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fictionista3's review
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I have two things to say to so-called "Professor Hans Holzer":
1. Exclamation points are not acceptable this much in narrative writing.
2. New England consists of Maine, New Hampshire, Massachusetts, Rhode Island, Connecticut, and Vermont. New York and New Jersey are Mid-Atlantic states. Given that you named your book Ghosts of *New England*, I don't see why stories that take place in New York and New Jersey are included.
Also, how convenient that every single person he interviewed who lived with a ghost claimed to be psychic.
1. Exclamation points are not acceptable this much in narrative writing.
2. New England consists of Maine, New Hampshire, Massachusetts, Rhode Island, Connecticut, and Vermont. New York and New Jersey are Mid-Atlantic states. Given that you named your book Ghosts of *New England*, I don't see why stories that take place in New York and New Jersey are included.
Also, how convenient that every single person he interviewed who lived with a ghost claimed to be psychic.
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