Reviews with content warning for Islamophobia - Paris Daillencourt Is About to Crumble

Honestly this book surprised me. I read the back of it, saw the words “classics” and “baking” and thought well I like both do those things so why not. I had little expectations going in but found myself finishing this in a day and also felt like I reading a mirror reflection of things I’ve dealt with that I haven’t seen honestly portrayed before or in a way that didn’t feel preachy or cliche.
The characters are interesting and well developed and the relationship between Paris and Tariq is a refreshing one. They are not a perfect match nor are they ever portrayed as perfect people but it’s the imperfections that I think make their relationship work on page. I don’t think romances should always have the perfect couples who issues and character flaws are just brushed away by rom com magic. Paris is selfish and ignorant of a lot of things. Tariq does have a savior complex and does guilt Paris when he has different expectations regarding their relationship(excluding religious expectations such as intimacy) and PDA. But by the end, not only do they both address those flaws but also make clear steps towards resolving them. Paris is more self aware of the world and himself and is making active steps to not only earn Tariq’s forgiveness but also be a better person. Tariq by the end is being more selfish and is considering what is best for him before what is best for Paris in regards to the state of their relationship and better understands that expectations and wants are two different things and will not always align perfectly with the person you’re with. They are not perfect, and the ending does leave their relationship a bit open in regards to the future. But I think that’s what makes it good.

My only complaint is that there are so many monologues that are so self deprecating and intense that it can get a bit tiring after awhile. But all in all this is a great book to read if you want something light hearted with a solid concept. I know other reviews will say this book is bad and list all the ways that you shouldn’t read it but honestly, I think a few of them missed the point. Rom coms don’t have to have a perfect couple or a perfect ending or people. The characters can be messy and complicated, and make big mistakes that many of us wouldn’t easily forgive. But why should that stop people from loving it for what it is?

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astropova's review against another edition

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emotional medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Character
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? It's complicated
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0

I'm glad Paris finally got the help to work on himself that he desperately needed, though I wish it could have happened a lot earlier in the book. If I had known how long it would take, I may have DNF'd the book earlier because it was a bit awful to sit there and suffer through it too.

I also thought that some of the parts set at the baking show seemed a little abbreviated. At some points, there wasn't even anything important happening, but the plot timeline still had to get moved on.

Loved Morag! So cool to have such a positive depiction of a fat (side-)character!

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aoifeprettypurplepolkadots's review

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emotional funny lighthearted slow-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Character
Strong character development? No
Loveable characters? No
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.0

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jkneebone's review

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emotional inspiring slow-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.0

Paris Daillencourt is a young man with extreme anxiety (although he isn’t aware of it at the beginning of the book), who is entered by his best friend/housemate for the competition show Bake Expectations (essentially GBBO). While on the show, he meets and develops feelings for fellow competitor Tariq, but at the same time his anxiety spirals, threatening both his success on the show and his new relationship.

This was an engaging, quick read. The descriptions of Paris’s anxiety were tough to read and almost constant for the first 2/3 or so of the book -which I say more as a warning if that’s the kind of thing that will bother you. I felt for Paris and it didn’t impede my reading experience, but I wished that we’d been able to see Paris get help sooner. While the way the book was structured made sense with the conceit of the show, the pacing felt a little skewed to me. I spent a bit too much of the first bit wondering why no one had ever suggested Paris find help

and why Tariq was still with him despite not seeming to get much from the relationship, although obviously his patience ran out eventually - one of my biggest pet peeves in romance is when you can’t understand why both characters want the other, even if one is objectively more of a mess.

, and wished that we’d gotten a bit more of Paris (and especially his interactions with Tariq) once he got his shit together. Still, it was hard to watch - read? - Paris clearly suffering and not knowing that he could get help. Some of this was addressed

(I appreciated the explanation that Morag thought him going on the show would help build his confidence, misguided as it was)

but I was still confused as to why no one had suggested it to him sooner, especially after Tariq suggested that he might have anxiety.

