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Spin the Dawn by Elizabeth Lim

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vivelarevolution's review against another edition

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medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No

1.0

I loved this book when I was younger and I wanted to love it now. I mean, come on, magic and sewing and spinning and knitting! What could be more up my alley?

Unfortunately I found the ableism to be absolutely intolerable and the love interest to be frustratingly sexist. I hated how the main character pushed her disabled brother into taking "one step every day" while she was off on her adventure as if that isn't an incredibly fucked up thing to encourage a disabled person to do, and I hated that she (poorly) faked his disability in order to pretend to be him. I stopped reading when she got drunk and strange men goaded her love interest (who she was not in a relationship with yet) into kissing her and she kissed him on the cheek to attempt to satisfy this request without making herself uncomfortable and then he kissed her anyway. Like, what the hell? Also, I assume that her love interest is also a teenager, but there were some weird references to him maybe being immortal that made me wonder. I can't remember my first reading well enough to say for certain whether or not this relationship was straight up pedophilic.

Also, this is one of my more minor gripes, but why have the main character come out as a gay man while going out of your way to establish that her love interest knew her gender the entire time and therefore nothing about that relationship is actually queer? It's not funny or cute, it's just weird.

Also, introducing a whole (fake, but still) ethnic group as "barbarians" and then having the main character meet some and learn "they're not all barbarians"? That's sick.

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lags2much's review against another edition

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adventurous dark emotional mysterious sad slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.75

I really like the story but the pace is painfully slow. I wish the story were told in half the time. I’m very curious to learn how everything resolves but I’m kind of dreading the time commitment to get through the second book. 

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chrisljm's review against another edition

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adventurous medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.75

I didn’t dislike the romance but I did wish it was more of a slowburn. 

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justabnotherreader's review against another edition

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adventurous dark emotional mysterious
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes

5.0


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sofieishere's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional inspiring mysterious medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.25


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iwinatcookie's review against another edition

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adventurous dark emotional hopeful mysterious sad tense slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

2.0


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veeloucagraph's review

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adventurous fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

2.25

Every time that a fantasy book with unique setting and interesting world gets squashed by a boring romance, I lose my faith in YA. 

Mulan x Project Runway is a marketing ploy, the fashion competition disguised as a man ends before even the middle of the book and it turns into a romance fantasy quest. And to be fair, that would have been awesome if the love interest was not creepy and the romance didn't steal the protagonist's whole agency. 

I don't understand why there is this pattern of being attracted to old men with boy faces that stalk you. Edan literally is 500+ years old and stalks Maia from the moment she leaves to go to the palace for the competition. 

For a book that begins with a feminist approach, a woman wanting to prove herself as worthy as any man to become the Imperial tailor, she loses all interest in her passion as soon as she discovers the one for Edan. From that point, her dreams feel like a chore and all she wants is to be married to this man she's known for two months max, risking her life for him.

On that note, was her having these magical scissors really necessary? I struggled to form my own opinion on the matter but now that the book is over and we know she has magical ancestry, she has turned from a talented woman who wanted to be taken seriously to a chosen one. This defeated the whole purpose of equality and made her a magical being unbothered by others instead of a girl who wanted to fulfill her dreams despite society's disapproval. 

Despite the book being diverse in its portrayal of Asian culture, characters, and a character who poses as a man, it has undertones of anti-LGBT+. The concept of same-sex love is scandalous, and the protagonist detests having to partake in any romantic actions with girls, so much so that she finds relief in posing as a gay man. Edan himself is rumored to find pleasure in *young* men, which made his character all the more predatory in the beginning, but the implication that he is a bisexual man is simply dropped and we are led to believe those were just mean rumors. 

Now imagine how much more awesome the love story would have been if Maia had fallen for the Emperor and became best friends with Lady Sarnai. Having to sew the wedding dresses of your soul mate's wife who is also your best friend. Even better imagine this; having to sew the wedding dresses of the woman you love for her marriage to a man. 
So much tension lost and ignored, Lady Sarnai could have been so much more interestingly written, but despite the glimpses of her delicate heart we settle for her being a snobby b*tch because... the Lord Enchanter 500+ years old who stalks you is more interesting to think about. 


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lila_heart's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional funny hopeful inspiring mysterious sad fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

Absolutely beautiful 

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jj_tj's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional mysterious medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

4.0


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meghansarmiento97's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional mysterious reflective tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.25


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