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Within the first thirteen pages, the story was already about a Mary Sue who started out watching people from the rafters, admiring dancers (and copying them on said rafters), to running back to her room so she wouldn't get caught, trapping herself in a room with a guy where she just decides to dance for him. You know, still being chased, but she can stop to dance. Then suddenly is entranced by a vampire who takes out her soul, shows it to her, and says that only she can defend herself against him.
The thing about fantasy is that you write it like reality. This is clearly a fantasy because this could only be imagined in the author's head. It's a real shame because the book is physically gorgeous.
The thing about fantasy is that you write it like reality. This is clearly a fantasy because this could only be imagined in the author's head. It's a real shame because the book is physically gorgeous.
Content Warnings
Moderate: Death and Murder
Minor: Sexism and Sexual content