I loved all the side characters that filled up the Bake Expectations cast and crew - they were so funny and fun, as were Tariq’s family (in the one scene we got to meet them, lol). Tariq himself was so sweet and brightened up every page he was on. I really enjoyed the arc of the baking competition, even if I wish we had spent more time with the characters after it had filmed. I didn’t realize that the MCs were 20 when I bought the book and probably wouldn’t have bought it had I realized, but I managed to suspend my disbelief where necessary 😂 Final spoiler-y quibble:

how did no one realize who Paris’s parents were once he was on the show?? I was expecting some internet troll or super fan to turn that up and use it against him, and/or for that to become a catalyst for his parents to finally contact him - wouldn’t you think that their son going on a well regarded reality show is the kind of thing these presumably very image-conscious people would want to know about and/or manage? But I digress.

Despite my complaints about the plot/pacing, I really did enjoy this book! I read it in a few days because I wanted to know what happened. If you like baking (and won’t be triggered by the descriptions of anxiety) this is definitely one worth checking out!

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hobbithopeful's review

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emotional funny hopeful lighthearted medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.5

Alexis Hall has written an exceptionally funny story where queer romance meets The Great British Bake Off, and added delightfully messy characters that you can't help but love.
When Paris's self professed fat Glaswegian sex goddess roommate, Morag, enters him into Bake Expectations, he doesn't expect do well at all. Except he does. He does really well. And then he meets fellow competitor sparkly Tariq, with his beautiful varnished nails and assured sense of style. If only Paris had any self esteem and could stop worrying himself in circles about well, everything.
Paris Daillencourt is About to Crumble follows Paris's journey through competing on the nations favorite bake show, while he tries to push past his crippling anxiety.

Favorite Moments: The character banter, food descriptions, Grace Forsythe!
Least Favorite: All the baking talk made me so hungry! I would have loved some closure on Paris's parents. (Though I understand it is more realistic this way.)

I have seen so many mixed reviews in regards to Paris, his general personality, and mental health struggle. I must admit dear reader, that I do have biases towards his overall character and growth. I have struggled with what ifs and the paralyzing anxiety that comes with it. It is incredibly draining to be around someone who needs constant emotional support and reassurance, especially when they haven't gotten any help for them problems. I think that a lot of people are missing that Paris did get help. More important he is trying. Trying to do better, and quite honestly he is in a much better place mentally then at the beginning of the book. I really liked how Hall depicted Paris and Tariq's relationship and how Tariq established boundaries. I also thought the microaggressions that Tariq faced were masterfully well done, microaggressions are always so frustrating because it feels impossible to call people out on them.
This is the second book in the Winner Bakes All series and the second book of Alexis Hall's that I have read. Easily read as a standalone, I didn't read the first book and had no trouble following. Alexis Hall is an extremely talented writer, no matter the pov or character you always feel like you are experiencing what the character is, be it a regency era romance, or a light hearted baking story. He now stands as one of my current favorite authors(I love consistency), I can't wait to read more by him.

The Cover
I overall think that this is a good composition, and I do like it, though there are a few elements I don't love.
First the overall use of a rainbow sliced cake is a great nod to the fact that this is a queer book. (Sometimes I go to a bookstore and it's hard to tell if a book is apart of the LGBT or not!) I think it is really cute how Tariq and Paris are both leaning against it, each standing in a way that conveys their personality.
The polka dot background seems a bit messy, and I feel it could have easily been a solid color or less busy.
I adore how the font follows the cake lines and seems to be going in and out, it adds depth and great character.
With how many times Tariq's fashion and overall style is mentioned, it would have been nice to see that conveyed through his outfit. While he is dressed nicely, it is missing his flamboyant and colorful sense of style present in the book. ALSO! Tariq's nails are our first introduction to his character, and a defining point throughout the story. I can't believe his nails aren't painted his signature rainbow color, or another bold pattern.
Paris is taller then Tariq but his art seems less like he was drawn tall and more like he was enlarged to be bigger, with some of his proportions looking a bit off as a result.
Overall I think it is a very cute cover, and works so well with the story and theme.
Cover design and illustration by Elizabeth Turner Stokes

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