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Do you know who the fuck i think i am? by Ben John Smith, Craig Moffatt

kingjason's review

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4.0

This is some very clever poetry, normally you get a poem per page with a clever title, here there are no titles, it is just one long grouping of poems. The style reminds me of a stand-up comic doing a show of one-liners.

There are a few laughs in here:

"You will never know the art
of self-destruction
if you brush your teeth"

Some sexy scenes:
"Her big pregnant belly
and hulking milk filled boobs
looked like meteors about to
destroy the earth"

And some scenes inside a cats head:
"look how fucking soft and sentimental
that girl has made you,

I’m still out here,

in the madness;

I am a god

And you are a
Failed dissident

A simple couch potato.

You are nothing again

You are the tamed beast

and i am a God."

What it is missing though is the feistiness that the title implies can be found here. A wee bit of violence would have earned this 5 stars.

Entertaining stuff, looking forward to checking out more of his poems.

Blog review is here: https://felcherman.wordpress.com/2018/04/02/do-you-know-who-the-fuck-i-think-i-am-by-ben-john-smith/
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