stage set. We only get to venture out into New Orleans a few times but nothing amazing.

Writing
Written from Hale's point of view. I think the story was written fine. My issue is with the originality.

Originality
Have you seen the movie Moulin Rouge! with Nicole Kidman and Ewan McGregor? I have seen it a million times. I love it. Even my husband loves it. We even used Come What May as our song. I was told that this book was similar but I was not prepared with HOW similar it is. I suppose if no one saw the movie they would have no idea how similar it is. I saw that there is a blog tour going on right now for this title so I tweeted a few that have reviewed the book to see what they thought.



https://twitter.com/ivana_writes/status/273499990662447104

https://twitter.com/EveryFreeChance/status/273499995334901760

https://twitter.com/HenriettaChan/status/273521727366131712


It seems that most have NOT seen the movie so they could not compare.

Overall, if the story had such similarities to bother me so bad it must be one too many. I realize that sayings such as "break a leg" and "the show must go on" are popular theater sayings but for them to happen in just about the same sequence as a major motion picture that cannot be overlooked.

The biggest similarity was the reference to the song Come What May, which I mentioned above as our song (my husband and I).

"What's the backstory here?" I asked, glancing over the lyrics he handed me. I read one line aloud. "I will love you until my dying breath?"

"The audience will swoon," he said as he walked to the piano.

--Location 4020 (72%)

The actual line is: "I will love you until my dying day." Changing one word does not make this okay.

Am I being too critical? Taking this too personal? I probably am but when I feel passionately about something I usually do.

I can say that I did enjoy the original aspects that happened along the way. But who's to say they are original. Leigh told me herself that she got her inspiration from several sources. Maybe I didn't recognize them because I'm not familiar enough with them. The guest post is featured on Lost in Literature.

https://twitter.com/leightmoore/status/273509912569602048

I have read several books that were heavily based on existing themes or fairytales but the point is to make them your own. Keeping the overall theme is fine but changing heavy elements is necessary. I would reference the work of Jackson Pearce (Fairytale Retellings) and Marissa Meyer (Lunar Chronicles), both of which have written amazing fairytale retellings with incredibly original content.

Characters
I didn't love Hale. I liked how protective she was of Teeny but we didn't really learn anything about her likes and wants. I feel like I didn't really know her at all. I feel like her only lines were "Where's Teeny?" and "I have to protect Teeny."

Teeny was mildly annoying but that's forgivable because she's a spunky 12 year old.

Roland is Hale's first love and a true romantic. I really loved his character. I wish we would have learned a bit more about him but I think we knew more about him than we did Hale.

Evie is Hale's best friend. She didn't shine but her scenes we enjoyable.

Gavin and Guy are brothers. Guy owns the theater and Gavin runs it. Guy is a creeper and Gavin is a pussy. I didn't like either of them.

Beau, oh, Beau. He was lovely. I really enjoyed his character. I loved how strong and focused he was. I kept rooting for him all the way until the end.

Freddie Lovel is one amazing man. I found him to be too proper at times, early on, but liked how he progressively opened himself to Hale. He is a genuine gentleman and I was also rooting for his happiness until the end.

Molly is a shadow of a character I wanted to know more about. There were glimpses of who she really was but it was all very vague and I wish this was focused on more.

Romance
If you saw Moulin Rouge! then you know that this story centers around a young lady performer who is being pursued by a high ranked gentleman but falls in love with a "penniless" stagehand all within a theater that has some risque business going down inside.

The attraction between Hale and Beau is believable and happens all naturally. Freddie as a suitor seems logical but Hale's heart just into him. He's such a nice guy though that it's a tiny bit infuriating to watch Hale think nothing of him.

Title/Cover Bonus
No, I did like both. In the guest post Leigh did at Lost in Literature she says that Rouge is in reference to Teeny's hair color. Which I found quite funny because it is not referenced enough for me to even put two and two together. I didn't even notice her hair was strawberry blonde until the last few pages of the book. Actually, in the very beginning it was described as:

Her blonde hair was streaked with auburn highlights that on some days shone bright red.

The most times "red" was used was to describe Hale's red velvet dressing gown and the numerous red roses.

Ending
I honestly was expecting this to end like Moulin Rouge! did, at least in general. I was actually very glad that it didn't. I can't say that I liked the ending but it was the most logical ending possible, without all hell breaking lose.

I can't possibly see the sequel copying anything else from Moulin Rouge! so I have faith that this might actually turn out to be a decent series. I am just oh so sad that this opening book did not sit well with me. If I hadn't seen Moulin Rouge! prior to reading this I can bet you any amount of money that I would have been head over heels for this book.

Series
Leigh is working on book two.

thecozyreader's review against another edition

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2.0

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My Grade
Plot: 3
Setting: 3
Writing: 4
Originality: 1
Characters: 5
Romance: 4
Overall: 20/30 = 66%
Title/Cover Bonus: 0

Overall

Lacking original plot line but has an amazing cast of supporting characters full of life, dreams, passion and honor. I am very critical in my review on the originality. If I hadn't seen Moulin Rouge! prior to reading this I can bet you any amount of money that I would have been head over heels for this book.

Trailer
None at time of review.

First Line

A trumpet blast, followed by silence.

