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4.34 AVERAGE

funny mysterious fast-paced
adventurous dark funny mysterious tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated
adventurous challenging dark mysterious slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: N/A
Flaws of characters a main focus: No
dark funny mysterious tense medium-paced
adventurous dark emotional lighthearted mysterious medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
dark mysterious slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

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adventurous emotional mysterious medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
dark emotional funny tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
adventurous dark emotional mysterious sad tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

It would have completely been a higher rating if there was more character development and less descriptions of the outfits and  hairstyles.  The premise is great and the potential is there to make this a great story, just the execution seemed a little less than giving.  I mean I'm still trying to get the point of Namir's sister being introduced into the story.  One of the 100 other previous side characters that had already been introduced could have done exactly what she did for the story.  I did enjoy this opening as a whole though and I will continue to the second book and see how it grows.  
mysterious fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes

This is such an interesting world! Like a Black underground magical world?? 10/10. The characters were good and loved the sisterhood aspect of this story. The pacing, continuity and grammar of this book took me out of it a little. It wasn’t horrible, but i found myself confused in areas that had me going back to early chapters, thinking i had missed something. This world is good and very interesting, plus the characters are developed more. I wanted more chapters from Maggie’s POV , cause like her name is on the book and I didn’t feel like she took the stage like i wanted!

The ending made me mad and interested for the next book!