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doitandshutup's review
3.0
2.5 out of 5 stars, rounded up to 3
- We're told the story instead of reading it. What I mean is conversations between characters take place off the page and the author tells us what they talked about or decide on so we don't get to watch/listen.
- Instant love *gag* Due to the fact that months go by without reading interactions the romance is quite sudden. Physical attraction is written but not enough interaction to warrant falling in love.
- Only the main characters are involved in almost single handedly saving the world and none of them are particularly skilled. Yes, they may have had several months of training, but that can't be enough to infiltrate an alien homeworld, much less their ruler's residence unscathed.
I liked the main idea for this story and I like the main character. This book could easily be a trilogy if much more dialog was added, the characters more well developed, and more interactions between the characters took place.
Note: I received this book for free from the author for an honest review.
- We're told the story instead of reading it. What I mean is conversations between characters take place off the page and the author tells us what they talked about or decide on so we don't get to watch/listen.
- Instant love *gag* Due to the fact that months go by without reading interactions the romance is quite sudden. Physical attraction is written but not enough interaction to warrant falling in love.
- Only the main characters are involved in almost single handedly saving the world and none of them are particularly skilled. Yes, they may have had several months of training, but that can't be enough to infiltrate an alien homeworld, much less their ruler's residence unscathed.
I liked the main idea for this story and I like the main character. This book could easily be a trilogy if much more dialog was added, the characters more well developed, and more interactions between the characters took place.
Note: I received this book for free from the author for an honest review.
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