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stevia333k's review against another edition
2.0
i liked the story for the most part but there were instances where the grammar/editing could have been better (to the point that I actually comment about it, though not barring the story for probably about 5-15 paragraphs, the text probably needed rewording)
also while the story is semi-cliche but still semi-shocking (probably due to the fact that I have not read too many stories with a mystery that goes un-investigated by the narrator, but my mind is dirty to begin with so... yeah)
also I would have loved more explicit sex scenes that were narrated by the narrator and the boss the narrator has a developing crush on (although the narrator does describe sex scenes with other characters, and he and his boss *almost* had sex in one part of the book, it got interupted so we don't get as graphic between them compared to others)
However the characters were enjoyable to read about so I'm giving this book a 2 star rating because it was okay and even likeable in some aspects, but it could have been better. (the lack of sex is acceptable as I just probably didn't read the description well enough and I bought this book like in 2011 or 2012-3, though grammar would have at least made it 3 stars for me, and probably more for those who don't particularly prefer long sex scenes in their romance novels).
also while the story is semi-cliche but still semi-shocking (probably due to the fact that I have not read too many stories with a mystery that goes un-investigated by the narrator, but my mind is dirty to begin with so... yeah)
also I would have loved more explicit sex scenes that were narrated by the narrator and the boss the narrator has a developing crush on (although the narrator does describe sex scenes with other characters, and he and his boss *almost* had sex in one part of the book, it got interupted so we don't get as graphic between them compared to others)
However the characters were enjoyable to read about so I'm giving this book a 2 star rating because it was okay and even likeable in some aspects, but it could have been better. (the lack of sex is acceptable as I just probably didn't read the description well enough and I bought this book like in 2011 or 2012-3, though grammar would have at least made it 3 stars for me, and probably more for those who don't particularly prefer long sex scenes in their romance novels).
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