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3.74 AVERAGE

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3.0
adventurous medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Interesting world, good story to zone out to. 
adventurous fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

3.5 Stars

Sumida delivered an interesting story here. I enjoyed so many elements, like the intrigue and possessiveness between Daha and Rac. I liked watching the two banter; I liked watching Daha be this dainty character with a core of steel....but. But. The relationship development was very lacking. It started off strong and promising and then moved at warp speed and it basically stopped developing the way I would have loved to see. I will also say that the intrigue and central point of contention in this book ended quite lamely. It was very anticlimactic and didn't really make sense with all of the build up. I do like this author's writing, it's very interesting, but there are just a few things I wish were more well developed. We shall see how the rest of the series goes!
adventurous sad fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No
adventurous emotional mysterious medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
adventurous medium-paced

This book surprised me with how much I enjoyed it. I've been in such a book slump and I not only read beyond the 30% mark (unlike the last six books I've tried), but was sneak reading it during family movie night. It's a unique fantasy world that didn't require a huge info dump. There was a first book I skipped, because well, this book looked more interesting to me honestly. I LOVE a good necromancer story. I'm going on the record saying this book can be read as a standalone.

This is a new author to me and the writing style took a bit of getting used to. Some parts I felt were written in a beautiful five-star manner and others I was wondering if it was the same author. The pacing and the plot and the politics- all very well done.

I did have one major issue with the book- Patriarchy (read misogyny). The dragons have only male warriors/guards/leaders. The two female dragons that are in the story by name are female stereotypes.
Spoiler (Someone with a calming nature unless her children are threatened and a manipulator.)
The mother is "blessed by the goddess" because she had twins. They even double down on this concept in the first chapter of the next book. The female dragons are valued because they have children.
Quotes from this book:
"women like crowns- they sparkle"
"He only wants what's best for her and she would trust that. Plus she can always refuse."
And another one I can't find, but when the prince doesn't want the necromancer to fight the necromancer complains he's being treated like a female dragon.

On top of all that it is repeatedly mentioned how the necromancer flirting, but not giving in and having sex with the prince, could cause the dragon in the prince to waken and *ahem* forcefully take sex. I lost the exact quote from the king, but after this almost happened, he says something along the lines of "I told you not to tease him." And all this was okay because the dragon is a different being from the man. They can't help it. It sometimes gets too hard to fight the dragon. Oh. My. God. It's not even a generation ago human men were using a similar excuse.

This all bothered me so much I debated not continuing the series even though I've really enjoyed this story, but I'm going to try it. Like I said, it was a good plot with interesting characters and I'm curious what she'll do with the next book.

While I really enjoyed both the plot and the tension of this one, the actual relationship between Daha and Racmar wasn't really my favorite. I appreciate the struggle and the conflict, but beyond "you're pretty" I never really saw any chemistry, which led Daha's behavior to feel desperate and contrived to me. Dunno. Maybe it's a me thing or a timing thing and I just wasn't in the right headspace for this book. Still, it was an interesting read.

Better than the first, hope it continues like this 
adventurous challenging emotional tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
fast-paced