3.06 AVERAGE


DNF

Writing was terrible and chaotic. Perspectives confusingly changed in the middle of a chapter without any indicators several times. And the abuser is given a pov which I reallyyyy didn’t like.

Vocabularies weren’t believable. At one point FMC calls herself a dunce?? Who does that in casual conversation???

It moved way too fast to be remotely believable and at times felt like terrible soap opera with the dialogue. Mind you, I only got about 15% in.
emotional hopeful fast-paced

Loved the storyline

I loved the storyline, however, there needs to be the character's POV subheading when it is in their POV, I had to figure out whose POV is was in most cases. But great storyline

I couldn't finish. The story had potential but it just doesn't flow nicely for me. Needs editing.