Reviews with content warning for Physical abuse - The Sword of Kaigen

Probably the first book in 2024 that makes me spill tears with extra enormous effort to not let out a scream. It hurts me real bad. Everything flows perfectly. Even at the first chapter, I actually had a great time savoring the world-building, the terms, the magic with painstaking effort to go back and forth from the book to the glossary. Yes, I open it on another tab, but it was still a little bit of effort because I wanted to understand everything. It made me that interested and immersed in the story.

Since the very moment I read the way Mamoru jumped to go to his school, I know I love that boy.

And my biggest devastation comes from the way he stayed true to his name. To protect. Nyama to you, the Protector. Nyama to you, Son, Brother, Friend. Nyama to you, Soldier. You did your part. I love you so much.

And I absolutely head over heels for Misaki. My MOTHER.

The way everything unfolds leaves me with hunger. I need more. I need it. So I just read, read, read and then suddenly (not so sudden), everything that was once broken becomes better. Not the best. But better. Life, I suppose, does go that way. A little better than yesterday.

The Sword of Kaigen has every elements you can ask for in a fantasy book. A good world-building, a wonderful magic system (it is actually not that complicated once you take notes of it), a amazing characterization of all characters, a admirable relationship (of all kind, I mean it), a real plot, and the best ending you can ask for. It has been a long time since I actually finish a fantasy book with a new whole concept like this. A new world, though M.L. Wang seems to write it based on East Asian culture. Hard to grasp at first, but perfect when you get to understand it.

If you want a real good book to read to keep you focused in turning the pages as it hooks you in the story, The Sword of Kaigen is the best choice. Trust me. And also, may you will find this book as gorgeous as I find it, if you decide to pick it up, of course. Love you!

Nyama to you, my fellow reader.

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adventurous dark emotional hopeful inspiring reflective medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Plot
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? It's complicated
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.75

The Sword of Kaigan was such a joy to read. Right from the beginning I was captivated by the amazing world and characters. The pacing was great and I loved all the action but the most satisfying part for me was the incredible character development. The story was gut-wrenching and it is a heavy read but the author does give the reader some hope within all the bad and ugly which I loved as I think it is relatable to a lot of people to succumb to helplessness but Misaki shows us that despite all the darkness and tragedy you can still find light and happiness. The only reason I am not giving it a full 5 stars is because I felt the ending was slightly rushed but that may have also been me just not wanting it to end.

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Plot- or character-driven? Character
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

5.0

What a deeply emotional, cinematic story about purpose, family, duty, love, and protecting what you love and care about. This book has everything you could want from a fantasy with the highest amount of emotional impact (you will be sobbing). This world, its magic, and the people that inhabit it were so clearly thought out and established, and you really do love each moment we have with not only main characters, but everyone along the way. Wow wow WOW

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Plot- or character-driven? Character
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.75

The pen man ship was like a dance, rhythmic and well articulated. I think I can compliment this book for its deep characters and there are many, by no means the author had a small cast and all characters got brilliant character arcs. For a character driven book the plot was great, to be honest I wish to see some cast again but sadly, the author says this series is discontinued. The author has great skills but they need to get a real editor.

The only issue for me was the ending. Why must you leave us with so many unanswered question, why?

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Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? It's complicated
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

I read this in december of 2022. I have deadass cried once a month since about this book whenever I think about it. This shi not for the weak💀

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4.25

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Plot- or character-driven? Character
Strong character development? It's complicated
Loveable characters? It's complicated
Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.0

Everyone considers this book a masterpiece. I found it profoundly average. 😐

Don’t get me wrong: the world, magic and characters were interesting. And the plot sounds incredible! A boy raised to be a fighter realizing the empire he was ready to die for has been lying to its citizens for decades? The boy’s demure mother secretly being an incredible fighter? A war starting without warning and the mother and son fighting in it? It all sounds amazing on paper!!!

Emphasis on “on paper” , though… Because in reality the pacing of this story truly kills its intrigue. In the first third of the book the only things that happen are: Mamoru realizes the empire lies to its citizens, we learn Misaki was a fighter in her past, and Misaki shows her fighting abilities to her son. Other than this, all we get are some EXTREMELY clunky pieces of world-building (long monologues, a lady telling an old story, and classroom history lessons detailing everything the reader needs to know about the history of this world are not a great way of doing the exposition, btw 😬). Here's the thing: the stuff we got WAS interesting! But I’m sorry: 230+ pages into a book and only 3 “substantial” things happened??? That’s insane.

After those ~230 pages we FINALLY get something! Their village gets attacked by another country and they have to fight. And then the fight goes on for 100+ pages……………… 😐 Listen. I was happy *SOMETHING* was finally happening, but MY GOD………. A 100+ page fight scene was waaaaaayyyy too much! There were definitely interesting things in that chunk of the book (

uncle Takashi dying, Misaki grabbing her hidden sword and killing a bunch of super powerful soldiers, Mamoru mastering the whispering blade and then dying?!?!?!

)!!!!!! But I definitely think that sequence as a whole was way longer than necessary, and a lot of it felt like padding. It was even worse because of the whiplash I got while reading the book: 230 pages of basically nothing happening followed by 100 pages of non-stop fight scene… It just didn’t work for me, unfortunately.

