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2.72 AVERAGE

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3.25
dark tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
challenging dark fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

I genuinely don't know if this was good or not

Khaw's prose is certainly... interesting. I'm not quite sure whether or not I like it, laden as it is with simile and metaphor, but I would be willing to give her work another try. This novella, unfortunately, didn't do it for me. The overwrought prose was at odds with the way the angsty young characters spoke and the strange meta vein running through the whole thing felt out of place. It was like the story didn't know whether it wanted to be a spooky and atmospheric ghost story or a semi-satirical social commentary, and it ended up feeling disjointed. Then there was the way that things just kinda... happened. These kids stumbled around getting drunk and arguing, and then when the spooky stuff kicked off, everyone just sort of carried on being drunk and arguing. It wasn't until nearly the end of the story that anything horrific happened, and after that it wrapped up very quickly. Overall, I enjoyed the concept and some of the atmospheric descriptions, but the story never came together as a cohesive whole.
dark tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Middle range. Nothing overly positive or negative to say. It was a book. I read it. That's all. 
dark tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

pretty underwhelming
emotional mysterious tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
dark fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No