Reviews with content warning for Slavery - The Mountain in the Sea

This book was the most FRUSTRATING read ever. The premise is very good! Modern sci fi on the moralities of AI and sentience, exploring our destruction of the planet (specifically the oceans) and the impact that has on those remaining in those spaces, both humans on the coast and all animals and creatures who live there too. I personally was excited to explore the idea that actopuses had developed some level of sentience or intelligence, society, culture etc. But MY GOD. The writing. Was so painful. And the plot was so loose and wibbly I was lost at sea (lol) pretty much constantly.

First off, the characterisation was bizarre. Ha was a very odd choice for a main character, as I never felt like I actually knew her. She's a scientist, but I'm still not 100% sure I understand anything about her studies other than she likes fish and studies communication and went to Oxford and Cambridge. There is this whole plot line about her falling madly in love with this dude who never paid any attention to her, and it made her go "crazy" and gave her Super Depression that she describes as looking up at the sun and being able to stare at it because nothing was bright anymore. Edgy. Then it turns out (mild spoiler but this didnt mean anything to me when it was revealed even though i think it was meant to)

that she had had sex with this dude once, but he totally took advantage of her and never spoke to her again afterwards.

She admits this late in the plot like its something she feels huge shame around and like, fair, I can imagine how that hurt emotionally but LIFE CHANGING???? What did this add to her character???? In my head it totally undermined her as this strong independent woman the author was trying to present like, maybe that was the point? Oh look how human and hurt she was and now she's a stone cold empty woman. What was I meant to learn.

This book was also the ultimate lesson in telling not showing, and it was arguably the worst part. Everytime we were introduced to a new idea or feeling, a character would then explain it to us, or the narrator would tell us exactly what was going on. I wasn't able to form any of my own opinions because I had this constant voice mansplaining every tiny detail to me. The narration had no clear voice either, and often we'd skip descriptions all together and just have pages of dialogue or huge monologues from single characters. We'd also have whole sentences or paragraphs just... repeated later on. There is a scene with Evrim where Ha describes him as sexless and god-like and then we just get that description again near the end. Ha's weird trauma from the island is described to us by the narrator and then she repeats it again to Evrim. Dude, everything you write should be for the reader - WHY do you share this now? What has changed since last time? (spoilers, nothing, I think he just wanted to emphasise a dramatic piece of writing). All very annoying.

Rustem. Where did my boy Rustem go. I liked his storyline, it was interesting and intriguing and because it wasn't the main one I felt like I had more freedom to think and use my brain to try and work out what was going on. But

it just ENDS?????? Who was the random man???? Who was the shiny woman?????? What happened?????????????

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Also side point. Why was there so much nakedness. My guy my dude my man, stop putting Altantsetseg in the goo totally nude. Why is she naked. Why is she in goo. Stop it man, free her.

And finally. The end. I'm not even gonna put this in spoilers so just stop reading this if you really wanna read this book I guess but honestly..... NOTHING HAPPENS.
What the hell was that "plot twist" with Altantsetseg??????? I legit almost missed it it went so quickly. No lead up, no oh wow yeah that all lead to this! moment. Nothing. Also what happened with the octopuses????? Why was Ha a weird chosen one? Why kill off the doctor lady and not make her a giant evil woman who was in this all for a whole other plan all along??? She was just an idiot!!!!! That's the whole plot!!!!!!!!! WHAT HAPPENED???????

So yes. That's that I guess, sorry Ray please don't read this review lol but also please get a better publisher/editor because the idea had so much promise and they just let you wiggle along your plot until you'd rinsed it dry and then let you just slap a plaster on it and call it an ending. Oh man.

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The writing was quite bland. Switching narrators every chapter (none of whom were compelling) plus breaking up the already short chapters with "non-fiction" quotes at the start gave me whiplash; there was too much context switching for me to really wrap my head around anything or feel invested in any of it. Unfortunately, the audio didn't help either.

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