We then get the aftermath of the battle, which I enjoyed: seeing the trauma these people have after losing their loved ones, the village being destroyed, the government clearly not caring about them, people realizing that the government is shady… It was all very interesting. But, once again, it went on for waaaaay too long, with very few “substantial” things actually happening –

Misaki mourns Mamoru, Misaki’s friend Hyori commits suicide after birthing a child who’s father was the soldier who raped her, Misaki fights Takeru as a way to “open his eyes”, Takeru gets a stupid redemption arc (I’ll elaborate on that later because what the fuck?????), Misaki’s brother shows up, people start slowly rebuilding the village…

]. These are all interesting things! But like…….. the fight scene ends at 54%, and the next TRULY INTRIGUING (imo) thing that happens takes place at 81%! It took 170 pages for something that actually captivated me to happen, after that damn fight scene!

Actually, for some reason, most of the interesting things happen at the end of the book (and they’re never really expounded upon…).

A shapeshifting spy/assassin shows up and tries to kill the MCs + a child is kidnapped (and then this spy is only brought up again 60 pages later…… 😑); Robin (Misaki’s boyfriend from school) shows up saying his wife might’ve been killed by a mythical blood puppeteer and asks Misaki to try the technique on him; he reveals the child who was kidnapped is going to be used by some bad guy who is trying to create an army of powerful thonites…

] THAT ALL SOUNDS SO INTERESTING???? ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!?!?! I wanna learn more about that!!!!!!!!!!! Why would you only drop those super cool things at the very end of the book???? And, mind you, none of those plot points are explored in any way! They’re just mentioned and instantly dropped. It felt like the author was setting up for some kind of sequel, but it just didn’t work at all for me, because after reading 500 pages of a very mediocre story, the author decided to tease me with what COULD’VE been an *actually interesting* book! The disrespect!!! 😒😒😒 Also, the fact that we only learn about the war at the 85% mark (only for it to never be explored in any way) is absurd, but I digress… I understand that this is supposed to be *A* war story, so it makes sense the author didn’t show much of… anything else, honestly?? But that doesn’t make this story better, and it didn’t make it any less infuriating when the author kept teasing me with a better story.

So… yeah. The story didn’t work at all for me. 😐 I genuinely don’t understand why people keep praising this author’s writing. It isn’t terrible, sure (I enjoyed the emotional scenes, the world and magic system were cool), but it sure as hell isn’t great 🤨. The pacing was a MESS and the book was full of really long, boring sections; the world-building was ridiculously amateurish (dozens of pages of history class, woman telling an old story, and never-ending monologues, are you kidding me???); there were lots of typos (I’ll forgive it bc this is self-published)… I also found all of these problems in Wang’s newest book “Blood Over Bright Haven” and now I’m wondering if terrible pacing and expository monologues are this author’s signature… Yikes. 😬😬😬 Another thing I didn’t like about the writing: the narrator would randomly “spoil” things??? This only happened a couple of times, but it really took me out of the story. Like, suddenly the narrator would just say something like “What Mamoru didn’t know was that his own mother was hiding a super special sword in their house” (which is something that only comes up in the actual plot several chapters later), or “Hiroshi would master the whispering blade a decade later” (this doesn’t even happen in the book)…. These just always felt really random, idk… 🫤

Now for the characters. I enjoyed Mamoru’s story the most – him slowly realizing the empire was lying to its citizens and having to grapple with what that means was super interesting (it’s a shame we didn’t see more of that story…). Misaki was cool. Knowing she had a badass vigilante past but was forced to hide it after accepting to marry into a family who basically didn’t view women as human beings was interesting, but also very infuriating (I just wanted her to get the fuck out of there lol). It was *extra* infuriating because, once again, the author teases us with what could be an interesting story, but then settles for the boring story. 😐 I 10000% would’ve rather seen Misaki’s past in her fighting school and working as a vigilante with her foreign friends. Also, Robin was sooo much better than Takeru!!! It almost felt insulting to get a glimpse of Robin at the end, only to be forced to accept Takeru as Misaki’s forever partner. 🤢

Speaking of which: I don’t like Takeru. He spent *15 years* mistreating Misaki: not talking to her, ignoring her emotional distress after she had multiple miscarriages, lowkey raping her, letting his father beat her, intercepting letters from her friends to completely isolate her, not helping her take care of their children + also mistreating them… the list goes on. And after all that time, Misaki tells him off for not protecting Mamoru and she duels him, and THAT’S what gets him to start “accepting her”?????? (Not even *respecting*! The word they use is “ACCEPTING”)????????? Fuckin pardon???? 🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨 I’m reeeeeally fucking sorry (I’m not sorry at all), but you’re NOT going to make me like this man just because he decided to “accept” Misaki after 15 YEARS of mistreating her and their children! Him having a sad home life because his parents didn’t like each other and he didn’t want that to happen to him and Misaki so he decided to just mistreat her anyways is a really bad way of explaining his actions (not like I would’ve been happy with any excuse, by the way; he sucks regardless). The author trying to give him a redemption arc just doesn’t sit right with me. Your parents didn’t like each other? Boohoo. You’re a grown ass man and you abused your wife for 15 years. I want you dead. 🤷🏻‍♀️ Another reviewer responded to his excuse of ~dissociating into the mountain to get away from his emotions~ with “If he's the mountain bring me the military grade TNT stat” , and I just think that sums up my thoughts.

Random thing: the fact that the map of this world is basically just an upside-down map of *our* world (and the countries pretty much line up) is pretty interesting.

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4.75

I know virtually everyone I've seen read this didn't read the original Theonite books first, but I definitely think it's the way to go! The story connected with me more than it might have without the context of the Theonite series.

Style/writing: 4.5 stars
Themes: 4.5 stars
Characters: 5 stars
Plot: 5 stars
Worldbuilding: 4.5 stars

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