3.41 AVERAGE

funny relaxing

The other reviews weren't wrong. 

honestly just kinda dropped off at the end 
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3.5
lighthearted medium-paced

Slow beginning, but the HEA was worth it. I need a Jeremy in my life! 

Not bad story wise in the first half but the Cole issue seemed like it was going to be a lot more serious and turned out to be nothing. Kinda wish the second half had more of a story line other than mostly spicy scenes but that’s just me 
emotional funny medium-paced
funny hopeful lighthearted relaxing medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

This was too cute. I loved the beginning where Daisy knocked on Jeremy’s door because his food smelled so good. What a fun way to meet each other. I didn’t really get the mini drama with Cole I thought it was a bit unneeded. 

Was not okay with the similarities to Jillian West's existing omegaverse stories most specificity Knot Many Options and Knot Ready.
funny lighthearted fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

This OV was cute and the writing was decent. I liked the characters and the meet cute for Daisy and Jeremy was cute and funny.

However, for being labeled a “hockey” book, there really wasn’t anything about hockey in it other than the fact that Jeremy was a hockey player. That was literally it. We got no first hand experiences with hockey practice, games or his teammate or anything to do with his hockey fame. 

I also did not like her constant referral to her baby as a “parasite.” That was very odd and strange. 

Last negative, while I felt that there was decent relationship building between Daisy and Jeremy, I felt there was little to none between her and Nate and Devon. 

So in conclusion, this was a cute, easy read but definitely could use some improvements.