Most Memorable Scene
Hale's first kiss. It just happens to be with Roland and it's awesome. Read an excerpt on A Dream Within A Dream.

Plot
Hale is a singer in a New Orleans cabaret show where her mother lived. The plot centers around Hale attempting to secure a decent future for her and her orphaned friend, Christina aka Teeny. The plot is very closely mirrored to that of Baz Luhrmann's Moulin Rouge!. If you've seen that movie, you've read the gist of this book, with some character switches and additions mostly. That being said there are some differences that added a little bit to the story, of which I did like.

Setting
The majority of the scenes are set in the theater on stage, in Hale's room and in the catwalks/rafters of the stage set. We only get to venture out into New Orleans a few times but nothing amazing.

Writing
Written from Hale's point of view. I think the story was written fine. My issue is with the originality.

Originality
Have you seen the movie Moulin Rouge! with Nicole Kidman and Ewan McGregor? I have seen it a million times. I love it. Even my husband loves it. We even used Come What May as our song. I was told that this book was similar but I was not prepared with HOW similar it is. I suppose if no one saw the movie they would have no idea how similar it is. I saw that there is a blog tour going on right now for this title so I tweeted a few that have reviewed the book to see what they thought.



https://twitter.com/ivana_writes/status/273499990662447104

https://twitter.com/EveryFreeChance/status/273499995334901760

https://twitter.com/HenriettaChan/status/273521727366131712


It seems that most have NOT seen the movie so they could not compare.

Overall, if the story had such similarities to bother me so bad it must be one too many. I realize that sayings such as "break a leg" and "the show must go on" are popular theater sayings but for them to happen in just about the same sequence as a major motion picture that cannot be overlooked.

The biggest similarity was the reference to the song Come What May, which I mentioned above as our song (my husband and I).

"What's the backstory here?" I asked, glancing over the lyrics he handed me. I read one line aloud. "I will love you until my dying breath?"

"The audience will swoon," he said as he walked to the piano.

--Location 4020 (72%)

The actual line is: "I will love you until my dying day." Changing one word does not make this okay.

Am I being too critical? Taking this too personal? I probably am but when I feel passionately about something I usually do.

I can say that I did enjoy the original aspects that happened along the way. But who's to say they are original. Leigh told me herself that she got her inspiration from several sources. Maybe I didn't recognize them because I'm not familiar enough with them. The guest post is featured on Lost in Literature.

https://twitter.com/leightmoore/status/273509912569602048

I have read several books that were heavily based on existing themes or fairytales but the point is to make them your own. Keeping the overall theme is fine but changing heavy elements is necessary. I would reference the work of Jackson Pearce (Fairytale Retellings) and Marissa Meyer (Lunar Chronicles), both of which have written amazing fairytale retellings with incredibly original content.

Characters
I didn't love Hale. I liked how protective she was of Teeny but we didn't really learn anything about her likes and wants. I feel like I didn't really know her at all. I feel like her only lines were "Where's Teeny?" and "I have to protect Teeny."

Teeny was mildly annoying but that's forgivable because she's a spunky 12 year old.

Roland is Hale's first love and a true romantic. I really loved his character. I wish we would have learned a bit more about him but I think we knew more about him than we did Hale.

Evie is Hale's best friend. She didn't shine but her scenes we enjoyable.

Gavin and Guy are brothers. Guy owns the theater and Gavin runs it. Guy is a creeper and Gavin is a pussy. I didn't like either of them.

Beau, oh, Beau. He was lovely. I really enjoyed his character. I loved how strong and focused he was. I kept rooting for him all the way until the end.

Freddie Lovel is one amazing man. I found him to be too proper at times, early on, but liked how he progressively opened himself to Hale. He is a genuine gentleman and I was also rooting for his happiness until the end.

Molly is a shadow of a character I wanted to know more about. There were glimpses of who she really was but it was all very vague and I wish this was focused on more.

Romance
If you saw Moulin Rouge! then you know that this story centers around a young lady performer who is being pursued by a high ranked gentleman but falls in love with a "penniless" stagehand all within a theater that has some risque business going down inside.

The attraction between Hale and Beau is believable and happens all naturally. Freddie as a suitor seems logical but Hale's heart just into him. He's such a nice guy though that it's a tiny bit infuriating to watch Hale think nothing of him.

Title/Cover Bonus
No, I did like both. In the guest post Leigh did at Lost in Literature she says that Rouge is in reference to Teeny's hair color. Which I found quite funny because it is not referenced enough for me to even put two and two together. I didn't even notice her hair was strawberry blonde until the last few pages of the book. Actually, in the very beginning it was described as:

Her blonde hair was streaked with auburn highlights that on some days shone bright red.

The most times "red" was used was to describe Hale's red velvet dressing gown and the numerous red roses.

Ending
I honestly was expecting this to end like Moulin Rouge! did, at least in general. I was actually very glad that it didn't. I can't say that I liked the ending but it was the most logical ending possible, without all hell breaking lose.

I can't possibly see the sequel copying anything else from Moulin Rouge! so I have faith that this might actually turn out to be a decent series. I am just oh so sad that this opening book did not sit well with me. If I hadn't seen Moulin Rouge! prior to reading this I can bet you any amount of money that I would have been head over heels for this book.

Series
Leigh is working on book two.